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não sei quem e o protagonista,só fico com tudo isso de estrela pela boa escrita, desenvolvimento geral da equipe e bom mais só fica neles deixo o novel com potencial baixo pra evoluí,se no futuro vc corrigir isso fala na 3° pessoa,
Hi. So, I'm the author. (The above scores are definitely biased :) ) I plan to try some things that are new to me in this novel. One is a mix of perspectives, such as third person omniscient, third person limited, and first person. If this get's confusing at any point please reply to me here and tell me where it's confusing so I can fix it. Also, I'm not very experienced with combat scenes. I usually do a recap of what happened during the fight. For this novel, I want to show the actual fight and can definitely use any input you have in regards to fight scenes. If you have any other recommendations, comments, or questions feel free to give a reply! :)
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Reincarnate as Prince:Change Magical World with Industry. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! htt**://rb.gy/sxwmsa
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
não sei quem e o protagonista,só fico com tudo isso de estrela pela boa escrita, desenvolvimento geral da equipe e bom mais só fica neles deixo o novel com potencial baixo pra evoluí,se no futuro vc corrigir isso fala na 3° pessoa,
Hi. So, I'm the author. (The above scores are definitely biased :) ) I plan to try some things that are new to me in this novel. One is a mix of perspectives, such as third person omniscient, third person limited, and first person. If this get's confusing at any point please reply to me here and tell me where it's confusing so I can fix it. Also, I'm not very experienced with combat scenes. I usually do a recap of what happened during the fight. For this novel, I want to show the actual fight and can definitely use any input you have in regards to fight scenes. If you have any other recommendations, comments, or questions feel free to give a reply! :)
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Reincarnate as Prince:Change Magical World with Industry. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! htt**://rb.gy/sxwmsa