System Of The Undead

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Kelvin_A

This isn't a review post but at the same time a review post! I just think I need to state that this is my first system book so all and every criticism is welcomed, be it constructive or not. I enjoyed shows like Walking Dead and I know the final season was met wit h mixed reactions but I loved it from start to finish. Although it sucked that the types of zombies were limited but that was a personal preference. Black Summer was another but there were some elements I wished it had so I was like "Screw it, let's write a zombie book" I'm enjoying this immensely and it is currently one of my priority books. The support has been great too and I hope I get the hang of system with this book and I look forward to any and all criticism! Happy reading!

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AlFi53

I can't honestly recommend this one. You know how people complain about wimpy and simp MCs all the time? Well, this is one time when it's right. The MC is the biggest loser in existence, blushing at the sight of a woman's skin, stammering like an idiot and getting taken advantage of by others. Even if someone robs him and beats him up, he will still want to save them. Nothing you haven't seen before, the typical "good guy" TM that is an incel's wet dream. Sorry to break it to you, but women don't find loser Good Guys attractive. The MC is utterly unlikeable and it shouldn't be only the readers who realise how unlikeable he is.

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Ebubechi_Emmanuel

first of all, i love your verbiage. i love the mc tho i cant relate to him cos i dont lack women yk cant wait to see hi character development....or deterioration

LV 13

Justin_Gabventure

Reading this book, i found out that this book is not your typical undead or zombie novel. Armed with a unique start and unique plot, i was captivated by how interesting the story went. I know you guys would also like this book. Give it a try and you won't regret your decision. Don't think too much, just add to library and read!

LV 14

Sunny_Shumail

When it comes down to Kelvin's books I know without even reading them that they will be exceptional. He has an exceptionally vast imagination which he fuses well with his words to paint such a vivid picture for his readers. I can clearly see everything unfold in my mind. I am not a system fan but this was intriguing from the very first chapter and the way he is building up the suspense and his character, I know this is going to be another masterpiece from him. I like the MC and can't wait to see his growth and how he will tackle the apocalypse. Updates are stable and I am sure he will deliver an action-packed, mind-blowing book. Good luck with WPC dear author, I know you got this ✌️All you readers, read his book and don't forget to vote.

LV 14

12keys2twilight

Its a good read story phasing is all good. Writting quality as far as i have read there is no mistakes. Character Design everything you can expect from a teenage kid. Its just not my type of MC. Im looking for a more mentally matured type who could handle certain scenarios as real adults would. So there it is this book aint for me.Overall ill rate this fic as Goodread. Goodluck to Mr. Author Maybe next time go for a darker matured MC.

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1stDrunkenImmortal

I mean its alright.

LV 14

B_DRAG

As I delved into the pages of this novel, I couldn't help but notice a few grammatical errors scattered throughout. However, it is not uncommon for even the most skilled authors to make such mistakes. I am confident that the author will rectify these minor flaws as the story unfolds. I commend the author for their efforts thus far, as this book undoubtedly possesses the potential to captivate readers and soar to great heights.

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Tabulala

Kinda interesting but since it seems the mc is a white knight in the apocalypse and would still protect the girl who robbed him he's kinda an idiot. Maybe for others but not for me Author seems have no plan of character development (based on his replies maybe in the future he might) So yeah not for me

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BobLeponge

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LV 13

Zurbluris

Nice to see another Nigerian author, good luck bro

LV 4

Sabaroth_zarkiel

Hello author I wanted to know if there is ntr or Yuri in this novel .

LV 10

Ai_shaaaaa

I wish I could write like you! This is a good story even if I don't like Jason. Thank you for this book! Thank you for the updates!

LV 13

Elpaso

Powerless MC. With useless System . [img=strong]

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TessyJ6104

Nice story, author. I am amazed by how much effort you've put into this book. its wonderful and the plot is dignified.

LV 15

DarknessSmile

Good work in making an apocalypse that has characters with deep levels of emotion, some characters have extreme views on the new norm of what the Apocalypse brings, others try to keep living in the past before... I'm looking forward to what MC will become in this new horrific but existing thrilling adventure. Will he rise to the challenge or whines of the lost.

LV 12

haytunez

Nice story I don't like Jason not getting a happy ending tho

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Augusto_Camarilha

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LV 14

Rayyer

this story feels half haphazardly made with inconsistencies singing would be stated and would then next its made redundant. mc is a insert expect all female to be protected no matter what they do

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DragonGodAsurA

Best author on this app and ppl just havent realized yet.