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Fractured World

Fantasy 142 Bab 1.0M Dilihat
Penulis: Zentmeister

4.7 (10 peringkat)

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What happens when fantasy meets reality? Alex, a college student and regional MMA fighter, witnesses civilization's death as a fantastical apocalypse befalls the Earth. With a lack of electricity and a rapidly changing world, humans find themselves relying on a mysterious RPG-like system to combat the various monsters who have found themselves vying for supremacy with the native humans over this Fractured World.

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    Sculp
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    The novel looks nice though I have a question is there a romance in the novel?........................................................................................................................................................................................................

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    Peridotz

    It's great. ----------------

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    Flakex3
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    A story about an MMA fighter surviving during the apocalypse. He is a relatively calm protagonist with above average intelligence. Currently there is no "wow" factor but if you are looking for a solid novel to read then please give this novel a try. I can assure you that the story at least develops at an acceptable pace and there is no stupidly OP moments. In terms of improvements, I felt that the story could have been developed and described better before progressing in each scenarios. It would be better to describe more fighting scenes utilizing their skills more often in detail so that the readers will be more curious to the type of skills available. It would also be good to describe each of the monsters strengths and weaknesses more clearly. Maybe give some scenes where a person that specializes in strength is weak in fighting against monsters that are extremely fast. I hope that this novel would gain more views and popularity as it is better than most novels out there.

    3yr
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    RasenganMaster

    Very good story. Thanks for the work autor-san, i hope this got bigger because you deservet it. Good luck for the future! ......... .................. ........................... ....................................

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    3yr
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    The_Olympians_Rule

    Pretty good. The way people act and talk is kinda weird, cringy at times. It’s supposed to be in modern America, yet there are people acting like there in an anime or medieval times. I also don’t like how Alex doesn’t use a weapon. The martial arts is cool, most times people just over look it and focus on magic, swords, and guns. But this is a bit over the top. Haven’t read the whole thing yet, but it’s pretty good so far.

    2yr
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    max_sorcery

    like the book so I gave it an honest review just couldn't read past chapter fifty as I'm not going to spend my money on this waste of an app

    2yr
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    Descentofpotential

    very good up to what's released I think you need to be expanding to understand more of the world wide state of affairs maybe return to the coliseum under another identity or something and perhaps set up more large factions.

    3yr
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    APEX_APE

    its really good definitely gonna keep reading hopefully you don't drop it and finish it and start releasing 1 or 2 chapters a day 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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