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Kenshin is a boy who doesn't have a Gnosis.
He doesn't have the ability to rewind time when he dies.
He doesn't have memories of another world.
He definitely, DEFINITELY, doesn't have a system.
To be fair, he doesn't even have a Vision.
And yet, even he has something that makes him unique.
He can see souls.



NOT A FIGHTING FIC (Not so sure anymore), WEAK MC (still true). You are warned, don't complain later.
No NTR or yuri, just so you know.
I own nothing from this work, as there is no brain behind it.
The image is, obviously an AI generated one, this time 'mine'.
Lastly, Patreon. Yes, just my name. patreon.com/ARandomMob

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ARandomMob

I know I'm a pain, but I will write it here too, so you are warned. This is NOT a fighting fic, despite what it sounds like, he won't fight until chapters 90+. It's supposed to be a fun fic, with some exaggerations with dramatic purposes. I am writing chapter 96, so I won't be able to change many things even if I want to. If you still decide to go forward, enjoy.

8mth
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DaoistF5KTaN

This is one of the best genshin ffs I have read. The content is original, the humor is gold and the story got me hooked. It was sooo good that for the first time ever, I felt compelled to give review right after finishing the most recent chapter and I have close to 1000 hours of reading. Great job Author and keep up the good work.

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8mth
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tyu_al
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funny, well written, just a really good story.

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8mth
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Bing_Hong_Woo

The story has no real problem per say the update and grammar is good the only problem is the mc to put it bluntly he acts like an idiot he is constantly rude despite being raised in a shrine full of shrine maidens and he lacks common sense while this may be attributed to him being young the way he acts despite living in a place with probably the most polite people is slightly annoying I personally can't stand such characters so until I can get used or tolerate this kind of attitude better I'll probably stop reading and come back on a later date despite all that good work author keep it up

8mth
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Imperators_Slave

Great start maybe it's another diamond in a thousand rubbish

8mth
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Sir_Aaron_9542

This fic is tied for the singular best fanfic I've read on this platform. From the slightly unhinged comedy, to the actually serious moments, I loved every second of it. This made Inazuma as a whole so much more interesting, and honestly makes the Shogun's decisions seem even worse than in-game. Now that the fic (or at least the Genshin arc of the fic) is over, I will immensely miss Kenshin's antics and I kinda wish we got to see more of his family before it ended. But author, know that, from the bottom of my heart...

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Santy_Melay

Another Genshin Impact fanfic where the protagonist has no vision (they keep piling up), and this one is worse since it's not about fighting and the protagonist is a coward.

8mth
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VastoLordMask

one of the best genshin fanfics that ioever read every chapteri Burst my guts laughting

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Kronos_
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A great story, I highly recommend it 😌😌😌

5mth
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Grumpyassasin

Honestly, what started as a fun fic. With comedic elements turned into such a beautifuly told story. This story alone raised my standards a couple of levels. Author thank you very much for this masterpiece, and I shall await your reuturn with more.

5mth
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Argent_Evergarden1

HONEST REVIEW!! First thing first I want to thank the author for bringing this amazing story to life. What I thought was a brain rot crack fic turned out to be genuinely one of my favorite stories I came across on this app. World/Charater development: the world is Genshin but where many would start at cannon with lumine/aither arriving and use already existing personality’s to create a plot the author started Years before cannon and beacuse of this was able to flesh out many character personality’s and make them feel as real as anyone else. Each person introduced feels alive with backstory’s that match there personality’s to the point where not once did it feel out of character even if it they are diffrent from cannon. My thoughts on the MC: I thought at first I was gonna have a hard time likeing a weak mc since I generally like strong/op mc’s but to my surprise from the start I couldn’t NOT like the mc. He was funny, likeable and smart about the way he did things. In the beginning he was immature and funny, then he became a reliable person who pranks others, and after that he became mature but still kept his mischievous nature and it didn’t feel overdone. I never once thought I didn’t like the mc and there were many times he surprised me. Even though the mc was weak he didn’t really feel like it, anything that he couldn’t beat with strenght he would outsmart and even if he couldn’t win he was never put in a truely disadvantageous situation where he couldn’t work his way around with a little help. The mc IS NOT A REINCARNATED PERSON! He is just a normal boy born with a unique ability that shaped who is was. And I loved it. Story development: Before starting the story the author warns people -Mc is Weak till around chapter 90+ -This is a crack fic/ Slice of life with little to no fights until chapter 90+ They didn’t lie it is genuinely like that till 90+ but it is not bad you barely notice how weak the mc is because he never lets himself be in a truely bad spot and if needed has backup from powerful people. From the start it is a crack fic like we were told and it never truely felt to be too much. The author mixed crack with plot so well that you are never bored with either. Even when you hit chapter 90 there are still crack moments you get to enjoy with the new action added into the story. This story never left me bored and always added new elements to keep the reader interested. The mc’s power while not strong at the start felt special and he never felt like a simple background character. Now 90+ he can use said ability to become a genuine threat to whoever tries him and I love it. The shift between weak to strong doesn’t feel unearned. Everytime he got a small power up it was either through his own effort or his sacrifice. OVERALL: I loved this story and I will wait as long as it takes for the author to continue. Genuinly my top 10 in this app.

