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Amazing writing skills, MC has a clear moral compass and his emotions are pretty clear (he doesn't want to rely on others, only himself), personality is consistent and his interest in women is pretty diverse excluding kids. Loads of sexual experience that makes sense, amazing smut chapters for it, MC is PATIENT, 10/10 so far. LONG chapters btw.
One of the best RI fics I've read without a doubt, the author knows how to carry the story and maintains a certain coherence with its development.
Esta historia definitivamente merece más reconocimiento. Increíble la escritura y el plot 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
this is peak fanfic, the interactions, the fights, the plot, the mc, the world building, the writing quality, everything is peak, plus this is a rare RI fanfic and that's another plus point, Author i hope you will never drop this masterpiece.
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Best FanFiction I’ve ever read. They say one’s characters can only be as smart as the writer. If that’s true, this author must have the highest IQ on Webnovel. Fang Yuan has got nothing on Lo Jik!
Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too. Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too.
Finally! I've been waiting for RI fic from you for ages. Fei Cai's Ascension was amazing and this one mama mia! it too was amazing. Thank You Author. Although there's a thing I would like to recommend. Pacing, while to me this pacing is working and quite amazing, it worries me a bit. I knew you've already written over hundreds of chapters but going forward I would recommend you to increase the pacing. RI has a tedious amount of chapters, at this pace it would take what?, 400-500 maybe more chapters to be finished. I'm sorry to say this but at this pace there's a very high chance that you would either hit a writer block or lose interest in this fic. So please 🥺 increase the pace going forward. By some miracle you wouldn't stop writing and finished this I would be eternally grateful. 🙏🏻
Man i lost my appetite for reading this novel when he lost his wife, tho this a good novel so definitely recommend it. I have to stop at chapter 41.
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one of the best fics I've ever read it reminds me of my time reading the original RI keep going aurhor
the mc personality is peak. and the story has multitude of funny interaction and great moments 😄. the mc is intelligent he is if fang yuan and lust devil had child and went to be an actor lol. and I appreciate lemons won't say no to lemons they add spice to the story ( a wise man once said) give it a try it really good 👍
Ты должен продолжать писать... ВО ЧТО БЫ ТО НИ СТАЛО! Слишком сложно найти ПОЛНОЦЕННО законченный или хотя-бы достаточно продолжительный и увлекательный фанфик! Давай твой станет этим "единственным и не повторимым"?
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I love your Soul Land fan fic and I love this too keep up the good work////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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RI with harem? No need say anything else.___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Amazing,Wonderful,Captivating Great time management this author has No chapter feels unnecessary or stale The characters will flushed and interesting And the most important thing is the fun and interesting and somewhat evil MC. I like the way he process his thoughts and emotions. Highly recommend.
five stars This is one of the best ri stories I've ever seen. The plot is fluid. The Mc is interesting and fun, and it also has a Harem. They're finally making ri stories that have a harem, as well as the romance. Of course, you couldn't expect less from the legendary FanHarem. It's also very fun to read. Mc is learning the recipes and refining the Gu, of course. Like the rewards of the system, I'm very anxious to know what he's going to get. His character development is very good, so there's only one thing to say. It's worth reading.
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This story man….. “chefs kiss” Everything about it is entertaining and refreshing, its balancing it’s humor PLOT and action nothing feels out off place or pace. A masterpiece so far.
The others gave 5 stars cause they liked the story. I gave 5 stars because it checks the review criteria perfectly. Yall already know that when I give 5 stars you can't go wrong with it.
The worst place for someone to have a harem is RI, unless he plans not to get any feelings involved between them. Because death is common in that world, and depending on the spoiler, I think one of them died.
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lemon + reverend insanity = perfection. The good thing about this story is that it has many chapters and will not be abandoned out of nowhere.
Writing quality is great but the plot is horrible together with the mc. The mc is an emotionless doll, youll understand once you read past 40 chapters. And the once thought female lead also dies for plot convenience. Iay be ranting but this is my review, no one wants to see something so tragic from a somewhat happy fantasy fan fic. Dropped this.
