One Piece: Reborn as a Fishman (COMPLETED)

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HolyJoker

Sup, the author here. This is my One Piece story. The MC will be a little different from the usual MC's that I write, but at the same time it will have the same type of feeling. Anyway, hope ya like it... P.S: I forgot to write a review on my own story... someone did it before me and that is when I remembered.🤣

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Kokushibou

Ah, im the first! HAHAHA anyway, i know this is going to be good. Don't dissapoint my expectations for this ff HolyJoker.................................

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Sh1tGod

patron here, the first couple of chapter are not that good cause he wrote it months ago but its better than a lot of fics here so don't drop it straight away

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animadrop

For better or worse, it is a completed story. Gonna point out some things so people don't start this only to quickly drop again: - The writing quality is very mediocre. Some grammar errors and the story telling/writing style are meh. Not for people expecting hq stuff, but then again you wouldn't look for fanfictions here if that was the case. - The story development is extremely boring, to the point where I ask myself why I even stuck around past those initial chapters. More beneath. - The character design is also rather boring, with a dearth of good development. - The world background does not make much sense when contrasted with the canon of One Piece. If you could simply get the devilfruit of someone dying by putting a couple of fruits at his side, then the world government would have no need to keep pirates inprisoned in the eternal hell in impel down, and could have long since gathered all strong fruits... Plenty other such plotholes Over-all I would say it is a less than mediocre fanficion. Unfortunately we get told several times more than we get shown in this fanfiction. Most obvious in the case where the author feels he has to basically summarize the chapter and tell us what is 'shown' in it at the end of every chapter. The chapters at times also feel very short and have a bad proportion of chapter to advertisement and other stuff the author puts inside every chapter. Continue reading if you don't mind slight spoilers, even if they become quite clear early on: SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER Basically, our MC gets reincarnated into One Piece as a Fishman some years before the Great Age of pirates. Wefollow him on his journey where he aims to grow stronger and later overthrow the world government to take its place without reasonable motivation. It has more of watching a robot do a task it doesn't have a reason to do apart from its master (the author) telling it to do it. Pretty quickly it turns into making Jaw (the MC) the new 'Big Mom' by fathering many children and thus taking the world over with them. A flat 2 stars for the story, but it actually got completed so now it is 2.8. Sorry @HolyJoker but you could use quite some work on pretty much everything that concerns writing a story. Just my opinion tho, I am sure there are plenty who loved it. There were some good parts but given the huuuge slowdown in releases towards the end and the overwhelming amount of not so good parts I can't really remember them.

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YummyNum

An entertaining story to read. Fight scenes are good,OC's are enjoyable to read. I just think the main character get Op too fast maybe? It hasn't felt like he struggled a lot and the story lacks a bit of twists and drama. It's a bit like a wish fulfilment. And i hoped the mc would be involved with some of the side stories among the one piece world.I mean one piece has a huge worldbuilding and there are many many plotlines. The main character isn't a beta though and there are interactions with other yonkous and a little with world goverment. There are many fights and they are fairly well done in my opinion. Author's powerscaling of the one piece characters are logical. The biggest plusses for me: 1- It does not follow the canon so you wont have to reread the already done stuff.2-Main character is not a moron. Overall:A little flat and lack twists but still entertaining enough.

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prince_awesome

read the first chapter and ...... I'm speechless, so much potential , and lots of hot mermaids in your area . not to forget the fact that the author has already proven himself capable of creating a masterpiece . so i have high expectations 🙌🏽🙌🏽😁😁🔥🔥

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malinizgeldii

joker, this is the 3rd novel I've read where you treat women like garbage. especially naruto and that is unbelievably hostile. I'm leaving naruto and this unfinished. I hope the 5th novel I've read of your novels passes thinking that women are garbage. I don't want to believe that you are such a disgraceful person. I think the 5th novel will make that clear.

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DaoOfGay

5/5 I like your fanfics, dear joker. I really do. Now, I must say some things: Jaw's character is something that I at first found a little interesting and different from other characters you wrote before, but it grew on me, it did. Ps: Tags SelFISH protagonist.

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MrYamcha

The fact that the author is holyjoker and this is a fanfic with a Fishman of makes it deserve a 5 star rating .

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Dinant

This author sure knows how to use the same character but in different settings. I am uninterested in your sociopaths, but as it can be seen, there are a lot of lobotomized people that sure do.

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MessyLife

Love the story. It even inspired me to write my own. Also Yes... I am doing this for the Exp... forgot the password to my Lvl 5 account. And being an Author at Lvl 1 feels shameful.😭

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JaxWolf4

I have never been disappointed with this author before. All of the stories that he creates are awesome. That includes this One Piece fanfic. There are 42 chapters from the time of this review, and they are perfect. Now, for an honest review. (I'm going to rate based on chapter 1-42) Writing Quality: The writing quality of this book is great. There are a few typos here and there, but it doesn't get in the way of the storytelling like some other fanfics do. Stability of Updates: Uh, there are 42 chapters for this book already. Nuff said. Story Development: Some parts feel dragged out, such as a chapter or two later, when it feels slow. Other then those two chapters, it is developing greatly and is very interesting. Character Design: The MC is VERY likable. Joker (author) does a great job when it comes to his MC's and doesn't make them seem fake. World Background: There is a mention of everything going on around the world with his kids, the marines, yonko, etc. so you aren't confused as to what impact some of his actions have on the story. All in all, a great read, and I HIGHLY suggest getting the later chapters on his Patreon. I couldn't wait for the chapters, and I am not disappointed. Take these 5 stars, my good sir.

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Jasonenrick

Well, HolyJoker is always a good read, so here we are 5-Stars! Now I have to fill the rest of the remaining words to get the word cound up to 140 so..... Who is white and who is blue... Well, a fishman in One Piece..f*ck you

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YBN_Uknown

I got to say this is absolutely great I actually enjoy and look forward to reading the next chapter keep up the good work👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

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Dotencsure

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nnn

Writing is an art. Giving 1 star to a story is akin throwing rotten eggs to a painting just because you don't like it. Please note that you don't pay to read this fanfic. Just like someone offering you his cooking, you don't spit it on his face and said to other 'don't eat his cooking, it taste bad' Don't get me wrong, critics are good, but telling others to not read it is just as bad as killing ideas Reply here…

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bluepumpkin_315

first 3 chaps and already loving the development of the story, heres hoping he doesnt eat a devil fruit i really think it will be more of a restriction than beneficial to him cause his a fishman and all

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Nightmare_Monarch

Ngl you’re acc one of the best fanfic author!😂 Now that hxh ff is done, are you reallyyyy gonna complete One Piece ff because i know you’re gonna make a good one on this and nowadays ppl rarely complete the one piece ff. So i hope you’ll make a long one on this one and complete it in the future. I mean hxh has 55 chapters while naruto has 200 but one piece😂😂😂idk how many chapters are you gonna complete

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ToothlessS

Yeah, B*tches! I didn't have the first review but my review definitely got it rated as a five-star novel! Anyways it got ruthless and opportunistic MC tags, so it instantly got my attention. As for content, I can say that it is definitely good... cue to Joker's other works. And honestly, I quite like the concept. And that Kisame Cover... noice!

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Master4thWall

Almost had an orgasm, reading this book... 🤣🤣Anyway, can't really judge it, since its just 1 chapter. But you can expect great things from this, due to Sir Authours' other stories. Read, this story if you love Cold Mc's.😝