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A very confusing story, starts weird and not very understandable. The grammar was excellent though and I couldn't find any mistakes. Unfortunately, for me, I couldn't understand what's really going on on the first few chapters so I dropped it.
i like the story, it's unique and i enjoy reading to to any one reading this have a great day. hey author-san when will the story be updated that's the only(my personal opinion) downside to this story just wanted to know if the story is being droped, rewritten, or if your just taking a break if so the do you have a estimated return. if so let me know and i encourage you to let all reader's know if you have already done this i apoloigize i haven't read this story in a while.P.s. Author-san i eagerly your continuation of the story and your response.
Saitama fanfic are rather rare it is true that you have made some mistakes here and there. But your human and we all make mistakes. few people admit there faults and try and do better. That is why I like you as an author and this story as well. I look forward to more chapters of this story good luck and have fun.
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I do not know how this has so many good reviews, but this is only one punch man in a marvel setting but forget about those unique villains or heroes, so far the only enemies are monsters, if you want to read this just watch one punch man because this fic does not differ from it, at least watching it is better than reading.
I know you're a Watch one punch man. But you're misunderstanding Saitama He's not stupid at all, he just doesn't care. So don't try to make him stupid, this makes the novel annoying.
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Avec leur mise à jour je ne peux plus faire de commentaire sur les chapitres. Il y'a qu'ici que je peux le faire Blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla
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the story is pretty good, the development is kinda slow but one punch man manga also is slow so it kinda matches the vibe, he got the characters personality on point and i couldn't really notice any grammar mistakes that would affect the reading, my avaliation is: a really good fanfiction, hope he keeps posting
I really want a meeting between him and the ancient one with her knowing exactly how strong he is and maybe they can have the same dynamic as Saitama and bang
Hé ! Mais pourquoi il n'y a pas de fanfic de croisement entre Death Note et One Piece avec seulement le Livre de Death Note dans le monde de One Piece. Pas de personnage de Death Note, ça serait bien. Le MC en question n'aurait pas besoin de fruit du démon. Il aurait seulement besoin de s'entraîner au Haki (Haki des Roi pas d'importance vu le Livre du Death Note) et du coup pour le final : il aurait suffit d'écrire le nom de Robin comme quoi elle aurait traduit les poneglyphes et se suicider juste après Parce que on dirait que tu ne vas pas continuer avec cette histoire ce qui est dommage autant te donner une idée fanfic
Interesting concept and have good character development ,our Protagonist slowly turn himself as Saitama but i enjoy it. Thanks for the FF [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The writing quality is good. The author keeps it interesting and fun. Marvel has a thing for bald heads why not add one more bald head?Anyway this is a very good fanfiction. Read it!
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Writing quality is decent. Not the best as some grammar and spelling errors are there, but really easy to read. The updates are not on a set or regular schedule. They come out with huge gaps between some and others really close. The story develops REALLY SLOWLY! Nothing has really happened… the time it takes One Punch Man to explain his back story is essentially all of the current 12 chapters. The story is literally a rip off of one punch with a marvel setting. Unique but lazy choice. The MC does not come off as a Saitama, more like a ghetto version. The other brief character appearances so far are basic. There isn’t much of a description for the world yet other than it’s marvel, most likely MCU… author needs to not repeat something’s as much. Will write something, write it again, and then for some reason write it a third time from a different characters view. WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?
Awesome story finally a new and active one punch man in marvel story keep going on this is cool, looking forward to the next chapter 😀😀😀 👍👍👍
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This is a story featuring a guy who has one punch man’s abilities, simply incredible, dude, you write for fun, so do I, Just go at your own pace and remember… This is a fanfic you can do whatever you want! Try to explain things before you do though, it might rub a person the wrong way, and they might think it’s something when it’s not. I wish you luck author, I will be watching and rooting for you
Okay..... So I am new to writing. I know that I will make some or maybe many mistakes in this story but I still plan on doing my best. MC in my story will have a personality similar to Saitama but not completely as he will have his moments. He is not an Edgelord and will stay as A Hero for Fun or A real professional Hero just like Saitama. He will NOT turn Dark and Gloomy all of a sudden in the story and will NOT start massacring people just for some sick pleasure. He will be your Friendly neighborhood Baldy. Yes, You heard me right... He will be bald. There will be No Harem in any of my stories that I plan on writing in the future so this one doesn't have either. There will be some OCs that I will use to give more depth to my character and MC will not be the smartest man around; or rather he is going to be as dumb as Saitama. Him being dumb doesn't mean that he can be used like seriously he is the strongest man around, he ain't doing anything he doesn't like. And Yes; He will be the Strongest. Like literally, Nothing will work on him. If you are expecting any kind of science working in front of his overwhelming power then sorry to burst your bubble but nothing is going to work on him. MC will be considered among the likes of The One Above All, The Beyonder, The living Tribunal,etc. as his strength will equate to Infinity. He will be able to hold back his powers just like Saitama does and before you say there is no way someone can hold back infinity and infinity is infinity no matter how much you use it, Read the above statement about him not particularly someone that can be explained. He is just......out of the Ordinary. So if you guys are not interested in reading something like this then I guess it's better if you don't read this😅😅 I just hope you guys like my story. Peace✌️
A very confusing story, starts weird and not very understandable. The grammar was excellent though and I couldn't find any mistakes. Unfortunately, for me, I couldn't understand what's really going on on the first few chapters so I dropped it.
i like the story, it's unique and i enjoy reading to to any one reading this have a great day. hey author-san when will the story be updated that's the only(my personal opinion) downside to this story just wanted to know if the story is being droped, rewritten, or if your just taking a break if so the do you have a estimated return. if so let me know and i encourage you to let all reader's know if you have already done this i apoloigize i haven't read this story in a while.P.s. Author-san i eagerly your continuation of the story and your response.
