Primordial Villain with a Slave Harem

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NecroBin

Thanks for giving my novel a chance. I believe that you won't regret it. The MC is greedy, possessive, and scheming. He starts out as an opportunistic anti-hero more than an actual villain, but quickly begins slipping. However, if your idea of 'villain' is someone who skins puppies alive just for fun while cackling manically then he will never become a true villain. My idea of a 'villain' is someone who is severely lacking any moral limitations that stop him from doings things that would make him stronger, and also having very low empathy levels for outsiders. As for the harem part, I prefer small harems where each member has an actual reason to exist beyond being eye candies and trophies for the MC to show off. Therefore, each lady has an important role to play in the story, with each having at least a mini arc before/when joining, and will almost certainly have an entire future arc centered around them. You can expect about one woman/60-80 chapters average I would say. If you have any questions or comments don't hesitate to state them. Enjoy the ride! No NTR, no yuri.

LV 13

1_EyedKing

Ok so for the people looking to see if you should red this, I’m going to be very honest…the starting is kinda off coz the author just behave writing and he takes a while to get into his flow, but once he does the novel quality improves greatly…the main character is relatable, and the BEST part is that none of the Harem members are forgotten and each get equal screen time and interactions with the main character and the story in general. Every character is really well done, there have even been characters who first came off as obnoxious and arrogant, but they go through great character development and grow on you. So please do give it a try. It’s a great slice of life harem story, the main character is a villain who does what’s needed for himself, but he has morals he doesn’t go after innocent people and just slaughter cities for fun he is willing to rob and kill if they help him reach his goals, he mostly kills bad guys but he’s not one to be a hero for no reason especially when him and his loved ones could be in danger.

LV 13

LightYagami2000

A marvelous example of what not to write. A truly cursed piece of literature that belongs in the realm of trash. Authors of novels like these like to think of themselves as sophisticated individuals that're challenging the norm by writing harem cr*p, while in reality they're just insecure edgy mor*ns who get off on writing stuff like this.

LV 11

MalonElris

I didn't like this story at first. I enjoy faster power ups etc. but I won't lie I toughed it out, the main character grows on you. is self aware, and actually knows he is hypocritical sometimes. his harem are all unique personalities. smut was creative and not generic. my only only complaint and it's very light. is it took so long for a significant power up/relationship with main lady. frustrating but that's the point I guess making you invested. if you like villain stories and harem, absolutely no reason to skip this.

LV 15

Hijak

What a gem. Great MC development Great story Great Harem design and development My favorite part is the back story of the characters and how it explains how most villians are created and not born. Watching good people turn to the dark side based on the happenstance is truly enjoyable.

LV 12

Entomodachi

Great story, very addictive! I like that the main character is not an usual goody two shoes hero.

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Daoist913668

Very well written, dialogues are lively and interesting, character development is great, MC is competent, the system isn t the end all be all. 4 stars on the world because I m sure this author could have created something even better. That and I am a pos. Sorry author, I mean good things :D

LV 15

Synge64

Great book, keep it up author! I have no idea if you have other stuff, but I am definitely going to check it out after I finish writing this.

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Micke1

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DarkR1vers_Leander

great book,awesome character development ..I like the way the mc does not depend on the system..A very funny book..Thanks man keep up the good work..

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Schmelkenboy

I only read the "free to read" part(about 45 chapters, but I do think that the story and the development is quite well written. Also, can we talk about the fact how NecroBin postes 14 Chapters a Week?! I recommend this novel.

LV 3

BlueberyTempest

Nice! A harem story with system! Exactly what I've been looking for! Writing is nice and pacing is great with good grammar. Will there be yuri in this?

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SkyPolaris_r5t

First of all, why is the MC so obsequious? This behaviour feels contradictory after how much he yapped in internal monologue that he's going to be some uncaring antihero. So far (ch 40) he has been excessively flattering his first slave harem member and acting deferential toward her. I'm not sure if the author realizes the contradictory behaviour of the main character. I don't know why they introduced him so antihero like and pulled bullshit like this so soon. I now understand complaints of readers saying the MC is not evil. It's because of this and the author seems to cannot figure it out. And the battles, (ch 40) when surrounded by monsters, the MC is stopping for a significant portion of the chapter to admire his slave harem member. And the monsters stop and wait for him to finish. WOW. I also saw a reader mention that after 170 chapters it is his 8th day in the world? After such a grand sypsnosis you f*ck with us like this? Really? Laughable. Although it is not the worst I've seen here.

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Abc_Xyz_8200

one of the best starts of any novel ive read. I loved this very much up until about chapter 220 where the ntr of inn keeper lady phase starts. the story was going all good and fine what was the need of adding ntr. tried reading ahead but it just puts me off. just add the NTR tag so people like me aren't disappointed

LV 3

AhmmBurger

Its a good novel, nothing to say about it if i dont say the good points. For those who only read free chapters like me its slow as fk because in 28 chapters the mc only gained 1 lvl in 2 of the 4 classes that he have (1 lvl each) and keeps beign poor and dont know nothing about the world so its like the first 5 minutes of every anime, thats how much slow paced is this at the start but is good, i dont have the patience to read the things that will happen and less if i know it like this time because u can see easily how the history is going

LV 14

DaoistCudg85

A nice, yet twisted way for the plot to thicken. Excellent ending to the chapter, making the reader anxious for the next chapter from the author

LV 4

DaoisttbRSW8

a very enjoyable and good read. world background is slowly and steadily established which makes it a good story

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Mav_eriks

It's refreshing to see a MC not having a hero complex who just wishes to live freely and has his priorities ( having a harem with strong & powerful girls) set. It is definitely worth a try and looking forward to more chaps.

LV 13

Princess_Treasure

I like the MC and his realistic thinking fr. Having the hero complex have put many in trouble. The writing style is easy to read and the author clearly has a sense of humour that he adds to his writing. I recommend!