I'm about to speed run all of these corrections let's see how long it takes me to get them done
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Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
Your first two complaints are understandable, because those are mistakes I intentionally had him make, so it's really just a matter of preference, but what about the last? Atlas has definitely also been working for what he's received and I would say that his luck is a lot worse than Damien's, especially if you just look at the first hundred or two hundred chaps. I'm curious about what makes you feel like he's being handed everything.
Most likely, it's the same as the other ones where I just didn't catch it in editing 😅
There were eight concepts associated with the Dao of Fire. They were the Concepts of Combustion, Ignition, Superheat, Materialization, Emberforging, Ethereal Alchemy, Nirvana, and Everburn.
Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
Nope. This is another mistake I didn't catch that was part of the old concept before it got changed into what it is now
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Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
Oops lol it was the original name of the Heavenly Unification Law before the concept changed
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Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
That was the main inspiration for the idea lol but I promise it's a vastly different story
It's the one and only author who would name himself after a shoe back at it again with another banger novel! In all seriousness, I had a lot of fun with this idea. It explores genres that are already well known, but I like to think that I put my own unique twist on things. I hope you all enjoy it as much as I do!
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That was how Damien's week-long combat circuit cum training lesson began.
Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
I tried to fix it but since it's already posted wn won't let me delete more than 100 words :(
See I knew I accidentally wrote mana somewhere but I was never able to find it so this is an amazing comment to get
Tower of Heaven
Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead