Golias

Golias

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2018-04-10 Bergabung Global
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Golias
Golias
13 days ago
Commented

That doesn't make sense, carrying a chakra paper with you is already strange enough, but assuming that by chance she would carry it with her at that moment, chakra papers are extremely reactive to chakra, which means that a measly fragment of that energy would make the paper react, Kurenai is a ninja, she releases chakra practically all the time, even if she doesn't, if other people's chakra touches her during training or a fight, like her students', it would still react, in the end, the chance of her carrying a chakra paper with her for nothing, having to be careful with it all the time, is incredibly low.

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Golias
Golias
14 days ago
Commented

The biggest reason why they prefer to use reincarnation for fanfics is because an adult mind already understands the advantages of starting early, seeing a random child start training on his own is... strange, at the very least he should get tired, give up and go play somewhere, it's the difference between Bakugo, who practically played his entire childhood and Todoroki, who was forced to train by his father. Not that it's unreadable or impossible, but if more unlikely things continue to happen it will only take away from the "reality" of the story.

Golias
Golias
14 days ago
Commented

wow... Yuta did... I did..., choose one bro

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Golias
Golias
19 days ago
Posted

Hmm... I'll be direct because overall I enjoyed the book. The MC is a little genius who wants to graduate early in Naruto. That already says a lot for those who have read many Naruto fanfics. At the age of 5, the MC had already created several useful ninjutsus for war, acted as the center of attention, defeating the genius Uchiha Shisui on the first day of school, defeating an Uchiha within the Uchiha clan, having the support of the elders, who are shocked by several jutsus created by the MC and his unmatched talent. Well... I could swallow it if that was all, but he's going to jump through the classes, showing his genius more and more... To be fair, that's not so bad, but when I started reading a Yamanaka story, I expected an intelligent MC growing up little by little, not the typical Chinese trope of a genius MC who slaps you in the face. not even the trope of MC who creates Pizza and Hamburger in the Eastern world, in addition to "creating" Western instruments and etc... that's it, you can read it if it interests you.

Golias
Golias
Golias
1 months ago
Posted

I feel like the MC has little sense of presence, at first it was ok, but the more time passes, the more boring it gets. Klein appears too much, the plot of the tower built by Roselle is even more boring, the interaction with women is to get close without ever touching, the MC seems very Buddhist, Klein steals his things and he's ok, Klein steals his information and uses it to make money in front of him and he's ok, even the book that the MC asked the fool to check out was "censored" by Klein just because he used the relevant information to pretend at the tarot club, but the MC just shrugs it off without caring, the MC can get good things, like Creeping Hunger, but he just looks on without caring, overall he seems more like a passerby in his own story. Mc doesn't seem to have any desires or interests other than "participating" in the story as a passerby and advancing his own sequence.

Golias
Golias
1 months ago
Replied to GatchaJoe

Grazie

Buku ini telah dihapus.
Golias
Golias
1 months ago
Replied to asterisk_ism

Hi, can you tell me if there is romance?

Golias
Golias
2 months ago
Commented

If I'm not mistaken, Klein clearly says that the disguise of the faceless one in the mushroom glove can only change the appearance, I don't remember if it's when he becomes a faceless or when he releases the faceless from the glove, but I remember him saying.

Golias
Golias
2 months ago
Commented

All this "comedy" is losing its charm very quickly, it's like enhancing the bad characteristics to the point of being mocking, in the original Roselle was never so explicit, I understand that Klein may not have found the right pages, but please, this kind of comedy only takes away the seriousness that a LOTM fanfic should have, it may just be my personal opinion, but as a straight person, I can't stand reading about pink men's nipples and men sucking dicks anymore.