erebuss

erebuss

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Ehhh my iq isn’t high. I read a lot of harem and r-18 so if I post a review on your story that isn’t harem or r-18 don’t mind it .

2021-09-27 Bergabung Global
Lencana 10

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erebuss
erebuss
2 hours ago
Posted

Either an AI wrote this or a person with adhd. Some much descriptions and it feels like I’m reading a whole bunch of jumble . The story quite literally makes 0 sense.

erebuss
erebuss
2 hours ago
Commented

What the fuck am I reading . This shit jumping all around that it doesn’t make sense

Jessica's scream drowned in rotor thunder. Across the kitchen, Sophia clutched the divorce papers, knuckles whitening. She would never see the burner phone vibrating against Liam's chest. The text glowed: Bride #9 activated. Pier 23, 8 PM. Bring white roses—it's your mother's death anniversary.

Ultimate Ruthless Son-in-Law: My Nine Fiancées Rule the World

Ultimate Ruthless Son-in-Law: My Nine Fiancées Rule the World

Urban · mi_kive

erebuss
erebuss
2 hours ago
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The dawn over Manhattan's Upper East Side trembled as Liam Burke flipped the sixteenth strawberry pancake. Butter sizzled in the cast-iron skillet, its crisp aroma mingling with the memory of rain-lashed Coney Island—the bullet wound searing his shoulder, the metallic tang of blood and seawater, and Sophia Warren kneeling beside him, wrapping his wound with her Prada scarf.

Ultimate Ruthless Son-in-Law: My Nine Fiancées Rule the World

Ultimate Ruthless Son-in-Law: My Nine Fiancées Rule the World

Urban · mi_kive

erebuss
erebuss
18 hours ago
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I couldn't help but sneak a glance at her face under her hair and realized it was my teacher, Selena Gonzalez.

My Accidental Harem

My Accidental Harem

Fantasy · forgottenvoid

erebuss
erebuss
19 hours ago
Commented

That would make sense if they knew he was the one who did it…

As for Liam, he felt it wasn't enough to kill them and he will naturally kill their family. Everything neet and clean. Even though there is no need but it has become his habit to cut the grass from roots otherwise they might grow up in spring.

In The Supreme Fantasy World, Back In Time And Do Whatever You Want!

In The Supreme Fantasy World, Back In Time And Do Whatever You Want!

Fantasy · Parshant_Morwal

erebuss
erebuss
19 hours ago
Posted

Man I like the story but the grammar is atrocious. You could easily make this story way better by just using grammar or having AI refine each chapter and revise it. It make take some time but that would make the story so much better. I understand English may not be your first language but there are tools out there that can help you. If this is just a story you are doing for fun I get it . There’s no need to waste time but if you’re trying to get contracted and make money i guarantee you no one is going to pay for this kind of work .

erebuss
erebuss
22 hours ago
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After thinking about this, his eyes flashed and while eating he said "Mom, today I have a dream."

In The Supreme Fantasy World, Back In Time And Do Whatever You Want!

In The Supreme Fantasy World, Back In Time And Do Whatever You Want!

Fantasy · Parshant_Morwal

erebuss
erebuss
22 hours ago
Commented

There is a 70% chance*

'So what are you saying is that, there are 70% chances that I will die today? And what do you mean by restarting?'

In The Supreme Fantasy World, Back In Time And Do Whatever You Want!

In The Supreme Fantasy World, Back In Time And Do Whatever You Want!

Fantasy · Parshant_Morwal

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erebuss
erebuss
1 days ago
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Sebas clasped his hands behind his back and straightened his posture, a confident grin spreading across his face.

Head Butler of the Fallen Villainess

Head Butler of the Fallen Villainess

Fantasy · DemonKingAkuma