Primordial Villain With A Slave Harem

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NecroBin

Thanks for giving my novel a chance. I believe that you won't regret it. The MC is greedy, possessive, and scheming. He starts out as an opportunistic anti-hero more than an actual villain, but quickly begins slipping. However, if your idea of 'villain' is someone who skins puppies alive just for fun while cackling manically then he will never become a true villain. My idea of a 'villain' is someone who is severely lacking any moral limitations that stop him from doings things that would make him stronger, and also having very low empathy levels for outsiders. As for the harem part, I prefer small harems where each member has an actual reason to exist beyond being eye candies and trophies for the MC to show off. Therefore, each lady has an important role to play in the story, with each having at least a mini arc before/when joining, and will almost certainly have an entire future arc centered around them. You can expect about one woman/60-80 chapters average I would say. If you have any questions or comments don't hesitate to state them. Enjoy the ride! No NTR, no yuri.

LV 13

LightYagami2000

A marvelous example of what not to write. A truly cursed piece of literature that belongs in the realm of trash. Authors of novels like these like to think of themselves as sophisticated individuals that're challenging the norm by writing harem cr*p, while in reality they're just insecure edgy mor*ns who get off on writing stuff like this.

LV 12

Entomodachi

Great story, very addictive! I like that the main character is not an usual goody two shoes hero.

LV 3

Daoist913668

Very well written, dialogues are lively and interesting, character development is great, MC is competent, the system isn t the end all be all. 4 stars on the world because I m sure this author could have created something even better. That and I am a pos. Sorry author, I mean good things :D

LV 15

Synge64

Great book, keep it up author! I have no idea if you have other stuff, but I am definitely going to check it out after I finish writing this.

LV 3

BlueberyTempest

Nice! A harem story with system! Exactly what I've been looking for! Writing is nice and pacing is great with good grammar. Will there be yuri in this?

LV 4

Micke1

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DarkR1vers_Leander

great book,awesome character development ..I like the way the mc does not depend on the system..A very funny book..Thanks man keep up the good work..

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Schmelkenboy

I only read the "free to read" part(about 45 chapters, but I do think that the story and the development is quite well written. Also, can we talk about the fact how NecroBin postes 14 Chapters a Week?! I recommend this novel.

LV 14

DaoistCudg85

A nice, yet twisted way for the plot to thicken. Excellent ending to the chapter, making the reader anxious for the next chapter from the author

LV 4

DaoisttbRSW8

a very enjoyable and good read. world background is slowly and steadily established which makes it a good story

LV 4

Mav_eriks

It's refreshing to see a MC not having a hero complex who just wishes to live freely and has his priorities ( having a harem with strong & powerful girls) set. It is definitely worth a try and looking forward to more chaps.

LV 13

Princess_Treasure

I like the MC and his realistic thinking fr. Having the hero complex have put many in trouble. The writing style is easy to read and the author clearly has a sense of humour that he adds to his writing. I recommend!

LV 3

SunScar

The story is in first POV and is quite intriguing. The characters are well-written and world development is very good. Amazing Job Author!! Keep it coming.

LV 2

LJDRLwanen

It's a good story, and I like the pacing of the chapters. I'm gonna keep this one on my list to keep reading. I can't wait :D Keep doing your best

LV 11

InfernusReal

The power system is quite nice; the writing style is also pretty top-notch. Totally recommended to anyone who loves typical harem novels. : )

LV 3

Lone_Gurung

I love it... everything is good.. though it's in the first POV, it is written well. Let's where it led us. the journey seems interesting.

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WanderingShadow1

The story is well paced and ofc its well written... Its gonna be a fun read for sure

LV 14

Danilo_Bravo

good story, I like the novel, god tier for sure. I have a few suggestions: the 'Villain' part doesn't feel strong enough, sure he has thief and slave master and a few crimes here and there but there is always a reason, I feel like in order to be a villain, there is a need for a hero, but the usual young master trash bad guy doesn't feel very heroic. I wanna see the hero's party, corrupt the heroine, corrupt the cleric/saint/angel girl. dig some young master ancestors graves, rob some legacy or dungeon, steal the bride, I am also missing a demon/succubus/vampire girl who does the bad things for him thinking she deserves praise like stealing the princess or training some crazy girl who otherwise wouldn't make the cut.