Luis_Luiz

This was neither absurd nor ridiculous, but rather pathetic! This story was great so far, but Toji having so much trouble defeating the Joker and Harley was just... Bad. And before anyone says that this happens sometimes in comics, let's make this clear, all readers hate it when this happens! Even the biggest absurdities in comics are not so forced!

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A crazy and volatile personality, but yes, still an incredible personality .

What exactly was the liberty you took with Maeve's story? Everything except the details looks as per the TV series

But you only posted six actual chapters and in those chapters you simply gave us an extended version of the synopsis, nothing too deep about the story !

Self-insert fanfics always ignore the "Narrative Force" of Marvel's Status Quo. Doing so would cause Zola to possibly return someday to cause more trouble ! It would be better if Peter knew this and killed him right after taking down Hydra and use your technology to make your own A.I. !

Lorenzo is the Don of this criminal group , he should not get personally involved in these schemes so he cannot be legally implicated in them !

This story always managed to be very entertaining, funny, distressing and sad but this chapter really made me cry. You have talent self-san! Thanks for the excellent story.

The twins working for Hydra in exchange for resurrecting their brother when there are many other , much easier ways to secure their services seems like something straight out of the comics . Is this MCU with comic book logic ?

What a shame it's already over , it was incredibly fun and scary to see what a "Realistic" NTR Logic with permanent character development would be like !