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Love the plot. A bit wonky at the beginning but gets much better after a couple of chapters.
me encanta tu historia como se desarrolla el personaje espero seguir viéndote subida
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this is a fun read and I am only at chapter 10 so I am hoping that the story gets more interesting in the upcoming chapters
Read it to chapter 17 so far.... Most of the time the author would just fill the chapter with a uselessly boring explanation of random things or will just the copy paste from the SL novel like the fight scenes or character interaction, its kinda like reading a downgraded version of solo leveling
There are many mistakes. Not the typo type, but the use of pronouns, usage of rignt words. These things are making the readers confused. So, kindly improve those parts. Good story though. I like where the story goes.
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Ao invés de ficar socando o MC com mais e mais habilidades que até são esquecidas é mais fácil fazer ele upar as que tem e tbm seria mais interessante fazer ele criar a magia de viagem dimensional ou habilidade assim ficaria mais legal para viajar pelo multiverso ao invés de esperar por ingressos que vem uma ou outra vez
Really disappointed. I skipped to akame ga kill arc and it seems like mc fought almost on equals with esdeath. This is ridiculous. I thought it was just for show but i skimmed through 5 chapters and mc got injured multitple times.
If you're interested in a multiversal type book , check out the Infinite Tower Myriad Realms
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Uhh, I read about 14 chapters, it's basically solo leveling rewritten with extra steps. Apart from the extra skills he acquired, the rest happened in the same way but with boring monologues and bad descriptions.
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too much nonsense story is over all god but many chapters just go with magic that magic this and mc likes to say f*** $ s***every time ge gets a skill no comparsion to clam and cold shadow monarch
Well at first the story is pretty good but after some ch it becomes boring. Mc only likes to discuss theory and talks to himself about something, and sometimes he forgets about the story. I mean who knows the story will plan accordingly and also be prepared for the unexpected but mc was even surprised by similar events in the story. So I am dropping it because it becomes repetitive after sometime.
In short boring noting truly happen and mc is strangely written. He was a heart broken person but suddenly change with out any development and instantly become a cringe lord and story in pretty much the same as manhwa/novel small changes but not much in reality the arthor could just time skip to the important part and to small flash back instead. A reader might be curious at first but it’s get very boring after a while.
Demasiada información inútil, haces creer que el MC es un genio pero en realidad tanta información inútil solo es para marear y darse cuenta que el MC es más tonto que yo
The novel was butchered into this monstrosity. It felt like parts of the og novel plus a congregation of nonsense.
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Y'know, I thought the point of writing fanfiction is to write something new or put your own spin into the story; NOT taking parts of the original novel and stitching it with your own writing and NOT editing it to make it seem cohesive at the very least.I wouldn't have bat an eye if you had at least made it seem like you wrote the thing yourself, it makes it seem like you didn't put much effort into it.People here in the fanfiction section, are looking for something, at the bare minimum, different from the original. Not the Frankenstein's Monster of a patchwork you made. Some maybe okay with whatever you're making, but others like me, will immediately drop it when they see how low effort the early chapters are.I hope you will do better in the future, if you try writing another fanfiction.
you know why I read ff, excluding escapism from reality, it’s an opportunity to look at old stories from a different angle. Pay more attention to what the original author abandoned or forgot, or simply did not have time to explore due to the plot. New abilities in the old setting, new discoveries. This ff is a complete disappointment and did not live up to my expectations from the ff. MC, a complete idiot. There are a lot of interesting ideas in endless monologues, but there is 0 implementation.
This novel is too detailed and detailed to the point of being annoying. Even more detailed than the original novel. (I'm not being sarcastic.) But I was able to get through it by skipping the content. But I found a new problem that I didn't like when entering the world of akame ga kill. You said you couldn't tolerate cruelty. and want to stop this cruelty and flirt with esdeath And it makes me feel miserable Because it's tagged as a villain and the mc's personality is annoying and I don't have a problem with your age because I've read many Chinese fanfics. Many of the akame ga kill Chinese fanfics I've read are better than yours. again I can't believe you can write worse than Chinese nationalists. And I've read akame ga kill fanfiction that starts in the North like you. But the way to approach esdeath is still much better and interesting. You start out like a villain, but you end up acting like a virginal anti-hero who has never seen cruelty. Your novel is boring. Your novel has a few advantages. 1) There are more episodes than other fan fiction stories of this type. 2) MC op 3) MC is lucky.
New fanfi of my favorite author-chan, I look forward to the next chapters. I would also like to know if the mc will only have the powers of the shadow monarch or will have more powers from different verses. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
Love the plot. A bit wonky at the beginning but gets much better after a couple of chapters.
me encanta tu historia como se desarrolla el personaje espero seguir viéndote subida
Membuka SPOILER this is a fun read and I am only at chapter 10 so I am hoping that the story gets more interesting in the upcoming chapters
Read it to chapter 17 so far.... Most of the time the author would just fill the chapter with a uselessly boring explanation of random things or will just the copy paste from the SL novel like the fight scenes or character interaction, its kinda like reading a downgraded version of solo leveling
There are many mistakes. Not the typo type, but the use of pronouns, usage of rignt words. These things are making the readers confused. So, kindly improve those parts. Good story though. I like where the story goes.
