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WillMissQ
male LV 13I’ve read a lot so if I critique your book, just know it’s just tough love and I’m most likely gonna keep on reading... unless your novel is trash and the grammar sucks
2017-10-27 Bergabung United States
Oh so he has a flash step but didn’t use it to dodge? Unnecessary damage smh. Unnecessary fighting scene dragged out.
"The Flash Step isn't about speed," he'd explained, demonstrating the technique. "It's about economy of motion. Eliminate wasted movement. Become efficient. Become inevitable."
My Hero Academia: Izuku Reloaded
Anime & Comics · WisteriaNovels
This whole fight was pointless because for someone who’s supposed to be so smart and use other people’s quirks to help himself, he sure went Rambo for no fucking reason.
Create a fire extinguisher and use it on Bakugou. That turns off his quirk entirely lol
"True." She tapped her chin. "I could create caltrops or adhesive traps to limit his mobility. Combined with smoke grenades for cover..."
My Hero Academia: Izuku Reloaded
Anime & Comics · WisteriaNovels
"What... what are you doing?!" Stiles stammered.
Teen Wolf: Alpha Reborn
TV · Ayoub_AMZ
This chapter felt incredibly short and purposely cut in half
"Truly an impressive performance! I would guess your… past gave you the right amount of experience, correct? Overall, 68 Villain points! Easily putting you in the top 10 spots of examinees!" All might laughed, hands still on his hips, and that damn smile still shining.
MHA : Rabbit & Spider
Anime & Comics · Huvnn
"Oh my gosh! That's so cool! If you eat a clam, do you get its shell? Wait, what about a horse? What if you eat a rock? Do you become a rock? That'd be so cool! Tell me what you can do, Amajiki-Kun! Have you ever tried t-"
MHA : Rabbit & Spider
Anime & Comics · Huvnn
You keep her gender at halfway through the chapter. There’s several points where you call her a he in the first half and then in the bottom half it’s a girl. Gotta get your genders right. I doubt the dog is a part of the alphabet gang.
"You underestimate the power of motivation."
MHA: The Sentry
Anime & Comics · S4tus
BL girl obsessed with Bakugo and Deku smh
She could finally pair them together.
MHA: The Sentry
Anime & Comics · S4tus
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original I Can Be A Hero?
2.83
Jake Griffs was a normal guy. He just finished high school, has no girlfriend, and is just starting college. He thought that his life was going to be typical and average but that all changed when the rules changed. One day, he was reading an old Superman comic on his laptop when giant meteors start to fall all over the planet and one crashes into his dorm building. The concussive blast knocks him out and when he wakes up later, in the hospital, he hears a voice telling him, "Superman System activated." ~~~~~~~ Literally a brand new author, I am writing this just because I'm bored. Enjoy. This will go where the readers take it. I will create a discord and we can talk about some characters and I will be taking advice on my mistakes. And English is my only language (no need to worry about shit grammar). Thank you. I don't own the above image. I just thought it was cool. Never will go premium and don't accept patreons. Just enjoy the novel. Let system-chan make your day. Discord: https://discord.gg/yBxcpX530 Chs 1.5k Koleksi
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What is this Superman System?
This is my reboot. Gonna work on the synopsis later. I suck at them lmao.3 Chs 268 Koleksi
Would you prefer “repeat suicide bomber”?
"Would you prefer 'walking safety hazard'?" She consulted her tablet. "Mild concussion. Three broken ribs. Strained tendons in both wrists from improper recoil management. First-degree burns despite your quirk's resistance - meaning you exceeded even your own tolerances. Possible micro-fractures in your right ulna."
My Hero Academia: Izuku Reloaded
Anime & Comics · WisteriaNovels