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Reading the first 5 chapters is so fraustating how dumb does this author makes his MC I’m giving up [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Story great from the start gives minimum background of the world and the character get a great character development as the story progresses. Only draw back is that after some 300 chapters you can't read the novel as it's full of grammatical error as it useless as we can't get the content of the story from that. Other than that it's a good story.
from which era did this foolish mc transmigrate ohhhhhh God he knows nothing ... so many questions he has ....foolish boomer .... I so wanted to kill him ... totally irritating novel
MC is dumb, dont even know common sense about cultivation world, he knows about golden finger but does not know much about cultivation even though he reads novels. Acts domineering in the outside but acts like a monkey in the inside. But wth, he asked Yue Yu her name every 5 minutes they run to the village when he already knows. Idk jshdjffjjdrjdujffj fakkkkkkkk
So my sincere suggestion is that if you are fed up with : 1-sentient systems that constantly punish you by reading ur mind 2-clique female encounter 3-dumb mc 4-the most generic world background on webnovel 5-horrendous grammers don't waste ur time please at least its like this in the first 10 chapters
its good but kinda boring, and annoying i dont like the unnecessary question the mc ask. Also about how the system trying to conntrol the mc 😊😊😊😊
I don't usually write reviews, but this was so bad that I simply had to give it 1 star, the system is controlling and keeps away information that could easily be given to the mc, massively punishes him for stupid things like profanity (took away a whole 1000 points because of it when his reward was supposed to be 5000), I lost too many braincells reading this so I won't say any more.
Membuka SPOILER
My patience was tested here. MC is dumb, he ask everything and anything like 'system what is 1+1' vibes. Its pretty annoying, are you really a transmigrator from Earth? The grammar was bearable but still terrible 🤦🏻♀️ MC is not awesome, nor op. He is worse than a canonfodder who only got lucky to have a system who replied back. Or else even if he has a system, he will still crawl on mud and died on hunger due to his stupidity .
I usually don't leave reviews, although I like pretty much any kingdom building/sect building novel, this is getting truly hard to read even with skipping and replacing, the last month the grammar has gotten drastically worst, I really recommend hiring a proof reader if your going to continue to charge per chapter until then I may have to drop this one until further notice.
very badly written too cliche there was no need for the girl, in the beginning, to be present or even be with the mc not being misogynistic but it's just too cliche I am starting to hate romance/harem in novels its just bad to me The system is way too controlling the MC doesn't fit the character of someone who should be the sect leader Everything is done too hastily
The premise was interesting as one of the few sect building stories on this platform, but the execution was ... questionable with a lot of grammatical errors and the story doesn't weave together well. The story has potential but the use of english was anything but well made
It is painful and frustrating to read. Painful because of the grammar. Frustrating because the MC is dumb and the System is annoying. Don't read it unless you enjoy bad grammar, dumb MCs and Systems who punish the MC for dumb reasons.
translation is honestly so bad that in order to read it I had to imagine that a child wrote it. after doing so it only made me realize that I shouldn't have to tolerate such a thing. This app charges people so much for each chapter and this is the quality of the content? Forget it.
The mc is an idiot....i only read until chapter 12 and give up because of that reason. Hate the annoying system that can talk bickering with mc concept
Well no. Not recomendet 1.) The first few chapter he gets already controlled by the system 2.) he gets reward reductions because he says his opinion about the systems action. 3.) the MC is dumb as heck
Good story and is eager to read next chapter. The flow is nicely written and character development is good. Describes each and every portion for the rise of the sect which is not mainly seen .Hope you can occasionally upload 2 chapters a day
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I'm sorry but the writing quality is quite low for the free chapters, and I'm not interested in spending coins to see if there is an improvement. story develops quite slow in the beginning , yet paradoxically self spoiling as well. character development is absolutely horrendous . mc seems so dumb that it's simply incredible he remembers how to inhale, and the system is unreasonable. don't do the captain America meme, penalties for swearing are beyond ridiculous, and considering the other absurd things the system has done I didn't care to continue reading past chapter 10, but I'm self honor bound to read all free chapters.
I think the writing quality is better than most mtls. I dont see whats the problem though. The plot is kinda average but its a good read though.
The story is good in my opinion but it needs work. Although it isn't the worst grammar I have seen in a story, it is far from the good either. I suggest the Author go back and fix the errors or get an editor for the story. The editor could be a reader or given by WebNovel because I think they can suggest editors. This isn't social media or a game where grammar doesn't matter much, it is a book/novel where ever errors can change how the story is read and confuse readers like when it kept saying "gun" when the MC was forging a sword and another time a spear.
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de verdad piensas que la gente va a pagar por leer 140 capitulos que persona tan optimista eres autor cuando se puede ir a otra pagina web a verla que no eres un autor famoso
Membuka SPOILER
I would give less stars if I could, stupid system stupid MC stupid concept all around just a waste of time on everyone’ part... ….
