SON OF DUNE

Name: SON OF DUNE
Rating: 4.52 (25 reviews)
Author: Kingoffrogs

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Penulis: Kingoffrogs

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Let me make it clear, dune is not my creation. What you're about to read is a piece of fan fiction, a work inspired by the original.

The book Dune introduces us to the main character, Paul Atreides. The bene gesserit instructed his mother to have a daughter, but she disobeyed the reverend's mother and decided to have a boy.

Lady Jessica was meant to give birth to Paul and only Paul, but one day, she lost control of her body; she was able to choose the gender of Paul, but in her womb, a second child was formed, and he was called Damon Atreides.
Lady Jessica had given birth to two boys, but on the day the twins were born, they were put into a room to let Lady Jessica rest. but not minutes after this happened, one of the children, Damon, vanished.

Duke Leto searched for his youngest son Damon but was not found, and no evidence of kidnapping was shown. he pressed himself into work and focused on Paul to become the next duke after him.

The question was, where is Damon Atreides? The answer is that the baby was transported to planet Arrakis and raised by the freemen people.
they called him the young worm

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there were a decent amount of mistakes in writing, but in very wird ways, which makes me think the author doesn't proofread. the story starts in a narrators point of view for 3 chapters, and it's just so bad i couldn't stand it (i continued till chapter 4 btw). In chapter 4, there was finally some dialogue. Now let's talk about the mc. He is a reincarnator because he got some wishes. as Paul's twin, he suddenly gets teleported to arrakis as a baby and he grows up there. At ten years old, he is super strong and allat, defeated multiple Fremen warriors because he has instant mastery. Wears a crimson stilsuit(?) and gives food to other kids, which were in his inventory, to gain their loyalty. It just seems like the author had some ideas, didn't care if it would end up well and just mashed it all together to form this. Perhaps if he got rid of some of the weird stuff like crimson stillsuit and star lord mask and fleshed the introduction out from the pov of characters, it could've been better.