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00Mark

As a kid-mc hater i honestly didn't expect this novel to be good but have to admit the writing is very entertaining, specially considering how the mc has no goal (crafting a body was a temporary one) and just exists to be annoying, gave me some Xu Que from The Ultimate Scheming System vibes (Xu Que is annoying because of the system, i know) But sadly i'm dropping it because i'm not into yuri, yeah it may be a just harmless joke (a suspiciously recurrent one) but i'm not taking any chances. Also sorry but i can't respect the choice of "trading" his eyesight to create a body for someone who's not even from his family, i'm sure he will recover it later but lets pretend he doesn't, no matter how you put it, he's blind and will remain blind until his last days, meanwhile the god will be enjoying life.

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Not_enough_ot

Wow! this took three days, even during work, to read this masterpiece? The adrenaline, excitement, and comedy are a perfect blend. Out of hundreds of fanfics, yours has blown me away. Your characters are so vivid – it's like I know them personally. And your original protagonist? Absolute perfection. The ending was a roller coaster, and that twist? Genius! The way you captured the story, the characters, their relationships... it's masterful storytelling. Please don't leave us hanging – this fanfic you've created deserves so much more!

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Kemal_Kuku

its amazing, i hope the story dont dropp

8mth
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Pointles

Basically, if you love Lloyd Frontera read this.

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Battlexray_Gaming

I am writing this review 67 chapters in. Now, let me say this in a few words. This book is Top-tier. It has one of the best world building, accurate character depictions and a very fresh take on Genshin Impact. I will be hard pressed to find a better fic than this(Not just Genshin).Without necessarily having an OP MC, this book still is able to be a partial wish fulfilment fic, while also having the right smidges of humour and serious moments. The MC feels useful in his role and not just dude out to mess up the world. The MC takes his natural place in the world, while also making himself feel like a true part of the world, and not an Add On. It is my sincere request the author to continue this fic till its completion, whatever it may be.

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Bored_Reader_111

One of the best stories I have ever read so far.🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠

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Bakenekon

Really good, like super duper good. I have no knowledge of genshin coming into this but still thoroughly enjoyed, just keep a wiki page open in another tab for misc info or pics :)

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salben

I don't usually review but this one deserves it for me it's the best genshin fic that I have read .....................................................

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Tidas
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Its good so far and i hope it becomes great.

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Chapter 165: A Mother's Duality. 16 hours ago

