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Honestly I wasn't planning on writing a review, but Author-San requested us to write reviews if we like the book. Currently, I'm very invested in this book. The story is great, I can't wait for new chapters, for me the chapters aren't long enough because I just want to read more. Don't get me wrong, I'm not rating this as 5 just because the Author, I really do think this book is a great book so far. Don't give up, don't let the people who give you bad reviews get to you. You won't be able to please everybody, but you don't have to. Just continue doing what you feel is right for your story and your plot. It is your story. If those who don't like it want something different, they can go find a different book somewhere else that suits their tastes better. No need to be such a downer and make another great novel be dropped because of their own interests getting in the way. Keep it up Author! You're doing great!
Good start of the story and can't wait to see what path he'll take with the system at later levels. Hopefully he gets with Loki I haven't seen many fanfics have her in it and I feel she is a good choice due to her divinity and him being an emperor.I can't wait to see how strong and see if he just dominates the gods at one point then traveling to a new world this book has alot of potential!! Can't wait for more.
Bro I deducted 1 point from the story development, some strange things are happening because there were some oddities according to danmachi (eg bell's aunt died 8-10 years before alfia bell was born d: and how is eina alfia 14 years old when she was alive and a great war was going on : D is normally 19 years old anyway.But I liked your story very much, I look forward to the continuation :)
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
honestly was a good 4 stae until the recent evilus chapter. author literally had a team from the 2 law keeping families state evilus wanted to destroy destroy city letting monsters rampage killing everyone not even a paragraph later he bought a wooden sword because he didn't see the need to use a real sword on evilius over something so trivial and then a sentence later it was he will learn soon about how wrong he was. the whole stupidity there felt like a 5 year old sucked off naruto and was infected with his stupidity of friendship
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I like this story its a nice and simply slice of life like novel with anime elements that i really enjoy for a casual read that has enough acrion to keep me interested and anticipate the story development.
______________________________________We need more <3 ______________________________________More XD ______________________________________
I'm going to be honest, him having no wishing for himself, staying with the goddess, and his appearance, all are a turn off for this story. I didn't even make it past the goddess and I lost interest. just me though, other probably like it
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Я в английской грамматике ни шарю, так что за нее говорить не буду, но сама история на момент последней главы, мне очень нравится, так что очень жду проду!!!!
I actually like this story and its super fun to read when I have nothing to do so thanks for making this story[img=recommend][img=recommend]
well i like that you improve the bed part in chapters as you say would.but..i think if you put some more chapters regarding his top fights and building his top moves in travels before orario as flash back or story telling to the party would help.and if you can improve a little bit in fighting and traing part like from what or where he made a move and better fight not just they fight and he got bloody after that.i know the last part ishard to do but every bit of improvment counts.
A new kind of background for the main character which is nice. The story is not far enought to jugde completly the development/direction of this one but it's good.
The Background of Ash is pretty good karma and because you saved a child who grew up and save the world is getting boring. So for Ash it was him being naturally born into the world without any problems. From there he got stronger on his own and had got married. the reason it 4 stars even is because of the updating stability he needs to update more for us to want to review more. In all I have no problem with this story it's still in my library, i just don't want to wait 20 days for you to release one chapter and then go on break.
Story is very good, the author has good knowledge of orario and the dungeon, characters are well written such as his wife, I'm also glad we get to see alfia in this fic because noone ever has her, I'm also excited to see interaction with the Loki familia and maybe Hestia. Excited for future harem members and wondering if the MC will end up becoming a god and making his own familia or find a way to make a familia without being a god. Keep up the good work author, you're doing really good please don't drop this masterpiece
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Hey man, keep the story going. I am enjoying it a lot, I will be honest and say that I dont agree with somethings, lets be honest here. infinite charisma is silly. but the story itself is great! just keep it up.
well, just hope this will have some character development with MC, because you say that he is not innocent but naive, so i hope MC will become better in the future
well everything about the story is perfect but it can get many power stones by having a catchy profile photo................................
It’s very good these days it hard to find any decent danmachi ff that’s ongoing and not randomly dropped only problem for me is takes too long to update
Author seems to know what they are doing. Previously, updating was pretty slow, but recently it has become more stable. Don't know if Author might suddenly disappear, but eh. Story is good.
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Very great fan fic yes yes I agree with story a lot yes yes Great grammar yes yes Not too overpowered the Mc Is yes yes Give it a read you must yes yes 5 stars I give yes yes 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Its actually one of the better fanfiction Ive read. As well as You Used more of your original story arc rather than the original over used one.So I hope you continue with the good work P.S.….mind blown.
Although this book hasn’t gotten really far into the story, I really like the concept for it. I really excited to see where it goes from here!
