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so I decided to edit the story, (really this time), add a bit more detail, correct some grammar, and make the overall story make sense. I might add and take out some details if necessary. I can't guarantee anything but know that I will try.
[note: if this gets more views and reaches 1M, I am going to release a side story explaining why Rala is missing all of the memories from his childhood until the event of Spiderman homecoming.
I might also explain what happened to the rest of the sinister six, what happened to Mefisto, and show just how Rala lost his memories in a fight against a horde of enemies that would destroy the MCU universe as we know, this would hopefully show just how much different is the universe that rala is in compared to the actual mcu universe. ]
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rara is someone that just wants to relax and reads the book without being troubled. but what we usually try to avoid just finds its way back to us.
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now this fanfic will follow the MCU timeline and I won't be changing much.
I haven't finished editing this but I just published it anyways. the other chapters will not be like this and will be edited.
I have the general plot in mind so don't expect any major changes like giving the mc new powers, if you are looking for a crazy/good plot twist, then this is not for you, plus this is not a wish fulfillment.
also, this is my first time posting fanfic, so just go easy on me.
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Bruh r u fking kidding me bruv he literally change nothing. NOTHING. Y are u even writing this fanfic, if u had the idea of showing a taking cat/bird/bear y r u even in marvel make a normal novel.
The story seem to be a bit force and also short in each chapter with how average chapter released in each week
Great job has much more potential with a bit of editing ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Itโs ok, you give constant updates. I like that. However quality wise they could do better. World building is nice but a little plain. Character design is plain. Story is a little plain, but a few details here and there should make it better. Its good, it just needs a little more thought.
great although about forced .....................................................................,....... w w... .. . .. . . . . ..
Ok people don't expect some plot twist this ff follow the mcu timeline starting from spiderman homecoming i don't know for the future plot but its just your typical marvel ff with no change to timeline and to passive But he have a cool power and read it i don't wanna spoil you at that part at least the author give him not so op boring or weak ability.
Why doesnt this fix have a ranking yet? It's clearly better than the rest of the marvel fic that I have read in this platform... But yeah, needs quite a bit of editing. But anyway, nice work bro...๐๐๐๐๐
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