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Legend Slayers

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It’s time for humanity to fall and the city of Laserath is a wonderful place for the Chars to start it all.

Legends slaughtering humanity stalk the walls of human cities. Cities guarded by magic barriers and energy guns. Places where children learn to fight, to defend themselves, and at fifteen that child must choose the path their life will take.

That’s what Centra, DJ, Liza, and Jasper did. But not all children got to choose.

Kyrie trained from the day he was born, for when Kyrie loses control cities turn to craters. He failed to protect his home from an English Dragon. Now he has a new life, a new team, perhaps new friends but his new start is in Laserath and the Chars are already there.

note: I'm publishing the full books elsewhere with professional editing (probably Amazon). Please enjoy the teasers posted here and look out for the official full release starting in 2021.

update: the book art is here!!! The first book will be off for proof reading by October 31st! :)

Updated 11-2-2020

Book website: https://www.legendslayers.com/home

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Kimberleyy

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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

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0BlackStar0

não sei quem e o protagonista,só fico com tudo isso de estrela pela boa escrita, desenvolvimento geral da equipe e bom mais só fica neles deixo o novel com potencial baixo pra evoluí,se no futuro vc corrigir isso fala na 3° pessoa,

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creativewritting

Hi. So, I'm the author. (The above scores are definitely biased :) ) I plan to try some things that are new to me in this novel. One is a mix of perspectives, such as third person omniscient, third person limited, and first person. If this get's confusing at any point please reply to me here and tell me where it's confusing so I can fix it. Also, I'm not very experienced with combat scenes. I usually do a recap of what happened during the fight. For this novel, I want to show the actual fight and can definitely use any input you have in regards to fight scenes. If you have any other recommendations, comments, or questions feel free to give a reply! :)

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