Singularity: Lord of Mysteries

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Shadow_Magus

Hello there, Shameless Author here to give myself a 5 star review until enough normal people review the novel that I no longer need this review.

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Mr_Ice_Cream

😩 I am at chapter 10 story based it's good but so many unwise and unnecessary info dump from characters. Why would someone who the MC just met share so much info to the MC they even almost accidentally revealed their identity. For someone who is a beyonder and belongs to a secret organization like Twilight Hermit Order that's so unprofessional a doubt even a half mad and insane character who does such a thing unless influenced by supernatural powers.

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Haru_Catty

Hello readers, a reading scout here. This is certainly a good read, writing quality is good with no punctuation errors and good paragraphing. Story development is smooth and pacing is what keeps me reading. Characters are well fleshed out but need more depth and I'm sure they'll get more in the future as the story progresses. As for the world background it is still too early to tell so I'll let the time do the deed. A very good read indeed, give it a try. Cheers!

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KetchupxD

Honestly, it's good. Things might be a little confusing at the start but I would say it's a solid read since those confusions clear up eventually. [img=recommend]

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GuYueFangYuan

Kakakakaka this was something I was loog for thank you author kun keep up the good work!!

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Patrik_Crown

It's just two chaps so I can't give a worldwide big review but I try. As anyone may already know, I mainly love Vamp novels but this is an interesting concept that I never heard of. Anyway, the words flow smoothly, some funny sequences are there too (if you imagine Max grinning without any teeth :D...) and the story sounds interesting. Manipulation is one of my most favorite toxic and dark "abilities" so thumbs up for that. 4 stars cuz I don't have enough info but let me know when you have at least ten chaps and I look at it again. For now, peace~

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wisdomseeker

Definitely worth of your time, very recommended for those who like MC struggle against the world

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Demigod_of_All

So, I've read some chaps. The plot is great and the flow of the story is exact to the point. I haven't noticed any grammatical errors, either and thanks to that I can read without any problem. No spoilers since it's better to read it, it's worth your time for sure!

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histidine

too bad, this had potential as the premise was nice and the author showed creativity in his writing. but unfortunately the MC is acting irrationally even though he knows his actions are stupid and are 99% likely to get him killed (there are reasons but they are lame reasons). based on my experience MCs that take action based on impulses and emotions only survive due to plot armor and rarely suffer the consequences for their stupidity , maybe this story is different but i doubt that since just from what i read this MC cant survive in LOTM without heavy plot armor with him not being able to control the effect of his emotions on his actions

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Aydehan

First of all, this review is written through a translator. The story written is generally good, but in my opinion there are a few points that are missing. For example, the romantic subplot or a bigger problem is the rituals that seem very forced. Yes, the rituals seem very forced and even make me very nervous while reading them. What, it's not even sequence 7 yet, sequence 5 wants you to mess with someone. This is complete nonsense. If he was going to attempt this kind of thing, at least the main character should have been rank 5. Also, the series should have started at least 4 years before the main events started. If you have studied the queues in the LOTM universe, you will notice that they all follow a certain route. There is no need to perform rituals, with the exception of between 9-5, because you are still human. Between 4-0 you have to perform the ritual because your journey from humanity to divinity begins. (The path of the klein is abnormal. It requires a ritual at rank 6. Likewise, it requires an anchor at rank 4.) I hope you will think about this story in more detail, polish all the rough parts and rewrite it. Then I'm sure you'll create a great work.

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The_WheelOfFortune

This fanfic is REALLY good, it’s well written and the there isn’t an overwhelming amount of cliches.

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Zane_Tam

Great story I highly recommend it it is one of the very few good LOTM novels

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BrokenInfinity

honestly it has been a delight to read this and I recommend to others the author really does a great job with the material with a new interesting pathway introduced I look forward to reading more though I wish the release rate was higher big sad

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The_enlightend_one

Your fanfic is really great and I like the premise very much. Although I like Klein and don't the mc to fight him to the death 😭 ................................ ................................. .................................

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Mamdouh_mohamed

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DaoistPVyESB

love the story! better than the Sun pathway fanfic that i read.

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DaoistPVyESB

i like it! i hope yhis story will continue till the end

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ProPug

The story is really good! The pacing is excellent, and it has a really good hook right from the start, which was so good I kept reading until I caught up :D. Expecting more great work from this author! Good luck on your book!