/ Movies / If He be Worthy [MCU/Thor]
Ringkasan
What would happen if Thor suddenly gained the knowledge of what was to come in his weakest moment?
Would he falter, paralyzed by the weight of what he learned, or would he rise to challenge his fate?
All shall know the power of Thor
(This is being crossposted by me on Questionable Questing.
This is not a translation)
tagar
Anda Mungkin Juga Menyukai
4
Bagikan pikiran Anda dengan orang lain
Tulis ulasanThor’s fate always made me feel sad af. Your novel is very well written, and I don’t know if I’m just moody but reading it made me tear up.
Garbage started off great the author made it seem like things would change from the original but the only things that changed is that he is not with the woman anymore, Loki is stronger, and Thor is weaker and dumber
I cannot see anything different in this novel, is this just mcu story recap. There is zero change in the story as of now. He just destroy the bridge as in the story, I can't see anything different in this story.
Just read the last chapter and this is absolute one of my favorite Marvel stories, i just love that we will see a Rune King Thor. Can't wait to see more.
Utter trash. Rewritten with Thor having the future knowledge but instead of him using that knowledge to his advantage he does the same things and reaches same conclusion. …. That’s still ok but original Thor is funny and easy to anger but this Thor is boring and dumb. HotcrapSuuu
Great story, Author! I hope you keep at it. All the main characters feel fleshed out except perhaps Frigga, Sif, and the Warriors Three. I have no idea why I feel that way, but it's only chapter 9, so I guess they will be better when they get more dialogue. Speaking of dialogue, I especially like how you have made Thor so genuine. It's very nice. I have no doubts that Thor will turn OP, so I just hope people won't harass the author before even the first 10 chapters (I'm looking at the peeps commenting on the Thor and Loki fight -_-)
Membuka SPOILERWriting is amazing Character design is incredible as well, it feels like the real characters are doing things and not just the author driving the plot World design is great as well My main problem is the story itself. I know it has only been like 10 days since he got the memories of the future as of chapter 10, but he should have been able to do something. He knew Loki would use the bifrost; why did he not do anything to stop it when he reached asgard, and instead went to Odin directly like a lost original Thor without the memories Then once Thor 1 sequence of events are over, he regrets it. His literal thoughts are, “I knew this would happen, but let my pride blind me”. Yes it is indeed what Thor would say but a wise Thor with future sight should have sought to stop it from happening. Also, this current Thor apparently got stronger than the original by tapping into Thor 3 to power, not fully but a little, yet somehow gets his a*S handed to him by Loki… which makes him feel weaker than the original… smh Anyways, I still love your writing so I will contour reading since Thor is apparently going to get stronger, but please thing of something to fix this. There are other ways to bring the timeline back on track other than following the exact events. Throw in a random event where Loki is somehow captured by thanos and to return to asgard safely he must help them invade earth or something idk… just ideas.
Membuka SPOILERA very apt description is a guy transmigrates into the body of thor but how can you compare 30 or so years of life to 1000+ so the mc is basically thor with knowledge of the future and maybe other universes kinda
Looks really interesting for me the mc is Thor, not a reincarnated person, why people get mad with his difficult to change events the ff is recently starter the changes could happen later ugh . Author hope You not dropped your novel just for a little cats.
Me gusta la historia, trasmite lo que Thor realmente haría, aunque parece que todo sigue igual, ya hablaron de Loki futuro entonces creo que la historia cambiará para mejor, talvez en los espacios medidos veamos no solo Thor runico mejor si no la vida como el se la merecia, aceptando a Sif como en los cómics creciendo como rey de Asgard solo espero que no aceleren la historia y lo hagan pasó a paso y va quedar genial
The best Thor fanfic I have read in a long while. if you are looking for something that expands on the mcu then this is for you.
So far, it's really interesting! Hope it stays that way hahahaha ...........................................................................
Very nice story so far really enjoyinng it. keep it up author..................................................................................................
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Penulis RandomBadass
Your bots did their job and got you this far up the boards, but the story is hot garbage, the dialogue is terrible, the plot doesn’t change regardless of your character gaining memories and knowledge of his power.