Jilid 0 : Auxiliary Volume

  1. Rules of the fic. 8 months ago

Jilid 1

  1. 1
    The Annoyance arrived. 8 months ago
  2. 2
    The Blessing Ceremony 8 months ago
  3. 3
    A new home. 8 months ago
  4. 4
    Tale of a Cursed Man 8 months ago
  5. 5
    You are not aunt Kayo. 8 months ago
  6. 6
    Aunt Kayo was hungry. 8 months ago
  7. 7
    A travel full of surprises 8 months ago
  8. 8
    The Nice Grass-Eater 8 months ago
  9. 9
    A caught accomplice. 8 months ago
  10. 10
    A Tea-Sipping Dragon 8 months ago
  11. 11
    Shen-Zi 8 months ago
  12. 12
    A new job 8 months ago
  13. 13
    Letters and Sweet Madame 8 months ago
  14. 14
    A new friend 8 months ago
  15. 15
    No more Remnants 8 months ago
  16. 16
    The power of a Contract 8 months ago
  17. 17
    A new Title in Liyue 8 months ago
  18. 18
    Gifts and Farewells 8 months ago
  19. 19
    Traitors everywhere. 8 months ago
  20. 20
    New work. 8 months ago
  21. 21
    A romantic talk. 8 months ago
  22. 22
    Messing around Inazuma. 8 months ago
  23. 23
    I Resign 8 months ago
  24. 24
    Arriving at Liyue. Again 8 months ago
  25. 25
    Lupica 8 months ago
  26. 26
    A fine ambassador 8 months ago
  27. 27
    Awkward sisters 8 months ago
  28. 28
    The adventuring party assembles 8 months ago
  29. 29
    The end of the adventuring party 8 months ago
  30. 30
    Meeting new people it's overrated 8 months ago
  31. 31
    Mondstadt economy is a work of art 8 months ago
  32. 32
    The JRK is here 8 months ago
  33. 33
    The consequences of 'peeping' into a dark place 8 months ago
  34. 34
    Explanations about the peeping. 8 months ago
  35. 35
    Touching a friend 8 months ago
  36. 36
    Karma 8 months ago
  37. 37
    A talk about souls 8 months ago
  38. 38
    A possessed being 8 months ago
  39. 39
    Something Amaz- 8 months ago
  40. 40
    After 2000 years, they meet again 8 months ago
  41. 41
    Recap 8 months ago
  42. 42
    A cold meeting 8 months ago
  43. 43
    Shenhe's duality 8 months ago
  44. 44
    A goodbye letter 8 months ago
  45. 45
    Ready for departure 8 months ago
  46. 46
    Inazuma Arc (explanation) 8 months ago
  47. 47
    Inazuma Starts!!! 8 months ago
  48. 48
    Kenshin wants to be a writer 8 months ago
  49. 49
    A fashion designer 7 months ago
  50. 50
    Isn't she quite cute? 7 months ago
  51. 51
    It's time to duel 7 months ago
  52. 52
    Yae's cruelty 7 months ago
  53. 53
    The Decrees 7 months ago
  54. 54
    You are fired 7 months ago
  55. 55
    A new job, again 7 months ago
  56. 56
    A few plans start unfolding 7 months ago
  57. 57
    A misunderstood person 7 months ago
  58. 58
    The blindfolded blind guy 7 months ago
  59. 59
    Goodbye, for now 7 months ago
  60. 60
    More letters 7 months ago
  61. 61
    Even more letters 7 months ago
  62. 62
    A revelation 7 months ago
  63. 63
    My food is mine! 7 months ago
  64. 64
    Hmmm, nice talks 7 months ago
  65. 65
    The groom can't escape 7 months ago
  66. 66
    Interrupting has its consequences 7 months ago
  67. 67
    Drunkenness makes you spew bullsh*t 7 months ago
  68. 68
    Cold mask, burning soul 7 months ago
  69. 69
    Hot indeed 7 months ago
  70. 70
    So, the betrothal was real after all 7 months ago
  71. 71
    The last hot dance with the cold lady 7 months ago
  72. 72
    The last festival 7 months ago
  73. 73
    The strongest soul 7 months ago
  74. 74
    Raiden Ei 7 months ago
  75. 75
    Spilling out one's heart 7 months ago
  76. 76
    Once Again, ***** appears 7 months ago
  77. 77
    Perfect, now there are 2 of them 7 months ago
  78. 78
    Invitations to everyone! 7 months ago
  79. 79
    I'm the Shogun! 7 months ago
  80. 80
    Get the f*ck out of my house 7 months ago
  81. 81
    The Tome of Thay 7 months ago
  82. 82
    The dastardly plan 7 months ago
  83. 83
    Welcome, to MY lands 7 months ago
  84. 84
