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So far, so good. I'm still at the very beginning, so I can't give a final assessment yet, but so far I like it 🙏🏻
This is a dissapointment. I have been reading ‘Void evolution system’ for years now, and its the best work i have ever laid my eyes on, and cant recommend it enough. And when i saw it was finnished and a new novel by crocs was being written and released i was really exited. I will be honest and say that i was a little surprised to see that he completely dropped the universe and progression system of his previous work, but no big deal. However, the writing quality, character progression, stability, and exitement i had gotten used to was gone. Suddenly the main character leaves his "parents" which he said how mich he loved through words and expressions, just to go explore a tower he sees for the first time. He has knowledge and skills from his previous life, and doesnt really struggle with anything. Instead of struggling and getting stronger through a high quality and exitting adventure, he just magically works things out. Compared to Void evolution system, this whole work, as far as i have read, is a massive disappointment, and i will not spend my money or time on it. I expected something amazing, and got something which feels like the author saw succsess and didnt bother building a quality story once again, but still wanted a quick buck from fans.
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A bit confusing with the time jumps but all in all, quite interesting. I like it
It’s croc and he never fails to disappoint Please make a sequel of some sort for void tho😭🙏 I’m literally addicted to that book. Read it like 6 times
sighs.... your first novel was very good, why give me such false hope Author he was someone who literally has thousands of years experience in a battlefield, fought with blood and everything. yet he doesn't even understand his body acts on impulse doesn't even gain anything from his memory qi control is zero what is the use of his memories it's only that treasure that is giving him everything, which you could just give him the treasure in his present life The thoudands of years of experience literally gave him no advantage the only thing good here is your writing quality
So far so good does have some second life ranker vibes, even though instead of brothers it’s the same soul slowly integrating into each other to become one. Decent world building, story can be a little slow in some parts but overall good pacing. Can’t say it’s 5 starts but definitely has some promise and can’t wait to see how it plays out.
So far, it’s great, but just a warning for anybody. There are things that don’t make any sense. The pacing is slow and then all of a sudden rushed when he regains some of his memories. He leaves the family that took him off the street just to go run out the tower, the second he regained his memories. He gets a system or system like thing, even though he is the reincarnation of a god tier cultivator who probably doesn’t need it. He gets handed the best cultivation method randomly. It’s a glorified OP MC fic. Meanwhile, the character design is really good so far. I haven’t read a whole lot yet. I’m in the middle of binge reading it, but I felt like this should be like a record as my first thoughts and feelings about the story at this point. Don’t get me wrong, the MC himself before he regains his memories is someone that was well thought out and designed. I just feel like everything’s about to be handed to him by the system, even though he has memories, fractured as they may be, of his past life as a literal God. It just feels unnecessary.
finally the cultivation novel is out🗣️ y'all can trust the writing quality. would recommend 10/10.
It's the one and only author who would name himself after a shoe back at it again with another banger novel! In all seriousness, I had a lot of fun with this idea. It explores genres that are already well known, but I like to think that I put my own unique twist on things. I hope you all enjoy it as much as I do!
I have only skimmed throught some chapters to evaluate but I will not continue due to the personality of the Mc. While I do agree that character development is often a crucial aspect of a novel to make it interesting, authors shouldn’t use this as an excuse (which they often do) for the lead to be the stupid type with no common sense to a slightly less stupid type due to their writing. Here the premise is that it’s an old monster and we don’t see it very well. There should be no character developement about him in the normal sense. Maybe the other way around by him behind too indifferent and detached to a more humane personality, but it’s far from that in this novel even considering the merger part.
So far, so good. I'm still at the very beginning, so I can't give a final assessment yet, but so far I like it 🙏🏻
This is a dissapointment. I have been reading ‘Void evolution system’ for years now, and its the best work i have ever laid my eyes on, and cant recommend it enough. And when i saw it was finnished and a new novel by crocs was being written and released i was really exited. I will be honest and say that i was a little surprised to see that he completely dropped the universe and progression system of his previous work, but no big deal. However, the writing quality, character progression, stability, and exitement i had gotten used to was gone. Suddenly the main character leaves his "parents" which he said how mich he loved through words and expressions, just to go explore a tower he sees for the first time. He has knowledge and skills from his previous life, and doesnt really struggle with anything. Instead of struggling and getting stronger through a high quality and exitting adventure, he just magically works things out. Compared to Void evolution system, this whole work, as far as i have read, is a massive disappointment, and i will not spend my money or time on it. I expected something amazing, and got something which feels like the author saw succsess and didnt bother building a quality story once again, but still wanted a quick buck from fans.
Membuka SPOILER A bit confusing with the time jumps but all in all, quite interesting. I like it
It’s croc and he never fails to disappoint Please make a sequel of some sort for void tho😭🙏 I’m literally addicted to that book. Read it like 6 times
sighs.... your first novel was very good, why give me such false hope Author he was someone who literally has thousands of years experience in a battlefield, fought with blood and everything. yet he doesn't even understand his body acts on impulse doesn't even gain anything from his memory qi control is zero what is the use of his memories it's only that treasure that is giving him everything, which you could just give him the treasure in his present life The thoudands of years of experience literally gave him no advantage the only thing good here is your writing quality
So far so good does have some second life ranker vibes, even though instead of brothers it’s the same soul slowly integrating into each other to become one. Decent world building, story can be a little slow in some parts but overall good pacing. Can’t say it’s 5 starts but definitely has some promise and can’t wait to see how it plays out.
So far, it’s great, but just a warning for anybody. There are things that don’t make any sense. The pacing is slow and then all of a sudden rushed when he regains some of his memories. He leaves the family that took him off the street just to go run out the tower, the second he regained his memories. He gets a system or system like thing, even though he is the reincarnation of a god tier cultivator who probably doesn’t need it. He gets handed the best cultivation method randomly. It’s a glorified OP MC fic. Meanwhile, the character design is really good so far. I haven’t read a whole lot yet. I’m in the middle of binge reading it, but I felt like this should be like a record as my first thoughts and feelings about the story at this point. Don’t get me wrong, the MC himself before he regains his memories is someone that was well thought out and designed. I just feel like everything’s about to be handed to him by the system, even though he has memories, fractured as they may be, of his past life as a literal God. It just feels unnecessary.
finally the cultivation novel is out🗣️ y'all can trust the writing quality. would recommend 10/10.
It's the one and only author who would name himself after a shoe back at it again with another banger novel! In all seriousness, I had a lot of fun with this idea. It explores genres that are already well known, but I like to think that I put my own unique twist on things. I hope you all enjoy it as much as I do!
I have only skimmed throught some chapters to evaluate but I will not continue due to the personality of the Mc. While I do agree that character development is often a crucial aspect of a novel to make it interesting, authors shouldn’t use this as an excuse (which they often do) for the lead to be the stupid type with no common sense to a slightly less stupid type due to their writing. Here the premise is that it’s an old monster and we don’t see it very well. There should be no character developement about him in the normal sense. Maybe the other way around by him behind too indifferent and detached to a more humane personality, but it’s far from that in this novel even considering the merger part.