[img=recomendado][img=recomendado][img=recomendado][img=recomendado][img=recomendado][img=recomendado][img=recomendado][img=recomendado][img=recomendado]
Ao invés de ficar socando o MC com mais e mais habilidades que até são esquecidas é mais fácil fazer ele upar as que tem e tbm seria mais interessante fazer ele criar a magia de viagem dimensional ou habilidade assim ficaria mais legal para viajar pelo multiverso ao invés de esperar por ingressos que vem uma ou outra vez
Really disappointed. I skipped to akame ga kill arc and it seems like mc fought almost on equals with esdeath. This is ridiculous. I thought it was just for show but i skimmed through 5 chapters and mc got injured multitple times.
If you're interested in a multiversal type book , check out the Infinite Tower Myriad Realms
thank you 😁 jwjejejheurrjdjjdjrjejejjeheb eu d I e eu e ue eu e eu e eu eu e eueueuehdhdhhdhdhd d udhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhddhdd dh dhd d dh d h dh d hdj dh d
Uhh, I read about 14 chapters, it's basically solo leveling rewritten with extra steps. Apart from the extra skills he acquired, the rest happened in the same way but with boring monologues and bad descriptions.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
too much nonsense story is over all god but many chapters just go with magic that magic this and mc likes to say f*** $ s***every time ge gets a skill no comparsion to clam and cold shadow monarch
Well at first the story is pretty good but after some ch it becomes boring. Mc only likes to discuss theory and talks to himself about something, and sometimes he forgets about the story. I mean who knows the story will plan accordingly and also be prepared for the unexpected but mc was even surprised by similar events in the story. So I am dropping it because it becomes repetitive after sometime.
In short boring noting truly happen and mc is strangely written. He was a heart broken person but suddenly change with out any development and instantly become a cringe lord and story in pretty much the same as manhwa/novel small changes but not much in reality the arthor could just time skip to the important part and to small flash back instead. A reader might be curious at first but it’s get very boring after a while.
Demasiada información inútil, haces creer que el MC es un genio pero en realidad tanta información inútil solo es para marear y darse cuenta que el MC es más tonto que yo
The novel was butchered into this monstrosity. It felt like parts of the og novel plus a congregation of nonsense.
Thanks. Enjoying it.[img=recommend] Please continue.duudufdjkkzgsggdyydudydkudkdyydysiyskskkkskudkdkskkkduudkkkskkkkskkkkkkkkkkkkllldlldlifllldlllldkkskkkskkkkkkkkyskskkdkdkdluldhhdkudludlldlduduu
Y'know, I thought the point of writing fanfiction is to write something new or put your own spin into the story; NOT taking parts of the original novel and stitching it with your own writing and NOT editing it to make it seem cohesive at the very least.I wouldn't have bat an eye if you had at least made it seem like you wrote the thing yourself, it makes it seem like you didn't put much effort into it.People here in the fanfiction section, are looking for something, at the bare minimum, different from the original. Not the Frankenstein's Monster of a patchwork you made. Some maybe okay with whatever you're making, but others like me, will immediately drop it when they see how low effort the early chapters are.I hope you will do better in the future, if you try writing another fanfiction.
you know why I read ff, excluding escapism from reality, it’s an opportunity to look at old stories from a different angle. Pay more attention to what the original author abandoned or forgot, or simply did not have time to explore due to the plot. New abilities in the old setting, new discoveries. This ff is a complete disappointment and did not live up to my expectations from the ff. MC, a complete idiot. There are a lot of interesting ideas in endless monologues, but there is 0 implementation.
This novel is too detailed and detailed to the point of being annoying. Even more detailed than the original novel. (I'm not being sarcastic.) But I was able to get through it by skipping the content. But I found a new problem that I didn't like when entering the world of akame ga kill. You said you couldn't tolerate cruelty. and want to stop this cruelty and flirt with esdeath And it makes me feel miserable Because it's tagged as a villain and the mc's personality is annoying and I don't have a problem with your age because I've read many Chinese fanfics. Many of the akame ga kill Chinese fanfics I've read are better than yours. again I can't believe you can write worse than Chinese nationalists. And I've read akame ga kill fanfiction that starts in the North like you. But the way to approach esdeath is still much better and interesting. You start out like a villain, but you end up acting like a virginal anti-hero who has never seen cruelty. Your novel is boring. Your novel has a few advantages. 1) There are more episodes than other fan fiction stories of this type. 2) MC op 3) MC is lucky.
New fanfi of my favorite author-chan, I look forward to the next chapters. I would also like to know if the mc will only have the powers of the shadow monarch or will have more powers from different verses. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