CallmeCyrus0409

CallmeCyrus0409

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2021-03-07 Bergabung Philippines
Lencana 10

Moments 1203
CallmeCyrus0409
CallmeCyrus0409
2 days ago
Posted

Great writing quality. Plot is also good with no noticeable holes. Updates is extremely fast. Character development is also excellent since the character's actually fleshed out. World development needs some improvement or more details in it.

CallmeCyrus0409
CallmeCyrus0409
2 days ago
Replied to Luan_Ramos

that's not complaining, that's explqining why killing such characters is bad. It ain't like Ace or even other anime where such killing developes the mc's character, here it is just for plot convenience, if you can't understand this why not continue learning aomething so that your logical and intellectual capacity may learn because wisdom always seems to outrun you.

'Damn,' He sighs. 'We never even got to bid farewell, Yan.'

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Book&Literature · FanHarem

CallmeCyrus0409
CallmeCyrus0409
4 days ago
Commented

Autho please don't use chaptwrs for announcement, you can maybe add your announcements at the bottom of each chapter or either on the author's remarks. Using chaps for announcements doesn't really look good.

CallmeCyrus0409
CallmeCyrus0409
5 days ago
Posted

Writing quality is great but the plot is horrible together with the mc. The mc is an emotionless doll, youll understand once you read past 40 chapters. And the once thought female lead also dies for plot convenience. Iay be ranting but this is my review, no one wants to see something so tragic from a somewhat happy fantasy fan fic. Dropped this.

CallmeCyrus0409
CallmeCyrus0409
5 days ago
Commented

Now this part is where I cant follow anymore, an emotionless mc.

CallmeCyrus0409
CallmeCyrus0409
5 days ago
Commented

Don't really like this, killing fully developed characters is just not that good and his reasoning of not knowing thr meaning of love is just plain BS. All things he did was an act of love. Honestly hates this, what would happen everytime we get a female developed mc, will she get killed all the time?

'Damn,' He sighs. 'We never even got to bid farewell, Yan.'

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Book&Literature · FanHarem

CallmeCyrus0409
CallmeCyrus0409
6 days ago
Commented

literal if there's a will, there's a way

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It's not like nurturing his aperture where time seems to fly by. Instead, Lo Jik feels that time is moving slowly. However, he persists. Did his body not endure molten candle wax atop his dick to get his third Golden Achievement? Jayda was kinky and dangerous, but he persevered! Can he not do the same again?

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Book&Literature · FanHarem

CallmeCyrus0409
CallmeCyrus0409
7 days ago
Commented

this is bsically ntr but barely, I mean, they did the did so many times it's hard to think that there was no feelings involved. Dunno how this'll fare with the other readers, oh the author are in for some cold shoulders.

CallmeCyrus0409
CallmeCyrus0409
8 days ago
Replied to CallmeCyrus0409

It feels like the mc didn't even grow any better even with all his multiple lives he lived.

CallmeCyrus0409
CallmeCyrus0409
8 days ago
Commented

Yep, I still don't understand why he does this cold shoulder thingy, not like she betrayed him so much, he also did the same to her, him resurrecting her is just a way for him to feel better himself then just forget about what he did.