Please no harem...
Take your time, you're doing an amazing job! Just a small tip: try to minimize inner thoughts during important conversations, as they can slow down the dialogue and weaken the impact of the moment. Keep it up
Did you really have to stop here?
There is no doubt that he is OP but not invincible from the beginning
Ohh fake...
Cedric is supposed to be a year older than the Weasley twins.
The experience points system is impractical and needs correction because if you get points based on the power difference between you and your opponent, it will be useless in the future, imagine being a dolo and beating someone with the same force, doesn't that mean you will only get 10 or 15 points?
Isn't Jake supposed to be an adult man? Why does he act like a Wacky teenager?
Does "Li Chin Wu" sound like a name that fits in the Naruto universe? Seriously? How do you even picture that? Imagine you're reading asoiaf, fully immersed in the epic world of Westeros, and out of nowhere, someone pops up and says, "Hi, I'm Kim Jong Un From the house of Targaryen!"... Honestly, what’s left of the story after that
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original Harry Potter, reborn into the Black family
My life was ordinary. I am 18 years old. I was walking on a regular day, heading to school. While I was on the street and watching the last movie in my favorite series, Harry Potter, where he defeats the Voldemort, I heard the sound of a truck. However, my reaction was too slow, and it hit me, leading to my death. I was then reborn in a world I never imagined I would live in. Follow me as I rise to the top in this world of wizards and become the strongest among them40 Chs 1.3k Koleksi
You will have to choose a team in the end or form your own team
Game of Thrones: The King of Bronze and Fire
Book&Literature · michaeI