Gilgamesh in MHA

LV 14

Jasonenrick

Writing Quality 2-Stars Story Development 1-Star Character Design 1-Star Updating Stability 3-Stars World Background 3-Stars Gilgamesh's character isn't present at all even thought the Author always says that Gil influences the Mc. The Mc is also weak af and the Story is written like a Diary . Etc etc etc I am too lazy,...again !

LV 3

Naiiger

I'm gonna be honest here and say this is one of the worst things I have ever read. If anyone is going to argue it is anything but absolute shit, read the first chapter, and think again.

LV 14

Potato_daoist

Not enjoyable for me, the author has horrible grammer, the names of the wepons are wrong (basicaly every one) op in 2 chapter launching weapons at mach 10 “lifts 1 ton easily” at like 5 years old i think. theirs Going to be no challenge at all unless the author either nerfs the mc or makes afo way stronger if not he has no challenge.

LV 4

Wriothesley_Main

I'm loving this already. Gilgamesh is my favorite character in fate and the coolest guy, second is archer(no offence emiya fans). There are quite a few fanfic who also used gilgamesh but most of them either still have gilgamesh's arrogance (which I don't like much) or went missing without completing the story. So I look forward to this development. My Inner Gilgamesh: YOU BETTER NOT DROP THIS ZASSHU!!!

LV 6

LostThe50_50

.....this is just as cringe if not more than the original MHA story.....the mc is...a cringe fiesta and has nothing worth talking about, he talks a lot of crap despite having gilgamesh's power and being unable to wield it properly. Also i can assure anyone who reads this...that is not gilgamesh, that is a fanboy wanna be. When gilgamesh talks its not forced. Another thing to talk about is how.....nothing changed lol, isnt there supposed butterfly effect or some shit. Nah author just kept every event and added a Gilgamesh fanboy wanna be. Grammar wise ive seen worse so thats a 2 stars for you. Story development...well i mean does it even need to be said? That's not your story, you just added a person in someone elses story and kept the events as is.

LV 14

yokedjaguar

The grammar is the worst I've seen for a second, you forget words, you add words, you forget commas your (s), you add (s) when their not needed, the beginning you didnt capitalize, there's something wrong in literally every paragraph, I wouldn't be surprised if it was every sentence, and the worst part if it was an enjoyable story but you ruined it.

LV 14

SYIHAAKIRA

Hello there Believers. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or weeks if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

LV 4

TheOnlyKing

I was only able to get to chapter 5, the grammar is absolutely atrocious. It's barely readable, the mc is also not like Gilgamesh at all. I feel like if he wanted to write a beta-mc then he should have just written it not shame Gilgamesh's name with this SI's personality. The only thing 'good' about this fic is that the updates seem fairly regular but then again that means nothing if the fic is trash.

LV 14

access11

the grammar and writing is awful the way he makes the characters talk is ridiculous and quite honestly the idea is great he just doesn't know how to capitalize on it and so the story sucks because of that. like eha for EA really

LV 4

pizzq

Nothing really special... Poor character design, World background is okay, poor story and character development, and very poor writing quality & grammar. Idea has potential, but that's it...

LV 1

MasterBeast7016

The concept is good but the execution is horrible. -The language is a problem its horrible and it needs saving. -Clearly the author failed to research the character, power or personality of Gillgamesh. Honestly I feel it's an insult to the original character. -The further I read the more it seems that the MC is an Idiot and at times interactions with others is bluntly speaking absolute crap, You failed to show the personality of other characters. All this is basically my personal opinion I hope your writing gets better in the future cause as of now your story needs a lot of work. Best of luck

LV 3

H1Gh_cH405

The idea behind this book is great but unfortunately the author fails to deliver it. Bad grammar and spelling makes it difficult to read. The characters feels dull and the world is stagnant, the conversation between character feels lifeless and cringe. To me this book is beyond saving and the only way to fix it is to rewrite the entire story.

LV 4

BIGO_NIGO

this isca really good consept however you do not use correct grammar and outright steal from other fanfics, also you really rushed this story. i think you should rewrite and use a program such as gramarly

LV 13

Ian_Emrys

The story is good so far and I wanna more of it..and how it progresses........................................................................[img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 2

SAGE

The only reason I read this novel is Gilgamesh, he is my best character in the series of fate, and you destroy this without mercy in your attempt to make the world bigger and to make it a harem, and these feelings are baseless.

LV 2

Renegade_Knight

Impossible to read because of grammar ................................................................................................................................

LV 4

DragoPackMan

one of the worst and bland fan fiction i ever read. not able to get what author has to offer. good luck [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

LV 4

PeterGriffith

first of all, please use "GRAMMARLY" it will help you a ton! the biggest problem I see in this FF is the grammar, if you could improve the grammar of your work, you'll only have to worry about the story development. And please fix the early chapters, if do, you'll get more people liking this FF, and please reconsider my words of advice as a fellow FF writer. Writing quality: 2* it's that bad. Story Dev: 2* it lacks background motives. Char design: 3* for trying. updates: 4* you do updated a lot but it's "quantity over quality" kind of thing. World background: 4* it's MHA so nothing much to say. anyways that's all.

LV 12

andre_nunes

I'm already love this Webnovel. Out of all the powers, I think Gilgamesh is epic and watching other universe powers against it will be so entertaining. I hope you can continue to produce more pages. There are some grammatical and spelling errors, but the story itself and the main character make those problems insignificant in my eyes,

LV 3

LethanAlexander

Ekhem Writing Quality 1 Stability of Updates 3 Story Development 2 Character Design 1 World Background 3 The total score 2 Ekhem U know, in begining is still good, but in recent times things have gotten worse. That means he talks too much about things the average teenager doesn't need to know. Can be understood for building trust, so what? still not necessary. It is not like Gilgamesh who does only what is necessary and tells the reason only to his true Friends. #By G Translate