Arcane Anew

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Aye_itz_cloudz

Jinx’s for the FMC is the only way to go best wife

LV 10

Titus17

It’s too early to give a proper review, but I’m obsessed with Arcane, so I’m still going to give it a decent score. The grammar is fine not perfect, but good enough. The chapters feel a bit short; I’m used to 3k words per chapter, and these seem shorter than that. Still, good job, author—you’re doing a semi-decent job! Hope you dont make the main character overpowerd or rush romance. its always the best to take it slow.

LV 4

Aayush_storms

This Arcane fic is awesome from what we can see in the first few chapters it is a reincarnation story where mc has magic which may sound simple at first but those who know runeterra know how much potential this seemingly simple idea has. I really hope this continues and I highly recommend this to people who see this review.

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Nekrio

Very nice*******************************

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WanderingCritic

A solid read so far. The author gives the characters their due, keeping the personalities convincingly realistic and faithful to the original. Interactions between characters feel fluid and natural, but the writer’s inexperience writing dialogue shines through during a few conversations. Other than that I can’t fault this work in any way. Great job so far, and keep it up 👍

LV 4

SHADOW_MONARCH

my man, there's very few Arcane Stories over here, even less as good as this one, so, take this five stars, and please... continue this to the end, and all my power stones are yours. :)

LV 1

stellaryu

Chapters are super short and most of it is the MC whining or confused. Even powder seems more mature than this MC. Can you fix whatever prompt you gave to the AI?

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Sorrias

5 page chapters, you might as well not write anything

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DaoistH6vTke

Me a gustado mucho el desarrollo quw se a llevado en el personaje principal junto a la interacciones de los personajes con este y por supuesto la historia que es entretenida y intrigante, otra cosa que agrada es que el protagonista no es super poderoso inmediatamente y se va desarrollando de manera inteligente su poder. Otra cosa es el hecho de saber cosas de la trama pero aun si no poder solucionar todo de inmediato pero que poco a poco se muestre una idea de solución es muy agradable.

LV 4

Slither21

I can't find myself to feel anything for this story at this point other than annoyance tbh. You had a solid start, then you got too enthusiastic about punishing the kids. Despite all the changes, you had to keep things close to canon with the main events e.g. having benzo die, vandar die, jinx causes an explosion again, vi not learning anything despite having caused problems multiple times. If youre gonna add another character to change things have canon characters develop alongside them. Your MC is always confused or in pain, despite 50+ chapters he’s still the same as he was in chapter 10, both character and ability wise. Whenever important events happen everyone is reset to default settings as if none of the original events happened.

LV 4

The_WheelOfFortune

The story is good but the mc is too much of a fan boy for me

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Drixia

Arcane has potential. Although the chapters are short, the story is captivating. Great job, author! Just don't make the main character too overpowered and develop the relationships slowly

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Ques21

I’ve been loving the arcane show I hope you don’t change nothing major because I do like the characters arcs that the characters go through p.s if if goin do a romance just do the poly with him, vi, and Cati don’t touch timebomb

reading your fanfiction brings me so much comfort, and its something i truly look forward to after a long day at work. theres something about your writing that helps me unwind and escape yk. keep it up brother.

LV 3

Mar_James

The story is amazing so far I hope the author explores outside of the city and meet more characters in the League of Legends lore and maybe fight some of them.

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Kaito_Uzumaki

This is a very good one. Of course that might be my post Arcane Depression talking but this is truely great. infact of all the three Arcane fics that came out on Webnovel during this week, this one's the best. Chapters could use more length tho. But he's updating multiple chapters during a day so it evens out but I could go for a 50k a day and still want more so

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Mad_Governor

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hyperjack

The author seems new-ish to writing based on how small the number of words in his chapters are yet his reasons for doing this is to me seems like it could be he doesn't want to mess it up so he goes small, yet he takes some time to go over his work to make sure he isn't repeating mistakes. Their description of zaun seems spot on which I like and while he is given a cheat in the form of magic, He isn't instantly a grandmaster with it which shows he intends to practice it to get better which gives an opportunity to write more in the fanfic, To the author I say good luck and I hope you write many awesome chapters !!!! For his first work it already has much potential!!

LV 4

Manuekmgc

For now, with only 5 chapters, it is well written and looks promising. Keep the good work 👍