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Am interested where this leads big supporter here hope you update more frequently cause I can’t get enough It turned a sad direction at chapter 78 or 79 see everything just go completely depressing but I wanna see how you write this best of luck in you achieving your goals😊💯
Really good novel ur cooking author👍👍 its definitely unique i really like it💯 the plot is great etc
Not much to say, i love this story keep going author you're cooking, i'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters
The story is very developed to the point that you can tell it was made with love and care. But please do not abandon it, unlike other novels I read this one is the only one that made me enjoy reading web novels again.
The story development is quite slow paced and so is the updating status . Though it is quite troublesome to get a clear idea of MC'S personality or mindset. Sometimes the story feels to forcefully lengthened, missing its natural flow . But it still has a captivating storyline and background, making reading it enjoyable
Author, just tell me one thing, will Van have one wife or not? Because, the way his friend's wife are reacting, I don't like it. i particularly prefer no polygamy or harem for this novel of yours, so if you enlightened me.
Nice story, mc and hmc dynamic mix greatly and growth as the story develop, even a slightiest move are organize as if interecting in real time. Wish for more update [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
great story telling so far. somethings frustrate me as reader about the characters developement but I respect your creativity 👌
I will say, I don't think this Fanfic deserves 5 stars for the update, but it's so good that I'm going to leave it like that, but all the other 5 stars it certainly deserves
Main characters get NTR'd. Author tries to play this of because of the hero's "passives" but instead of coming clean and telling the MC about it they continue to sneak around behind his back. Absolutely awful friend, If he had any respect or comradery with the MC he would have told him straight away. No justification whatsoever for his actions. 1 Star
I am loving the story so far. But i will be disappointed if he will have a relationship with the daughters of his former party. Because mc is becoming a cupcake man tbh or relationship with his former party or humans they will just die of old age fast, he should go to the secure one like the demon king. And also update daily if possible.
It’s a great novel i just hate Magus, Amoria and the mc.For example he didn’t even do anything when found out that his scum of a BESTFRIEND (Magus the hero) was sleeping with his girl. And no one in the party even told him what was happening. And now the girls from his former party are probably going to be throwing themselves at him. The only reason they’re doing that is because Magus is dead. And he’s not even mad, so you should get why a lot of people hate mc. Hes just not likable. I like your other novels but the mc in this one I loathe I only read this because I wanted him to get revenge after getting cucked by his bestfriend. And he doesn’t even act coldly when he meets his party members again, he just acts like their his friends that he hasn’t seen in a long time. But what kind of friends doesn’t tell you that your girlfriend is sleeping with your boyfriend Does he have no sense of pride, no self respect. He even realized that Alicia the demon queen was just trying a new method but noo he’s to much of a coward to go back and confront. And instead he goes back to that thot Amoria. It’s honestly pathetic.
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good book, has good pace for the story and even better character design (made me tear up a few times) is a most definite recommendation. and good job author 👍
Solid novel with excellent writing. The direction isn't one that most people on WN would enjoy, but if you have a few brain cells to enjoy a story, do give this a read. I enjoy this one more than his other works. And tbh, I would much prefer if mc didn't have a harem and ends up with... let's say best girl, but that is up to the author. I'm sure I'll enjoy the story anyways. Keep up the great work!
I like this novel, because the MC is a genuinely good person and i hope he has a relationship with the demon lord
I was really let down by this story, especially after enjoying the author's other work, 'Anti-NTR Man.' Initially, it seemed like it was heading in a direction I liked, but it quickly took a turn for the worse. It felt like the story gave me hope and then just crushed it. I'm giving it 3 stars because the writing itself is solid, but honestly, I'm pretty disappointed.
This story is good, but the MC is very insecure and has low self-esteem, I know it's because of what he went through, but his friend, MAX or MAGUS, wasn't nice to him, he took our MC's only woman. It doesn't matter why MAGUS did it, it really doesn't matter why, for me there is no forgiveness. The fact that Mc forgives this MAGUS and his cheating girlfriend drives me crazy, unfortunately this story attracted me much more than this depressive MC and the obscenities.
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I really like all your stories , but this one is better for me ! Please , update more often . .............................................................