One of the few if all the danmachi fanfic that is actually good I like you just reason give it a try and I see no reason for it to deserve hate♥️♥️♥️🤜🤛♥️♥️♥️♥️🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍 I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍 I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍 I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍
Honestly I wasn't planning on writing a review, but Author-San requested us to write reviews if we like the book. Currently, I'm very invested in this book. The story is great, I can't wait for new chapters, for me the chapters aren't long enough because I just want to read more. Don't get me wrong, I'm not rating this as 5 just because the Author, I really do think this book is a great book so far. Don't give up, don't let the people who give you bad reviews get to you. You won't be able to please everybody, but you don't have to. Just continue doing what you feel is right for your story and your plot. It is your story. If those who don't like it want something different, they can go find a different book somewhere else that suits their tastes better. No need to be such a downer and make another great novel be dropped because of their own interests getting in the way. Keep it up Author! You're doing great!
Good start of the story and can't wait to see what path he'll take with the system at later levels. Hopefully he gets with Loki I haven't seen many fanfics have her in it and I feel she is a good choice due to her divinity and him being an emperor.I can't wait to see how strong and see if he just dominates the gods at one point then traveling to a new world this book has alot of potential!! Can't wait for more.
Bro I deducted 1 point from the story development, some strange things are happening because there were some oddities according to danmachi (eg bell's aunt died 8-10 years before alfia bell was born d: and how is eina alfia 14 years old when she was alive and a great war was going on : D is normally 19 years old anyway.But I liked your story very much, I look forward to the continuation :)
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
honestly was a good 4 stae until the recent evilus chapter. author literally had a team from the 2 law keeping families state evilus wanted to destroy destroy city letting monsters rampage killing everyone not even a paragraph later he bought a wooden sword because he didn't see the need to use a real sword on evilius over something so trivial and then a sentence later it was he will learn soon about how wrong he was. the whole stupidity there felt like a 5 year old sucked off naruto and was infected with his stupidity of friendship
Membuka SPOILER I like this story its a nice and simply slice of life like novel with anime elements that i really enjoy for a casual read that has enough acrion to keep me interested and anticipate the story development.
______________________________________We need more <3 ______________________________________More XD ______________________________________
I'm going to be honest, him having no wishing for himself, staying with the goddess, and his appearance, all are a turn off for this story. I didn't even make it past the goddess and I lost interest. just me though, other probably like it
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Я в английской грамматике ни шарю, так что за нее говорить не буду, но сама история на момент последней главы, мне очень нравится, так что очень жду проду!!!!
I actually like this story and its super fun to read when I have nothing to do so thanks for making this story[img=recommend][img=recommend]
well i like that you improve the bed part in chapters as you say would.but..i think if you put some more chapters regarding his top fights and building his top moves in travels before orario as flash back or story telling to the party would help.and if you can improve a little bit in fighting and traing part like from what or where he made a move and better fight not just they fight and he got bloody after that.i know the last part ishard to do but every bit of improvment counts.
A new kind of background for the main character which is nice. The story is not far enought to jugde completly the development/direction of this one but it's good.
The Background of Ash is pretty good karma and because you saved a child who grew up and save the world is getting boring. So for Ash it was him being naturally born into the world without any problems. From there he got stronger on his own and had got married. the reason it 4 stars even is because of the updating stability he needs to update more for us to want to review more. In all I have no problem with this story it's still in my library, i just don't want to wait 20 days for you to release one chapter and then go on break.
Story is very good, the author has good knowledge of orario and the dungeon, characters are well written such as his wife, I'm also glad we get to see alfia in this fic because noone ever has her, I'm also excited to see interaction with the Loki familia and maybe Hestia. Excited for future harem members and wondering if the MC will end up becoming a god and making his own familia or find a way to make a familia without being a god. Keep up the good work author, you're doing really good please don't drop this masterpiece
Membuka SPOILER Hey man, keep the story going. I am enjoying it a lot, I will be honest and say that I dont agree with somethings, lets be honest here. infinite charisma is silly. but the story itself is great! just keep it up.
well, just hope this will have some character development with MC, because you say that he is not innocent but naive, so i hope MC will become better in the future
well everything about the story is perfect but it can get many power stones by having a catchy profile photo................................
It’s very good these days it hard to find any decent danmachi ff that’s ongoing and not randomly dropped only problem for me is takes too long to update
Author seems to know what they are doing. Previously, updating was pretty slow, but recently it has become more stable. Don't know if Author might suddenly disappear, but eh. Story is good.
(ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ) (ﾉ^ヮ^)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧✧ﾟ・:*ﾉ(^ヮ^ﾉ)
Membuka SPOILER Very great fan fic yes yes I agree with story a lot yes yes Great grammar yes yes Not too overpowered the Mc Is yes yes Give it a read you must yes yes 5 stars I give yes yes 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Its actually one of the better fanfiction Ive read. As well as You Used more of your original story arc rather than the original over used one.So I hope you continue with the good work P.S.….mind blown.
Although this book hasn’t gotten really far into the story, I really like the concept for it. I really excited to see where it goes from here!
One of the few if all the danmachi fanfic that is actually good I like you just reason give it a try and I see no reason for it to deserve hate♥️♥️♥️🤜🤛♥️♥️♥️♥️🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍 I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍 I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍 I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