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Can someone tell me where I can find more good novels like this? Because here on webnovel it's getting harder and harder find a novel with these qualitie
It's a interesting and enjoyable story, I won't give a detailed review other than saying this. I don't read stories below a certain quality. And this one is in a higher quality than most of the stories I read. I just wish the updates were faster and the chapters longer.
I rarely write reviews but I love this story. Please keep it up! Usually not a fan wuxia novels but I have enjoyed a few here and there. So far 20 chapters in and the blending of both worlds seems real and authentic
...................................I need moreeee please. It's such a good work, its fans need more.............................................
............................................................................................................................................................................................It was perfect until the author abandoned the work. .........................................................................................................
Really enjoying the story so far, don’t have a lot of criticism, just showing support 🫡
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TRUTH NO BS>I LOVE THIS NOVEL THAT CENTERS AROUND MINE HOT MAMA TSUNADE.I LOVE TSUNADE THE BEST WOMAN IN THE NARUTO UNIVERSE SECOND TO KAGUYA. THIS NOVEL IS AWESOME STORY TO TELL AND YOU NEED TO READ OR BE MIND-BLOW BY IT..I LOVE THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN THE CHARACTERS WELL DONE AUTHOR ..YOU DESERT MIEN 7 STARS..YUMMY NOVEL.
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The romance in this FanFiction is awesome. The MC is a mature character I am sure you will like him.
Pretty solid fanfiction, I haven't seen in a while fanfiction that doesn't make me want to drop after -50 chapter and got me hooked for more. The romance is slow which is good and not rushed, the story quoting from the author "focused on romance and slice of life." which is something that I like knowing how many action packed Naruto fanfiction till today. Not much grammatical or basic writing mistakes if not at all which means the fanfiction is very readable. Overall, I definitely recommend anyone to try reading this fanfiction.👍🏻 (PS: you probably notice who's going to be the Waifu looking at the poster, Another thing that make this fanfiction great XD)
Boa história e o desenvolvimento está incrível estou realmente curioso de como um artista marcial mudará o "destino mundial". Tá incrível só continue assim 👏👏👏👏👏
As if Ch. 27 : The plot is good. The characters are fleshed out well. World building is good and logic flows well. At no point does the fic seem absurd. Kudos to the author for a good fic. Hope you continue writing.
which fanfic did you get your inspiration from ?? can you give us the original link or raw link if MTL.
Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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the best read I've found since like forever, a concept i really love at the same time with romance, that j-just awesome!!
good ff author, I really liked it, it's rare to find a Naruto ff that the author takes seriously, usually it's all wish fulfillment, keep going 🫶🏽
So far I like it, honestly, in my opinion, even though you haven't shown greatness in creating suspenseful plots, you are very good at creating dialogue between characters... Everything feels deep, it's very rare to see a fanfic story with good dialogue like this, most fanfics just will play with story plots where they have very little good dialogue, in fact they tend to be bad... but your fanfic is very good... Tsunade's feelings are also very clear, Tsunade is not like a teenager who will blush easily at the MC, unlike most fanfics. .. Honestly, I really like this novel because I've been looking for a fanfic with the character Tsunade as the only love interest for a long time and finally I found it..
First of all, the idea is unique and is executed very well. The writing is great and simple. I like the world building and the slight mystery that was added. Mc is morally strong, the character interaction feels really good. Overall i would say, the fanfic has great potential and i personally like the story progression. Can't wait to read the next chapter 😁👍
Dang, When Qi meets Chakra. This concept is extremely unique and is just right up my alley. I've already been a fan of Martial arts manhwa's and novels and Naruto. Brief summary is a Martial Grandmaster, a practitioner of Qi, gets transported or time travelled into the era of Chakra and Ninjas and meets Tsunade before having a chill life at the Leaf. Slice of Life elements and tons of lore about Martial Artists and Qi sprinkled into the story.
a very interesting and great novel the kind that you want read more the more you read.good job and please please 🥺 🥺 don't drop
My shameful review, from the very author of this fanfic. So, I like to write this. Its fun. That's it. Now i'll be talking about what this fanfic is about: What if a Martial Grandmaster of a martial arts society in ancient china suddenly went to Naruto World? What is the difference between Qi and Chakra? And how to use both to become stronger? The heroine is Tsunade, best girl. Her story is so sad, and I thought: "I want her to be happy", and that's what I aim for. No harem, fellas. Honestly, of all woman in Naruto, Tsunade is the best. Story, personality, strenght, physical appearance, so what more do you want? She's enough. Yujin, the MC, has his own story. And thats it, I hope you like it.
