Naruto: Just a Background character

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JaxWolf4

Did someone say Toji?

LV 4

Mister_Robot

overall, it's not a bad fanfic. If the MC is given a personality, it would improve drastically. There are very few interactions or even monologues, therefore he's about as interesting as the terms and conditions of a PC game

LV 13

kingGenovaGodfrey

there's a lot of potential but the chapters are to short

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yanyan_6515

Author i hope that MC looks like toji and be a menace like himl

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ParadoxMind

This doesn't seem bad, considering that it only has 6 chapters so far. The potential for greatness is there. Just keep the story clean and don't overly complicate things and you're good. Also, a little slide remark, please don't make this some overly 'tragic' story and at least let him have some friends to talk with. Helps to freshen up the content pool. All in all, can become something great, keep cooking. Cheers.

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Aaron_Vittore

ok just a few issues involving the Mc, the Mc is weak but stealthy enough that he shouldn't be found by even the hokage sarutobi, but somehow every person he fights has every possible means to finding an invisible character. it feels pointles for him to have this one skill because it doesn't do what it is supposed to. it feels like forced tension for no reason other than to draw out everything. that or the author thought him have a great invisible skill decided to nerf the main character without actually nerfing the main character, but by boosting every one else in some way.

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Brent_6064

this story frustrates me the more I read it so...

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Abdul_Rahman_5112

I see the potential author, js keep doing what your doing you got a good mc rn

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gustavo_hhhhdsd

the quality of writing is good so far, the story continues to seem very interesting, I just don't feel that this story will have an end, as authors almost always end up dominating these works (mainly because they don't have the story planned) I just hope that Keep going like this for at least 100 chapters and I'll be happy (yes, I don't have much hope that it will go beyond that)

LV 14

lindre

Writing is pretty good but the author has one of the worst story pacing i have ever read in my life. Massive turn off!

LV 4

RisingGrace

Good fanfic just a couple of things the author should fix in my opinion. like how there is way too many chapters for one mission for example there are like 15 chapters so far for the first mission and 5 of them are just a single fight with a special jonin.

LV 13

Ujay

Has potential but need more chapter for proper review. I’ll come back when there’re at least 20 chapter

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Weaver007

Author has written the MC well. It's an interesting read and easy to get hooked into. I just wished there was more chapters. Would definitely recommend this to people to read! I can't wait to see how this story continues, author please bless us with more chapters 😭😭

LV 13

CHEON_MA

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I have been looking for fanfiction for thousands of chapters for a very long time because I love to read and I saw the tags of this fanfiction, I have great hope for it, the author, don’t give up on your job, good luck

LV 4

Haidarah

this work is a piece of art, that what happens when someone put all of his efforts to something, Start reading already and you won't regret it. the mc strength is growing at steady pase , and his personality is so acceptable. and most importantly this work has no Cringy lines! !.

LV 1

DaoistdvmqKl

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Papa_Frita

god.....................................

LV 1

Nischal_1116

A great one to read, I giving this 4 star instead of 5 star is because he deletes the reviews that he doesn't like👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