The author clarified that those two were never actually dating it was in a chapter can’t remember which one tho van was hurt sure but really he thought about it in his head on why he actually didn’t care about it when she confessed that she likes Magus his best friend and then she started crying that he was indifferent to it not giving a shit😂 and her running away
Am interested where this leads big supporter here hope you update more frequently cause I can’t get enough It turned a sad direction at chapter 78 or 79 see everything just go completely depressing but I wanna see how you write this best of luck in you achieving your goals😊💯
Really good novel ur cooking author👍👍 its definitely unique i really like it💯 the plot is great etc
Not much to say, i love this story keep going author you're cooking, i'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters
The story is very developed to the point that you can tell it was made with love and care. But please do not abandon it, unlike other novels I read this one is the only one that made me enjoy reading web novels again.
The story development is quite slow paced and so is the updating status . Though it is quite troublesome to get a clear idea of MC'S personality or mindset. Sometimes the story feels to forcefully lengthened, missing its natural flow . But it still has a captivating storyline and background, making reading it enjoyable
Author, just tell me one thing, will Van have one wife or not? Because, the way his friend's wife are reacting, I don't like it. i particularly prefer no polygamy or harem for this novel of yours, so if you enlightened me.
Nice story, mc and hmc dynamic mix greatly and growth as the story develop, even a slightiest move are organize as if interecting in real time. Wish for more update [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
great story telling so far. somethings frustrate me as reader about the characters developement but I respect your creativity 👌
I will say, I don't think this Fanfic deserves 5 stars for the update, but it's so good that I'm going to leave it like that, but all the other 5 stars it certainly deserves
Main characters get NTR'd. Author tries to play this of because of the hero's "passives" but instead of coming clean and telling the MC about it they continue to sneak around behind his back. Absolutely awful friend, If he had any respect or comradery with the MC he would have told him straight away. No justification whatsoever for his actions. 1 Star
I am loving the story so far. But i will be disappointed if he will have a relationship with the daughters of his former party. Because mc is becoming a cupcake man tbh or relationship with his former party or humans they will just die of old age fast, he should go to the secure one like the demon king. And also update daily if possible.
It’s a great novel i just hate Magus, Amoria and the mc.For example he didn’t even do anything when found out that his scum of a BESTFRIEND (Magus the hero) was sleeping with his girl. And no one in the party even told him what was happening. And now the girls from his former party are probably going to be throwing themselves at him. The only reason they’re doing that is because Magus is dead. And he’s not even mad, so you should get why a lot of people hate mc. Hes just not likable. I like your other novels but the mc in this one I loathe I only read this because I wanted him to get revenge after getting cucked by his bestfriend. And he doesn’t even act coldly when he meets his party members again, he just acts like their his friends that he hasn’t seen in a long time. But what kind of friends doesn’t tell you that your girlfriend is sleeping with your boyfriend Does he have no sense of pride, no self respect. He even realized that Alicia the demon queen was just trying a new method but noo he’s to much of a coward to go back and confront. And instead he goes back to that thot Amoria. It’s honestly pathetic.
Membuka SPOILER good book, has good pace for the story and even better character design (made me tear up a few times) is a most definite recommendation. and good job author 👍
Solid novel with excellent writing. The direction isn't one that most people on WN would enjoy, but if you have a few brain cells to enjoy a story, do give this a read. I enjoy this one more than his other works. And tbh, I would much prefer if mc didn't have a harem and ends up with... let's say best girl, but that is up to the author. I'm sure I'll enjoy the story anyways. Keep up the great work!
I like this novel, because the MC is a genuinely good person and i hope he has a relationship with the demon lord
I was really let down by this story, especially after enjoying the author's other work, 'Anti-NTR Man.' Initially, it seemed like it was heading in a direction I liked, but it quickly took a turn for the worse. It felt like the story gave me hope and then just crushed it. I'm giving it 3 stars because the writing itself is solid, but honestly, I'm pretty disappointed.
This story is good, but the MC is very insecure and has low self-esteem, I know it's because of what he went through, but his friend, MAX or MAGUS, wasn't nice to him, he took our MC's only woman. It doesn't matter why MAGUS did it, it really doesn't matter why, for me there is no forgiveness. The fact that Mc forgives this MAGUS and his cheating girlfriend drives me crazy, unfortunately this story attracted me much more than this depressive MC and the obscenities.
Membuka SPOILER I really like all your stories , but this one is better for me ! Please , update more often . .............................................................
The author clarified that those two were never actually dating it was in a chapter can’t remember which one tho van was hurt sure but really he thought about it in his head on why he actually didn’t care about it when she confessed that she likes Magus his best friend and then she started crying that he was indifferent to it not giving a shit😂 and her running away