    The Duel for Vengeance 7 months ago
  85. 85
    The Alliance is formed 6 months ago
  86. 86
    Messing up...or not 6 months ago
  87. 87
    Hmmm, those boo- 6 months ago
  88. 88
    A Cold Meeting Times 2 6 months ago
  89. 89
    You can't do this to me 6 months ago
  90. 90
    How did she grow so much? 6 months ago
  91. 91
    How to write a letter 6 months ago
  92. 92
    Problems at home 6 months ago
  93. 93
    Cleaning the air 6 months ago
  94. 94
    The power of imagination 6 months ago
  95. 95
    First Date 6 months ago
  96. 96
    First Date 2 6 months ago
  97. 97
    Kujou Sara +18 6 months ago
  98. 98
    Makoto's date 6 months ago
  99. 99
    Something came out +18 6 months ago
  100. 100
    Leaving Eternity behind 6 months ago
  101. 101
    Power and Strength 6 months ago
  102. 102
    Kenshin's Plane 6 months ago
  103. 103
    Canon Starts! 6 months ago
  104. 104
    Born from eggs 6 months ago
  105. 105
    Lothario! 6 months ago
  106. 106
    Stormterror attacks, as usual 6 months ago
  107. 107
    Muhe Ye 6 months ago
  108. 108
    A little tour through the Plane 6 months ago
  109. 109
    I am God here 6 months ago
  110. 110
    The consequences of the book 6 months ago
  111. 111
    Another proposition 6 months ago
  112. 112
    You lost big time 6 months ago
  113. 113
    The Ditzy Succubus 6 months ago
  114. 114
    The Radiant Knight and the Snow Mountain 6 months ago
  115. 115
    Jean Gunnhildr 6 months ago
  116. 116
    Jean's wet dream +18 6 months ago
  117. 117
    An angry mother is scary 6 months ago
  118. 118
    Barbatos, the Anemo Archon 6 months ago
  119. 119
    A cultured talk 6 months ago
  120. 120
    There were too many flags 6 months ago
  121. 121
    Guizhong, the walking encyclopedia 6 months ago
  122. 122
    Our child 6 months ago
  123. 123
    This other book also has consequences 5 months ago
  124. 124
    The challenge 5 months ago
  125. 125
    Back again 5 months ago
  126. 126
    A date with a fox girl 5 months ago
  127. 127
    A feeling of wrongness 5 months ago
  128. 128
    A date with Shenhe 5 months ago
  129. 129
    Shenhe and Alter Shenhe (+18) 5 months ago
  130. 130
    A brown haired girl beyond the screen 5 months ago
  131. 131
    Liyue starts 5 months ago
  132. 132
    Liyue ends 5 months ago
  133. 133
    Morax 5 months ago
  134. 134
    Rex Lapis 5 months ago
  135. 135
    Another traveller in this path called life 5 months ago
  136. 136
    Forbidden Knowledge 5 months ago
  137. 137
    Elea 5 months ago
  138. 138
    A silent travel to the North 5 months ago
  139. 139
    What lies beyond 5 months ago
  140. 140
    A promise 5 months ago
  141. 141
    Afterword...not 5 months ago
  142. 142
    HSR arc 1 months ago
  143. 143
    Waking Up 1 months ago
  144. 144
    Happy Birthday! 1 months ago
  145. 145
    To Pteruges V 1 months ago
  146. 146
    A new meeting, the twisted woman 1 months ago
  147. 147
    The Slave of Fate 1 months ago
  148. 148
    That's... not my problem 1 months ago
  149. 149
    Akivili and... something more 29 days ago
  150. 150
    A day in the energetic girl's life 27 days ago
  151. 151
    A bit darker 25 days ago
  152. 152
    Letters! 23 days ago
  153. 153
    Ruan Mei 22 days ago
  154. 154
    Omake 2 - A teenager's dream is not what I expected. 21 days ago
  155. 155
    The pain of losing your meal 19 days ago
  156. 156
    The first lesson 17 days ago
  157. 157
    THEY started moving 15 days ago
  158. 158
    With a purple tone in it 13 days ago
  159. 159
    More letters! 11 days ago
  160. 160
    Movie day 9 days ago
  161. 161
    The Hero of the High-Cloud Quintet 7 days ago
  162. 162
    4 out of 7 6 days ago
  163. 163
    Treasure hunting with the treasure hunter 4 days ago
  164. 164
    Traitors everywhere, again. 2 days ago
  165. 165
    A Mother's Duality. 16 hours ago

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