Can someone tell me where I can find more good novels like this? Because here on webnovel it's getting harder and harder find a novel with these qualitie
It's a interesting and enjoyable story, I won't give a detailed review other than saying this. I don't read stories below a certain quality. And this one is in a higher quality than most of the stories I read. I just wish the updates were faster and the chapters longer.
I rarely write reviews but I love this story. Please keep it up! Usually not a fan wuxia novels but I have enjoyed a few here and there. So far 20 chapters in and the blending of both worlds seems real and authentic
...................................I need moreeee please. It's such a good work, its fans need more.............................................
............................................................................................................................................................................................It was perfect until the author abandoned the work. .........................................................................................................
Really enjoying the story so far, don’t have a lot of criticism, just showing support 🫡
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
TRUTH NO BS>I LOVE THIS NOVEL THAT CENTERS AROUND MINE HOT MAMA TSUNADE.I LOVE TSUNADE THE BEST WOMAN IN THE NARUTO UNIVERSE SECOND TO KAGUYA. THIS NOVEL IS AWESOME STORY TO TELL AND YOU NEED TO READ OR BE MIND-BLOW BY IT..I LOVE THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN THE CHARACTERS WELL DONE AUTHOR ..YOU DESERT MIEN 7 STARS..YUMMY NOVEL.
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The romance in this FanFiction is awesome. The MC is a mature character I am sure you will like him.
Pretty solid fanfiction, I haven't seen in a while fanfiction that doesn't make me want to drop after -50 chapter and got me hooked for more. The romance is slow which is good and not rushed, the story quoting from the author "focused on romance and slice of life." which is something that I like knowing how many action packed Naruto fanfiction till today. Not much grammatical or basic writing mistakes if not at all which means the fanfiction is very readable. Overall, I definitely recommend anyone to try reading this fanfiction.👍🏻 (PS: you probably notice who's going to be the Waifu looking at the poster, Another thing that make this fanfiction great XD)
Boa história e o desenvolvimento está incrível estou realmente curioso de como um artista marcial mudará o "destino mundial". Tá incrível só continue assim 👏👏👏👏👏
As if Ch. 27 : The plot is good. The characters are fleshed out well. World building is good and logic flows well. At no point does the fic seem absurd. Kudos to the author for a good fic. Hope you continue writing.
which fanfic did you get your inspiration from ?? can you give us the original link or raw link if MTL.
Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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the best read I've found since like forever, a concept i really love at the same time with romance, that j-just awesome!!
good ff author, I really liked it, it's rare to find a Naruto ff that the author takes seriously, usually it's all wish fulfillment, keep going 🫶🏽
So far I like it, honestly, in my opinion, even though you haven't shown greatness in creating suspenseful plots, you are very good at creating dialogue between characters... Everything feels deep, it's very rare to see a fanfic story with good dialogue like this, most fanfics just will play with story plots where they have very little good dialogue, in fact they tend to be bad... but your fanfic is very good... Tsunade's feelings are also very clear, Tsunade is not like a teenager who will blush easily at the MC, unlike most fanfics. .. Honestly, I really like this novel because I've been looking for a fanfic with the character Tsunade as the only love interest for a long time and finally I found it..
First of all, the idea is unique and is executed very well. The writing is great and simple. I like the world building and the slight mystery that was added. Mc is morally strong, the character interaction feels really good. Overall i would say, the fanfic has great potential and i personally like the story progression. Can't wait to read the next chapter 😁👍
Dang, When Qi meets Chakra. This concept is extremely unique and is just right up my alley. I've already been a fan of Martial arts manhwa's and novels and Naruto. Brief summary is a Martial Grandmaster, a practitioner of Qi, gets transported or time travelled into the era of Chakra and Ninjas and meets Tsunade before having a chill life at the Leaf. Slice of Life elements and tons of lore about Martial Artists and Qi sprinkled into the story.
a very interesting and great novel the kind that you want read more the more you read.good job and please please 🥺 🥺 don't drop
My shameful review, from the very author of this fanfic. So, I like to write this. Its fun. That's it. Now i'll be talking about what this fanfic is about: What if a Martial Grandmaster of a martial arts society in ancient china suddenly went to Naruto World? What is the difference between Qi and Chakra? And how to use both to become stronger? The heroine is Tsunade, best girl. Her story is so sad, and I thought: "I want her to be happy", and that's what I aim for. No harem, fellas. Honestly, of all woman in Naruto, Tsunade is the best. Story, personality, strenght, physical appearance, so what more do you want? She's enough. Yujin, the MC, has his own story. And thats it, I hope you like it.