So good I felt something bursting inside all in me. world background beautifully well done. the vibrant feeling I get whenever the characters talk to each. truly stunning. only problem is there's not enough.
Gluttony and greed.
A concept every being is accustomed to. Some in greater form or less.
But for me,… I'm deeply influenced by these both.
During my entire life, no matter how much I ate and feasted upon, I was still hungry.
I ate, I ate, I ate, and I ate but I never lost this constant torture of hunger.
I was greedy for more, I needed more! No matter what it was, be it bugs, animals, or even humans themselves, I ate them all! But eventually, this curse I've been stuck with all my life has put me to an end.
I thought I was finally free from my curse. But alas, I transmigrated into an alien's body, and the curse never left.
And the universe I got transmigrated to, which we called marvel, would cause me great misfortune and agony.
Luckily I received a gift upon my arrival here, and sure enough, it fits right with me.
I may have started at the bottom of the food chain but soon, I'll make the entire universe my feast and become its devouerer!
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Story will be mix between slow and quick, you won't see a hero in marvel in the first 30 chapters or possibly 40. He needs time to familiarize his powers and what not. So if u don't like it then I suggest ignoring this one.
doing this for fun
Disclaimer the Marvel universe isn't owned by me except for my OC so yeah. ah also the universe will be an AU
Another disclaimer: this story has gore and torture in it that will seem disturbing to others so read at your own risk!
One day on earth a portal was seen near a navy base, scientists have been trying to figure out this strange phenomenon that just appear.
Few weeks later the portal have cracks on it and then out of nowhere, full of monsters suddenly came crashing out of the portal and as such left a massacre on the navy base. soon more and more portals are starting to appear and as such humanity was helpless against these monsters.
Even though humanity have lost a lot through these portals, they are about to receive the biggest blessing they ever got through these portals. The energy on these portals have been spread out on the world and as such this energy have been giving humans special powers and so humanity have been fighting back through this blessing
15 years later humanity now stand at the apex of the food chain against these monsters except for one
Meet Jesus Daiz, a person who receive the blessing like everyone in this world but was on the weak side, This blessing only give him the strength of that of a bodybuilder so he bullied for being god damn weak
He is trying to survive day in and day out clearing portals now known as dungeons making money but one day he got called to a dungeon and the pay was bigger than usual so he was excited but soon that excitement fell short when he was betrayed by his so called teammates
when he woke up he saw a message
[ welcome to hell mortal and try your best to survive ]
his new goal in life now is to stand at top of the food chain to survive and escape hell to take his revenge on those who had wrong him
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My writing in the beginning of the story is awful since I'm new to writing but I promise it gets better the more you read
Also I've noticed my mc name was spelled wrong as it meant to be Jesús like in spainish and not Jesus but fuck it, I'm not changing it
idk, we will see what I do. good suggestion
Devourer In Marvel
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