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It’s ok, you give constant updates. I like that. However quality wise they could do better. World building is nice but a little plain. Character design is plain. Story is a little plain, but a few details here and there should make it better. Its good, it just needs a little more thought.
great although about forced .....................................................................,....... w w... .. . .. . . . . ..
Ok people don't expect some plot twist this ff follow the mcu timeline starting from spiderman homecoming i don't know for the future plot but its just your typical marvel ff with no change to timeline and to passive But he have a cool power and read it i don't wanna spoil you at that part at least the author give him not so op boring or weak ability.
Why doesnt this fix have a ranking yet? It's clearly better than the rest of the marvel fic that I have read in this platform... But yeah, needs quite a bit of editing. But anyway, nice work bro...👌😁😁👌👍
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Great job has much more potential with a bit of editing 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Bruh r u fking kidding me bruv he literally change nothing. NOTHING. Y are u even writing this fanfic, if u had the idea of showing a taking cat/bird/bear y r u even in marvel make a normal novel.
well because I am the writer ........................................................................................................
The story seem to be a bit force and also short in each chapter with how average chapter released in each week
It’s ok, you give constant updates. I like that. However quality wise they could do better. World building is nice but a little plain. Character design is plain. Story is a little plain, but a few details here and there should make it better. Its good, it just needs a little more thought.
great although about forced .....................................................................,....... w w... .. . .. . . . . ..
Ok people don't expect some plot twist this ff follow the mcu timeline starting from spiderman homecoming i don't know for the future plot but its just your typical marvel ff with no change to timeline and to passive But he have a cool power and read it i don't wanna spoil you at that part at least the author give him not so op boring or weak ability.
Why doesnt this fix have a ranking yet? It's clearly better than the rest of the marvel fic that I have read in this platform... But yeah, needs quite a bit of editing. But anyway, nice work bro...👌😁😁👌👍
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Great job has much more potential with a bit of editing 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Bruh r u fking kidding me bruv he literally change nothing. NOTHING. Y are u even writing this fanfic, if u had the idea of showing a taking cat/bird/bear y r u even in marvel make a normal novel.
well because I am the writer ........................................................................................................
The story seem to be a bit force and also short in each chapter with how average chapter released in each week