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Ha bajado mucho la calidad, se enfoca en mucho contenido que no aporta nada a la historia, no es creativo y crea unos problemas o cosas que en verdad no importa. Tampoco explica muy bien en como va el nivel de poder.
10 chapters in so far and where i will be leaving im going to be straightforward this novel is really bad from the grammar to the bad monologues too much going inside of the MCs head and I feel like in these first 10 chaps he is weaker than og jin woo like he knows the story but repeats everything Jin woo does and is like “ ohh yea this happened in the og story” also there is too much info dump of information we already know like this is a fan fic most of the people reading your story most likely have already read the og story so neee for the simple info we already know pretty much a horrible version of the pg story like this is the og story before an editor picked it up
The story is almost no different from the original, it's like I'm re-reading the original and my friend told me that I've already revised my thoughts on the monologues in there, there's not much in terms of grammar. An influence on me. From reading Chinese fanfictions I think you need to add some originality to yourself, the character is strong but the fights are the same as the original, so Esdeath is female. He is a cruel and sadistic general. How do you turn her into a high school virgin? He was saddened by the death of a character in the film. I'm reading this just because I'm bored. I can't find another story. Even in Chinese fan fiction the character designs are much better. Check out the character designs there and see them all. Sorry for my bad English spelling. Please
This should be called “Solo Monologue”, I bet the MC will become Monologue Monarch. Too much monologue in a chapter. Well, it is good though 👍👍👍
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one of the best fanfic I have ever read if you love gamer type fanfic and neutral mc then this is your cup of tea best fight scenes best waifus(starting with esdeath and many more like yasaka
I am currently on chapter98 and I can say that this is one of the best fanfic I have ever read well mc is pretty overpowered fully utilizes the system and do have world travel well firt world is solo leveling(main) akame ga kill(first world) and more over mc is neutral iImean no two goodie shoe mc wher ethey have that dumb logic of justice the mc is neutral minium and anti villian at most if you have read Darkwolf shirou's fanfic they you can compare this to him so give try
Author just copies from the original novels and takes it as his own. Literally word for word and its absurd how he gets stones for work thats not even his.
I don't think the author understand the flow, logic and pacing of the OG Solo level world. The author keeps adding elements to the system and stated that it's still the same system in the original, but isn't the purpose of the system is to transfer the power of ashborn to jinwoo, and the system's source is ashborn himself, why does an Elderitch path is in the system? It doesn't make sense. It would make sense if the author add his own system and combined it with the OG system, but he says it's the same as the OG so it doesn't make sense. And the very noticeable mistakes a lot of authors do in fanfics, is that they just copy the original and make or add some elements to the story while not understanding the OG story. The mc has a lot of mana in the beginning but it just shows in the mana reader that he has only 10, and it doesn't even give explanation why it hid his real mana. It just doesn't make sense.
i love your work man its a great book I will definitely suggest everyone to try it if can ignore some slow peace in start and a lot of info [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Ignoring everything bad about the story, and only looking at the good stuff. It's a really good story. The best I have seen. believe me, I wouldn't lie. this here my friend is perfection.
well where to start ok let's start with writing quality at first it was a little bit better than MTL still readable but recently the writing quality improved alot.next mc.....ok he was a retard who sometimes thinks with his lower half but his character improved and became less irritating i almost dropped the FF because of him ...update stability is good .overall tho the beginning wasn't the best it improves later and i expect the mc to keep improving and become more mature . i wish good luck to the author and hope for him to keep improving as well as to try to benefit from useful criticism to improve . It's rare for me to write a review i hope it helps.
Read up to 76. it's a good story. It's just too much info dump in a single chapter. and also a repeat info dump in the next chapter. you just need to reduce it. overall it's a good story. for Rate content please make it a single chapter so for people who dont read it can skip it.
read it in one breath... for now chapter 127, great but i think the author is going a little too slow with the story... i say this because towards chapter 60 i was starting to get bored with all the details and explanations that could have been left out... still one of the best solo-leveling fics hands down so keep it up. (written with Google translate)
everything was going good so far but at chapter 64 life just using girl for get body broke my heart that's the only reason I am dropping it
Either Author got nothing else to do or probably got kidnapped and locked away in a basement and forced to write this fanfic. The chapters are easy to read, good writing and release rate is fking insane for a fanfic.
