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MULTIVERSE & NARUTO WITH GACHA SYSTEM AND KAKASHI
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this fanfiction is original.
any type of comment is acceptable.
give suggestions, ideas, etc.
your comments are needed to make it better.
anything used in this fanfiction belong to original owner.
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The premise is good but there too much unnecessary wording. Typical of AI assisted writing. The author should consider doing a complete rewrite without more authentic writing.
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Cous pouvez mettre le lien ou le nom du roman original s'il vous plaรฎt ๐ฅฐ๐ช๐ป๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ช๐ป๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ช๐ป๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ช๐ป๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ช๐ป๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ช๐ป๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ช๐ป๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ช๐ป๐ช๐ป๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ช๐ป๐๐ช๐ป๐๐ช๐ป๐ช๐ป๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ช๐ป๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ช๐ป๐ช๐ป๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ช๐ป๐ช๐ป
its good so far you should read it in my opinion cause there aren't many fan fic where the mc is kakashi