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PUERKO_Senpai

Why do you give the mc a system???? Being born as a human/saiyan hybrid isn't enough for you??? The guy could transform into a Super Saiyan from the age of 7.

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Deimesu

Naw man, i mostly do give Chinese ff a chance, but getting ultra instinct in the first chapter is beyond me.

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Gilgamos

The system and the stupidity of this annoyed me so it was not for me though I would recommend reading it yourself to form your own opinion.

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ridokou_naruto

the Concept was Great but the Execution Not so great

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Alchemist

Trash. It's a translation of a Chinese novel/fanfic, so it has the same problems with grammar and spelling they usually do. The story itself could've been interesting, but the author decided to give the MC a system, which is completely over the top, since Goten already has incredible potential as a Saiyan/Human-Hybrid.

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Lardeen

I found IT!! Son Goten, Start Bonus Ultra Instinct我！孙悟天，开局奖励自在极意功

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Faiz_shah

does anyone know the original Chinese novel?

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Lord_Cynrik

I’m 23 chapters in and it’s a solid fanfic. There is one major problem which is that certain people in addition to Goku are choosing not to be revived by the dragonballs even though it makes absolutely no sense. But if you turn your brain off and ignore that, along with a few minor plot holes, the overall story and character interactions are fine, it’s worth the read

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Lizrock

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FandomExplorer_2nd

Bruh... i think you made the mc op... too much.. i mean dude i know that the mc needs to be on par of strength with cell to save the earth but.. why give him the Ultra Instinct.. and i think (In my opinion) you need to nerf your system and make the mc grow stronger as the story progress (I know I know.. i know that making a good story is hard so i dont have anything to complain except for the mc... being kinda op in the start of the story which made kinda the FF "Kinda" stale... so uhh i hope you'll improve your writing style in the future and make good fanfic :) )

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Hsaet_Uchiha

there are other reviews and mine are the same.

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Daoist99taoist

I think you should all try this once, it's pretty good, I've read more than 70 chapters and the pace is fine, i think the other reviews are being overly negative. You will surely like it if you enjoy OP MC.

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