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Ronnet Connington SI
4.38 (29 peringkat)
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Here is the story of an SI in the shoes of a minor character well unknown in the books and completely unknown in the Ronnet Connington series, Jon Connington's nephew, let's see how this new Ronnet will overcome all the obstacles that will stand in his way.
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the development is limited to small excerpts explaining what the MC did, his actions are without rhyme or reason and he can change his thoughts at any time, overall this story gave me a great feeling of "disorder".
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Interesting premise using a character from a house that isnโt common. Writing so far seems solid and the path taken by the MC so far is cool interested to see how the war of 5 kings will play out.
I know that many say mc is simp but I like where this going . many say he not alpha but you must know this fanfiction people read fanfiction for forget the hard days of life and be entertained
It's an amazing story, and the last chapter has me on my end. I can't wait for the updatees
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Certain chapitres ne sont pas assez long, l'auteur a รฉtรฉ prevenu sur patreon et a changer la donne. YA BEAUCOUP d'avance la bas et ces pas cher donc foncer.
FILLED with inconsistencies and the progression is painful. MC just waves his hand and poof โi invented automated steam engine factory producing me the dozens of products i invented!โ If your capable of temporarily labotomizing yourself I would recommend. (this was a very rude review sorry about that)
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The author obviously did not put much thought in writing this story. The pacing,,the explanations, the dialogues and the narrative of the story is just not put together well. 4/10
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recomendada, siga con el buen trabajo, pero incremente el ritmo de publicaciones si no es mucho pedir, cuenta con mis piedras si asรญ sera jeje
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Kind of boring since the novel just goes in circles and characters just revert to their old ways despite spending years with the MC who was very close to them. Feel like the story was a rush job.