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I am Invincible; Literally [One Punch Man in Marvel]
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One Punch.
That's all it takes for me to beat them.
It doesn't matter how 'Strong' and 'Angry' they are....
It doesn't matter how cool their supposed 'Weapons' or 'Shields' are supposed to be....
It doesn't matter even if they are considered 'Gods' in other people's eyes....
In the end it always comes down to a single punch.
I always wanted to be strong....
Strong enough to defeat my opponent in just One Punch.
Finally, I am fully capable of doing so....
But I feel bored.
I wanted to be strong didn't I?
Then why does my heart feel so empty?
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This is going to be my second time writing a story, with my first one being a story which I started writing not even a month ago....soooooo you can say that I am pretty much a novice in writing.
I know there will be grammatical errors and plot holes but I still tried my best.
I just hope you guys like this.
And the cover is not mine....
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Writing quality is decent. Not the best as some grammar and spelling errors are there, but really easy to read. The updates are not on a set or regular schedule. They come out with huge gaps between some and others really close. The story develops REALLY SLOWLY! Nothing has really happenedโฆ the time it takes One Punch Man to explain his back story is essentially all of the current 12 chapters. The story is literally a rip off of one punch with a marvel setting. Unique but lazy choice. The MC does not come off as a Saitama, more like a ghetto version. The other brief character appearances so far are basic. There isnโt much of a description for the world yet other than itโs marvel, most likely MCUโฆ author needs to not repeat somethingโs as much. Will write something, write it again, and then for some reason write it a third time from a different characters view. WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?
This is a story featuring a guy who has one punch manโs abilities, simply incredible, dude, you write for fun, so do I, Just go at your own pace and rememberโฆ This is a fanfic you can do whatever you want! Try to explain things before you do though, it might rub a person the wrong way, and they might think itโs something when itโs not. I wish you luck author, I will be watching and rooting for you
I know you're a Watch one punch man. But you're misunderstanding Saitama He's not stupid at all, he just doesn't care. So don't try to make him stupid, this makes the novel annoying.
I do not know how this has so many good reviews, but this is only one punch man in a marvel setting but forget about those unique villains or heroes, so far the only enemies are monsters, if you want to read this just watch one punch man because this fic does not differ from it, at least watching it is better than reading.
Hรฉ ! Mais pourquoi il n'y a pas de fanfic de croisement entre Death Note et One Piece avec seulement le Livre de Death Note dans le monde de One Piece. Pas de personnage de Death Note, รงa serait bien. Le MC en question n'aurait pas besoin de fruit du dรฉmon. Il aurait seulement besoin de s'entraรฎner au Haki (Haki des Roi pas d'importance vu le Livre du Death Note) et du coup pour le final : il aurait suffit d'รฉcrire le nom de Robin comme quoi elle aurait traduit les poneglyphes et se suicider juste aprรจs Parce que on dirait que tu ne vas pas continuer avec cette histoire ce qui est dommage autant te donner une idรฉe fanfic
Interesting concept and have good character development ,our Protagonist slowly turn himself as Saitama but i enjoy it. Thanks for the FF [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The writing quality is good. The author keeps it interesting and fun. Marvel has a thing for bald heads why not add one more bald head?Anyway this is a very good fanfiction. Read it!
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A very confusing story, starts weird and not very understandable. The grammar was excellent though and I couldn't find any mistakes. Unfortunately, for me, I couldn't understand what's really going on on the first few chapters so I dropped it.
um mec com poderes do saitama tem muito potencial sempre procurei na webnovel fanfics de one punch man mas elas nรฃo sรฃo boas, espero que essa continue e para como todas as outras;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
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Avec leur mise ร jour je ne peux plus faire de commentaire sur les chapitres. Il y'a qu'ici que je peux le faire Blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla
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the story is pretty good, the development is kinda slow but one punch man manga also is slow so it kinda matches the vibe, he got the characters personality on point and i couldn't really notice any grammar mistakes that would affect the reading, my avaliation is: a really good fanfiction, hope he keeps posting
I really want a meeting between him and the ancient one with her knowing exactly how strong he is and maybe they can have the same dynamic as Saitama and bang
Awesome story finally a new and active one punch man in marvel story keep going on this is cool, looking forward to the next chapter ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐
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Okay..... So I am new to writing. I know that I will make some or maybe many mistakes in this story but I still plan on doing my best. MC in my story will have a personality similar to Saitama but not completely as he will have his moments. He is not an Edgelord and will stay as A Hero for Fun or A real professional Hero just like Saitama. He will NOT turn Dark and Gloomy all of a sudden in the story and will NOT start massacring people just for some sick pleasure. He will be your Friendly neighborhood Baldy. Yes, You heard me right... He will be bald. There will be No Harem in any of my stories that I plan on writing in the future so this one doesn't have either. There will be some OCs that I will use to give more depth to my character and MC will not be the smartest man around; or rather he is going to be as dumb as Saitama. Him being dumb doesn't mean that he can be used like seriously he is the strongest man around, he ain't doing anything he doesn't like. And Yes; He will be the Strongest. Like literally, Nothing will work on him. If you are expecting any kind of science working in front of his overwhelming power then sorry to burst your bubble but nothing is going to work on him. MC will be considered among the likes of The One Above All, The Beyonder, The living Tribunal,etc. as his strength will equate to Infinity. He will be able to hold back his powers just like Saitama does and before you say there is no way someone can hold back infinity and infinity is infinity no matter how much you use it, Read the above statement about him not particularly someone that can be explained. He is just......out of the Ordinary. So if you guys are not interested in reading something like this then I guess it's better if you don't read this๐ ๐ I just hope you guys like my story. Peaceโ๏ธ