Saitama fanfic are rather rare it is true that you have made some mistakes here and there. But your human and we all make mistakes. few people admit there faults and try and do better. That is why I like you as an author and this story as well. I look forward to more chapters of this story good luck and have fun.
um mec com poderes do saitama tem muito potencial sempre procurei na webnovel fanfics de one punch man mas elas não são boas, espero que essa continue e para como todas as outras;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
I do not know how this has so many good reviews, but this is only one punch man in a marvel setting but forget about those unique villains or heroes, so far the only enemies are monsters, if you want to read this just watch one punch man because this fic does not differ from it, at least watching it is better than reading.
I know you're a Watch one punch man. But you're misunderstanding Saitama He's not stupid at all, he just doesn't care. So don't try to make him stupid, this makes the novel annoying.
best one punch man fanfic ever.....................................................................................................................................
Avec leur mise à jour je ne peux plus faire de commentaire sur les chapitres. Il y'a qu'ici que je peux le faire Blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla
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the story is pretty good, the development is kinda slow but one punch man manga also is slow so it kinda matches the vibe, he got the characters personality on point and i couldn't really notice any grammar mistakes that would affect the reading, my avaliation is: a really good fanfiction, hope he keeps posting
I really want a meeting between him and the ancient one with her knowing exactly how strong he is and maybe they can have the same dynamic as Saitama and bang
Hé ! Mais pourquoi il n'y a pas de fanfic de croisement entre Death Note et One Piece avec seulement le Livre de Death Note dans le monde de One Piece. Pas de personnage de Death Note, ça serait bien. Le MC en question n'aurait pas besoin de fruit du démon. Il aurait seulement besoin de s'entraîner au Haki (Haki des Roi pas d'importance vu le Livre du Death Note) et du coup pour le final : il aurait suffit d'écrire le nom de Robin comme quoi elle aurait traduit les poneglyphes et se suicider juste après Parce que on dirait que tu ne vas pas continuer avec cette histoire ce qui est dommage autant te donner une idée fanfic
Interesting concept and have good character development ,our Protagonist slowly turn himself as Saitama but i enjoy it. Thanks for the FF [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Membuka SPOILER The writing quality is good. The author keeps it interesting and fun. Marvel has a thing for bald heads why not add one more bald head?Anyway this is a very good fanfiction. Read it!
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Writing quality is decent. Not the best as some grammar and spelling errors are there, but really easy to read. The updates are not on a set or regular schedule. They come out with huge gaps between some and others really close. The story develops REALLY SLOWLY! Nothing has really happened… the time it takes One Punch Man to explain his back story is essentially all of the current 12 chapters. The story is literally a rip off of one punch with a marvel setting. Unique but lazy choice. The MC does not come off as a Saitama, more like a ghetto version. The other brief character appearances so far are basic. There isn’t much of a description for the world yet other than it’s marvel, most likely MCU… author needs to not repeat something’s as much. Will write something, write it again, and then for some reason write it a third time from a different characters view. WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?
Awesome story finally a new and active one punch man in marvel story keep going on this is cool, looking forward to the next chapter 😀😀😀 👍👍👍
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This is a story featuring a guy who has one punch man’s abilities, simply incredible, dude, you write for fun, so do I, Just go at your own pace and remember… This is a fanfic you can do whatever you want! Try to explain things before you do though, it might rub a person the wrong way, and they might think it’s something when it’s not. I wish you luck author, I will be watching and rooting for you
Okay..... So I am new to writing. I know that I will make some or maybe many mistakes in this story but I still plan on doing my best. MC in my story will have a personality similar to Saitama but not completely as he will have his moments. He is not an Edgelord and will stay as A Hero for Fun or A real professional Hero just like Saitama. He will NOT turn Dark and Gloomy all of a sudden in the story and will NOT start massacring people just for some sick pleasure. He will be your Friendly neighborhood Baldy. Yes, You heard me right... He will be bald. There will be No Harem in any of my stories that I plan on writing in the future so this one doesn't have either. There will be some OCs that I will use to give more depth to my character and MC will not be the smartest man around; or rather he is going to be as dumb as Saitama. Him being dumb doesn't mean that he can be used like seriously he is the strongest man around, he ain't doing anything he doesn't like. And Yes; He will be the Strongest. Like literally, Nothing will work on him. If you are expecting any kind of science working in front of his overwhelming power then sorry to burst your bubble but nothing is going to work on him. MC will be considered among the likes of The One Above All, The Beyonder, The living Tribunal,etc. as his strength will equate to Infinity. He will be able to hold back his powers just like Saitama does and before you say there is no way someone can hold back infinity and infinity is infinity no matter how much you use it, Read the above statement about him not particularly someone that can be explained. He is just......out of the Ordinary. So if you guys are not interested in reading something like this then I guess it's better if you don't read this😅😅 I just hope you guys like my story. Peace✌️