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In TVD/TO as Kol Mikaelson
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so I am writing this fanfic to improve my craft as well as understanding complex characters so i hope u guys enjoy
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Transmigrating as Kol Mikaelson is not something i expected not when I am expected to die by next season I need to live and enjoy this life. I should be unpredictable gotta live up to the legend as THE WILY ONE.
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the vampire diaries the originals and the legacies belong to their respective owners i only own my own spin of the story.
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Besides the rather Eh grammar. The actual plot is pretty freaking good. The author got Kol rather spot on, and some of the explanations for stuff like magic, is pretty interesting and plausible. The only hope I have is that the author gives him a halfway decent love interest (or love interests) like Bonnie, Davina, or even Caroline. (Or two of them if they want)
This is fun. I'm loving the personality of the characters. I can feel the distinctness of each. The writing formatting isn't my favorite and could potentially be improved upon more but, I like it. This story has a lot of potential and I hope you continue and improve.
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I like the smoothness of the rewrite I look forward to the continuation and hope to see mc go to another world of magic like charmed to see how it would go or another magical world like teen Wolf to see what happened with The originals in those worlds
this is purely tradition and self motivation kindly give reviews and tell me where to improve I will probably release more chapters today