I like the story, the background the motive of author for this fanfic but i want know author sama why do you write so much banter i.e. all that explanation thing for every skill that is made whether it is magic skill or way to create a spell, it is uselessly tiring to read it those lengthy explanations are not needed we readers can understand if you just write the technique used or just write the reference we will all understand.
Fic with a fairly fast plot but with "important" details that are very disturbing and too many so that the plot feels very slow, Mc just became Job Evolution in the 60s chapter, So yeah, good luck to future readers of this fic, I hope you don't get dizzy while reading it... That's just my complaint about this very "detailed" fic
the fanfic is currently approaching chapter 100 and i have to say i like it so far, frequent chapters and great system. the plot is written well and the story flows well too. author at the start forgets from time to time that mc is a reincarnator and makes his thinking and acting like original mc, but that was just a little annoying. anyways hope author wont drop this like his other fics since i really find myself invested into this story.
First off second chapter was apparently edited and is like thisI used to be a woman huh, and then a wild wolf for someone who followed the orders of a girl he loves like a dog and then proceeds to call her witch and say has the audacity to self proclaim that he's nature is apparently a wild wolf.Has he seen the manwha? His sister had pretty good proportions compared to the average japanese tomboy in manga and anime. Didn't even mention the long hair, dude is a pervert through and through.While that is the case though it is still good, just go and read what you want, but MC will definitely make your blood boil at times because the author makes him this gigachad when all I see at most is an anxious pervert filled with stupidty and moments of greatness. Thats all. Read what you want and disregard this if you will, your choice.
nice story, English has gotten much batter with time it would even great and I am sure of it.........................................................................................................................................................999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999
Ha bajado mucho la calidad, se enfoca en mucho contenido que no aporta nada a la historia, no es creativo y crea unos problemas o cosas que en verdad no importa. Tampoco explica muy bien en como va el nivel de poder.
10 chapters in so far and where i will be leaving im going to be straightforward this novel is really bad from the grammar to the bad monologues too much going inside of the MCs head and I feel like in these first 10 chaps he is weaker than og jin woo like he knows the story but repeats everything Jin woo does and is like “ ohh yea this happened in the og story” also there is too much info dump of information we already know like this is a fan fic most of the people reading your story most likely have already read the og story so neee for the simple info we already know pretty much a horrible version of the pg story like this is the og story before an editor picked it up
The story is almost no different from the original, it's like I'm re-reading the original and my friend told me that I've already revised my thoughts on the monologues in there, there's not much in terms of grammar. An influence on me. From reading Chinese fanfictions I think you need to add some originality to yourself, the character is strong but the fights are the same as the original, so Esdeath is female. He is a cruel and sadistic general. How do you turn her into a high school virgin? He was saddened by the death of a character in the film. I'm reading this just because I'm bored. I can't find another story. Even in Chinese fan fiction the character designs are much better. Check out the character designs there and see them all. Sorry for my bad English spelling. Please
This should be called “Solo Monologue”, I bet the MC will become Monologue Monarch. Too much monologue in a chapter. Well, it is good though 👍👍👍
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one of the best fanfic I have ever read if you love gamer type fanfic and neutral mc then this is your cup of tea best fight scenes best waifus(starting with esdeath and many more like yasaka
I am currently on chapter98 and I can say that this is one of the best fanfic I have ever read well mc is pretty overpowered fully utilizes the system and do have world travel well firt world is solo leveling(main) akame ga kill(first world) and more over mc is neutral iImean no two goodie shoe mc wher ethey have that dumb logic of justice the mc is neutral minium and anti villian at most if you have read Darkwolf shirou's fanfic they you can compare this to him so give try
Author just copies from the original novels and takes it as his own. Literally word for word and its absurd how he gets stones for work thats not even his.
