I want to say that this fanfic has made me very happy. My nigga is getting that geralt of rivia treatment for being a pervert even though he is a changed man. Consequences. I love how his death actually affected him unlike many other fics that I will not name. I also like that while the gamer aspect is important, characters are also being developed. Obviously, I would like rias to grow stronger and stuff. She has potential. Maybe you could take a page from the gamer manhwa and let her party with him. It would be cool to see a more developed rias rather than the princess in the castle we got. Wow though, you've impressed me.
this is fun
just delete the chapters and change the title to xxxx or something
this is gud
I just want to say that this is fun. The main character has been written very well and the sidecharacters are fun too. I just want to ask, will you give mina and mia a chance to shine without tomaru because he's been protecting them to an extent, filling the gaps and I wonder if that is good for a strategist like Mina. I do really like the story. I've never seen naruto lose an arm before. That was cool. Good job author
This is a great story. Like a really fun one. When I saw wolverine, I was usure because varys and the maester hate anything magical and I thought that this would be a crack-fic but you have proven me wrong. It is good. The main character is written very well. My main question is what is the main character's goal? Is he trying to take over westeros because I'm wondering how alicent will fit in. I like her as a character but it feels like she has to die since this isn't a harem, or maybe not. I just think that there'll be questions of legitimacy if he doesn't marry a noble of some kind. I get that he has a powerbase but people can poison his loved. What happens if Elia pays faceless men to kill Alicent because she is the reason that she can't get with galahad or what if his group betrays him? I don't really like harems but I think that it would fit in this story. Maybe cersei or something. These are all just suggestions. Take them with a grain of salt. Your writing is sgood and you've managed to hide his powers very well. I can't wait to see how it all goes. So far, five stars.
He is an outsider. He literally had to save everyone during the pain arc to be finally accepted by the villagers. What are you saying? The swing scenes. No one liked him. Everyone either thought he was annoying or feared him(This led to him wanting to be seen which turned him into a prankster just for the sake of attention because people would just ignore him and glare.) Even Iruka hated naruto until he realized that naruto was just like him. He was an outsider. Kushina was more accepted than he was. Naruto would like kushina's life. I could continue on. Just because he smiles doesn't mean he's happy.
The best way to help Kushina integrate into Konoha was simple: let her make genuine friends, feel the warmth of family and friendship, and gradually see herself as part of Konoha. Imprisonment and surveillance would be the most incompetent strategy.
Naruto: Reborn with the Tenseigan
Anime & Comics · Edward_Caine
This shit is too wholesome. So take your time like your mc dude or dudette or theydette or whatever. Be like poseidon. Go with the flow. You're a good writer. Your work's fun.
What author?
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original Curse The Darkness BTVS SI
Dude dies and gets reincarnated in Buffy The Vampire Slayer. IDK what else to say, I've always been shit at writing a synopsis.(Plz Review) Long Chaps: 4-5K Warning: This story is dark. If you want a fun-loving character, this is not the story to read. P.S. (I wrote this story already(posted it on qq) and I am just posting it here for more feedback so that I can improve. The 13 chaps are it.) Please enjoy it though.14 Chs 148 Koleksi
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Reborn In Avatar LOK
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I forgot the password of my other account, Avatar LOK so I'll be posting here. Gon gets reincarnated in the Avatar world and has to try and get stronger from there on out.28 Chs 3.1k Koleksi
Sensing the spirit of his partner rising, Ddraig shot all the barrier's power straight into his host as Issei got up and clenched his fists before screaming in rage. "I WILL NOT LET YOU DESTROY MY LIFE!"
DXD Issei: The Mind of Games
Anime & Comics · DatBoiEraser