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Penulis: Good_Job_Bud

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One day on earth a portal was seen near a navy base, scientists have been trying to figure out this strange phenomenon that just appear.

Few weeks later the portal have cracks on it and then out of nowhere, full of monsters suddenly came crashing out of the portal and as such left a massacre on the navy base. soon more and more portals are starting to appear and as such humanity was helpless against these monsters.

Even though humanity have lost a lot through these portals, they are about to receive the biggest blessing they ever got through these portals. The energy on these portals have been spread out on the world and as such this energy have been giving humans special powers and so humanity have been fighting back through this blessing

15 years later humanity now stand at the apex of the food chain against these monsters except for one

Meet Jesus Daiz, a person who receive the blessing like everyone in this world but was on the weak side, This blessing only give him the strength of that of a bodybuilder so he bullied for being god damn weak

He is trying to survive day in and day out clearing portals now known as dungeons making money but one day he got called to a dungeon and the pay was bigger than usual so he was excited but soon that excitement fell short when he was betrayed by his so called teammates

when he woke up he saw a message
[ welcome to hell mortal and try your best to survive ]

his new goal in life now is to stand at top of the food chain to survive and escape hell to take his revenge on those who had wrong him

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My writing in the beginning of the story is awful since I'm new to writing but I promise it gets better the more you read

Also I've noticed my mc name was spelled wrong as it meant to be Jesús like in spainish and not Jesus but fuck it, I'm not changing it

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alucardtfs

very well done my son proud of you....................................................................................................................................................

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MoreMercury76

Honestly this novel is trash. I couldn't read past chapter 7. Plot and scenarios are pretty much common, nothing new. It also contains alot of flaws and plot holes. Mc is dumb, naive and weak asf (I don't know why authors like making their main characters like this) but at least this mc had backbone.

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oxideqq_3600

Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.

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