I don't think the author understand the flow, logic and pacing of the OG Solo level world. The author keeps adding elements to the system and stated that it's still the same system in the original, but isn't the purpose of the system is to transfer the power of ashborn to jinwoo, and the system's source is ashborn himself, why does an Elderitch path is in the system? It doesn't make sense. It would make sense if the author add his own system and combined it with the OG system, but he says it's the same as the OG so it doesn't make sense. And the very noticeable mistakes a lot of authors do in fanfics, is that they just copy the original and make or add some elements to the story while not understanding the OG story. The mc has a lot of mana in the beginning but it just shows in the mana reader that he has only 10, and it doesn't even give explanation why it hid his real mana. It just doesn't make sense.
i love your work man its a great book I will definitely suggest everyone to try it if can ignore some slow peace in start and a lot of info [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Ignoring everything bad about the story, and only looking at the good stuff. It's a really good story. The best I have seen. believe me, I wouldn't lie. this here my friend is perfection.
well where to start ok let's start with writing quality at first it was a little bit better than MTL still readable but recently the writing quality improved alot.next mc.....ok he was a retard who sometimes thinks with his lower half but his character improved and became less irritating i almost dropped the FF because of him ...update stability is good .overall tho the beginning wasn't the best it improves later and i expect the mc to keep improving and become more mature . i wish good luck to the author and hope for him to keep improving as well as to try to benefit from useful criticism to improve . It's rare for me to write a review i hope it helps.
Read up to 76. it's a good story. It's just too much info dump in a single chapter. and also a repeat info dump in the next chapter. you just need to reduce it. overall it's a good story. for Rate content please make it a single chapter so for people who dont read it can skip it.
read it in one breath... for now chapter 127, great but i think the author is going a little too slow with the story... i say this because towards chapter 60 i was starting to get bored with all the details and explanations that could have been left out... still one of the best solo-leveling fics hands down so keep it up. (written with Google translate)
everything was going good so far but at chapter 64 life just using girl for get body broke my heart that's the only reason I am dropping it
Either Author got nothing else to do or probably got kidnapped and locked away in a basement and forced to write this fanfic. The chapters are easy to read, good writing and release rate is fking insane for a fanfic.
I like the story, the background the motive of author for this fanfic but i want know author sama why do you write so much banter i.e. all that explanation thing for every skill that is made whether it is magic skill or way to create a spell, it is uselessly tiring to read it those lengthy explanations are not needed we readers can understand if you just write the technique used or just write the reference we will all understand.
Fic with a fairly fast plot but with "important" details that are very disturbing and too many so that the plot feels very slow, Mc just became Job Evolution in the 60s chapter, So yeah, good luck to future readers of this fic, I hope you don't get dizzy while reading it... That's just my complaint about this very "detailed" fic
the fanfic is currently approaching chapter 100 and i have to say i like it so far, frequent chapters and great system. the plot is written well and the story flows well too. author at the start forgets from time to time that mc is a reincarnator and makes his thinking and acting like original mc, but that was just a little annoying. anyways hope author wont drop this like his other fics since i really find myself invested into this story.
First off second chapter was apparently edited and is like thisI used to be a woman huh, and then a wild wolf for someone who followed the orders of a girl he loves like a dog and then proceeds to call her witch and say has the audacity to self proclaim that he's nature is apparently a wild wolf.Has he seen the manwha? His sister had pretty good proportions compared to the average japanese tomboy in manga and anime. Didn't even mention the long hair, dude is a pervert through and through.While that is the case though it is still good, just go and read what you want, but MC will definitely make your blood boil at times because the author makes him this gigachad when all I see at most is an anxious pervert filled with stupidty and moments of greatness. Thats all. Read what you want and disregard this if you will, your choice.
nice story, English has gotten much batter with time it would even great and I am sure of it.........................................................................................................................................................999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999
story is interesting and mc is op basically fun read