Membuka SPOILER Amazing writing skills, MC has a clear moral compass and his emotions are pretty clear (he doesn't want to rely on others, only himself), personality is consistent and his interest in women is pretty diverse excluding kids. Loads of sexual experience that makes sense, amazing smut chapters for it, MC is PATIENT, 10/10 so far. LONG chapters btw.
One of the best RI fics I've read without a doubt, the author knows how to carry the story and maintains a certain coherence with its development.
Esta historia definitivamente merece más reconocimiento. Increíble la escritura y el plot 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
this is peak fanfic, the interactions, the fights, the plot, the mc, the world building, the writing quality, everything is peak, plus this is a rare RI fanfic and that's another plus point, Author i hope you will never drop this masterpiece.
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Best FanFiction I’ve ever read. They say one’s characters can only be as smart as the writer. If that’s true, this author must have the highest IQ on Webnovel. Fang Yuan has got nothing on Lo Jik!
Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too. Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too.
Finally! I've been waiting for RI fic from you for ages. Fei Cai's Ascension was amazing and this one mama mia! it too was amazing. Thank You Author. Although there's a thing I would like to recommend. Pacing, while to me this pacing is working and quite amazing, it worries me a bit. I knew you've already written over hundreds of chapters but going forward I would recommend you to increase the pacing. RI has a tedious amount of chapters, at this pace it would take what?, 400-500 maybe more chapters to be finished. I'm sorry to say this but at this pace there's a very high chance that you would either hit a writer block or lose interest in this fic. So please 🥺 increase the pace going forward. By some miracle you wouldn't stop writing and finished this I would be eternally grateful. 🙏🏻
Man i lost my appetite for reading this novel when he lost his wife, tho this a good novel so definitely recommend it. I have to stop at chapter 41.
Membuka SPOILER one of the best fics I've ever read it reminds me of my time reading the original RI keep going aurhor
the mc personality is peak. and the story has multitude of funny interaction and great moments 😄. the mc is intelligent he is if fang yuan and lust devil had child and went to be an actor lol. and I appreciate lemons won't say no to lemons they add spice to the story ( a wise man once said) give it a try it really good 👍
Ты должен продолжать писать... ВО ЧТО БЫ ТО НИ СТАЛО! Слишком сложно найти ПОЛНОЦЕННО законченный или хотя-бы достаточно продолжительный и увлекательный фанфик! Давай твой станет этим "единственным и не повторимым"?
good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
I love your Soul Land fan fic and I love this too keep up the good work////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Membuka SPOILER RI with harem? No need say anything else.___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Amazing,Wonderful,Captivating Great time management this author has No chapter feels unnecessary or stale The characters will flushed and interesting And the most important thing is the fun and interesting and somewhat evil MC. I like the way he process his thoughts and emotions. Highly recommend.
five stars This is one of the best ri stories I've ever seen. The plot is fluid. The Mc is interesting and fun, and it also has a Harem. They're finally making ri stories that have a harem, as well as the romance. Of course, you couldn't expect less from the legendary FanHarem. It's also very fun to read. Mc is learning the recipes and refining the Gu, of course. Like the rewards of the system, I'm very anxious to know what he's going to get. His character development is very good, so there's only one thing to say. It's worth reading.
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This story man….. “chefs kiss” Everything about it is entertaining and refreshing, its balancing it’s humor PLOT and action nothing feels out off place or pace. A masterpiece so far.
The others gave 5 stars cause they liked the story. I gave 5 stars because it checks the review criteria perfectly. Yall already know that when I give 5 stars you can't go wrong with it.
The worst place for someone to have a harem is RI, unless he plans not to get any feelings involved between them. Because death is common in that world, and depending on the spoiler, I think one of them died.
Membuka SPOILER lemon + reverend insanity = perfection. The good thing about this story is that it has many chapters and will not be abandoned out of nowhere.
Writing quality is great but the plot is horrible together with the mc. The mc is an emotionless doll, youll understand once you read past 40 chapters. And the once thought female lead also dies for plot convenience. Iay be ranting but this is my review, no one wants to see something so tragic from a somewhat happy fantasy fan fic. Dropped this.
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