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Marvel : Strongest Siblings
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Max Ryder, an ordinary teenager with dreams of adventure, finds himself facing an unexpected twist of fate when he dies in a tragic accident. However, instead of fading into oblivion, Max awakens in the perilous world of Marvel, where superheroes and villains clash in epic battles. Alongside him is his younger sister, Lumia Ryder, a bright and resourceful girl who holds her own untapped potential.
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Intro is weak, try it and you will love it.
Harem : Check
OP : Check
Fun : Check
Hero : Check
Powerful allies : Check
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I've read quite a few chapters, but these chapters showed me that the main character is dumb, and why he's dumb, because he had a chance to summon any character of a hero or a villain, but he summoned a weak, mentally ill character. But this is only the beginning , and degradation is already taking place .
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Great idea/picture you are trying to build. I love the characters and the powers they are getting, and thinking of what characters would do with their abilities is exciting. But this story loses when it comes to development, everything seems rushed. And loses a lot of the tension in characters developing an ability slowly and starting of mid and getting better as the story develops. I have a lot of hope for this fanfic and that it would be great if author decides to further expand it. So far enjoying the creativity, thanks👌
hey guys, it's me , and with another fanfic, you might find first chap slightly similar to my other one, but everything else is different here and this one is better, just give it a try and you will love it.