Note to author: I haven't read this yet but there are a ton of negative reviews. Aye bro. Don't give up writing. It's like when we were little and used to try to tell grown ups our stories and things. At first we couldn't convey our messages clearly because we were too young. With more time and experience we learned how to express ourselves better. But even when we got a little older and learned how to say things more coherently our stories sometimes turned out to not be as grand as we thought them to be. Maybe this is like that. Don't give up.
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Estuvo muy bien hasta pasado el capítulo 300. Me centro más en la historia que en la gramática, pero llega un punto en que uno no entiende nada. La idea es muy buena y me habría gustado terminar de leer como avanza hasta lo más alto, pero no hay manera de seguir
Reading the first 5 chapters is so fraustating how dumb does this author makes his MC I’m giving up [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Story great from the start gives minimum background of the world and the character get a great character development as the story progresses. Only draw back is that after some 300 chapters you can't read the novel as it's full of grammatical error as it useless as we can't get the content of the story from that. Other than that it's a good story.
from which era did this foolish mc transmigrate ohhhhhh God he knows nothing ... so many questions he has ....foolish boomer .... I so wanted to kill him ... totally irritating novel
MC is dumb, dont even know common sense about cultivation world, he knows about golden finger but does not know much about cultivation even though he reads novels. Acts domineering in the outside but acts like a monkey in the inside. But wth, he asked Yue Yu her name every 5 minutes they run to the village when he already knows. Idk jshdjffjjdrjdujffj fakkkkkkkk
So my sincere suggestion is that if you are fed up with : 1-sentient systems that constantly punish you by reading ur mind 2-clique female encounter 3-dumb mc 4-the most generic world background on webnovel 5-horrendous grammers don't waste ur time please at least its like this in the first 10 chapters
its good but kinda boring, and annoying i dont like the unnecessary question the mc ask. Also about how the system trying to conntrol the mc 😊😊😊😊
I don't usually write reviews, but this was so bad that I simply had to give it 1 star, the system is controlling and keeps away information that could easily be given to the mc, massively punishes him for stupid things like profanity (took away a whole 1000 points because of it when his reward was supposed to be 5000), I lost too many braincells reading this so I won't say any more.
Membuka SPOILER My patience was tested here. MC is dumb, he ask everything and anything like 'system what is 1+1' vibes. Its pretty annoying, are you really a transmigrator from Earth? The grammar was bearable but still terrible 🤦🏻♀️ MC is not awesome, nor op. He is worse than a canonfodder who only got lucky to have a system who replied back. Or else even if he has a system, he will still crawl on mud and died on hunger due to his stupidity .
I usually don't leave reviews, although I like pretty much any kingdom building/sect building novel, this is getting truly hard to read even with skipping and replacing, the last month the grammar has gotten drastically worst, I really recommend hiring a proof reader if your going to continue to charge per chapter until then I may have to drop this one until further notice.
very badly written too cliche there was no need for the girl, in the beginning, to be present or even be with the mc not being misogynistic but it's just too cliche I am starting to hate romance/harem in novels its just bad to me The system is way too controlling the MC doesn't fit the character of someone who should be the sect leader Everything is done too hastily
The premise was interesting as one of the few sect building stories on this platform, but the execution was ... questionable with a lot of grammatical errors and the story doesn't weave together well. The story has potential but the use of english was anything but well made
It is painful and frustrating to read. Painful because of the grammar. Frustrating because the MC is dumb and the System is annoying. Don't read it unless you enjoy bad grammar, dumb MCs and Systems who punish the MC for dumb reasons.
translation is honestly so bad that in order to read it I had to imagine that a child wrote it. after doing so it only made me realize that I shouldn't have to tolerate such a thing. This app charges people so much for each chapter and this is the quality of the content? Forget it.
The mc is an idiot....i only read until chapter 12 and give up because of that reason. Hate the annoying system that can talk bickering with mc concept
Well no. Not recomendet 1.) The first few chapter he gets already controlled by the system 2.) he gets reward reductions because he says his opinion about the systems action. 3.) the MC is dumb as heck
Good story and is eager to read next chapter. The flow is nicely written and character development is good. Describes each and every portion for the rise of the sect which is not mainly seen .Hope you can occasionally upload 2 chapters a day
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I'm sorry but the writing quality is quite low for the free chapters, and I'm not interested in spending coins to see if there is an improvement. story develops quite slow in the beginning , yet paradoxically self spoiling as well. character development is absolutely horrendous . mc seems so dumb that it's simply incredible he remembers how to inhale, and the system is unreasonable. don't do the captain America meme, penalties for swearing are beyond ridiculous, and considering the other absurd things the system has done I didn't care to continue reading past chapter 10, but I'm self honor bound to read all free chapters.
I think the writing quality is better than most mtls. I dont see whats the problem though. The plot is kinda average but its a good read though.
The story is good in my opinion but it needs work. Although it isn't the worst grammar I have seen in a story, it is far from the good either. I suggest the Author go back and fix the errors or get an editor for the story. The editor could be a reader or given by WebNovel because I think they can suggest editors. This isn't social media or a game where grammar doesn't matter much, it is a book/novel where ever errors can change how the story is read and confuse readers like when it kept saying "gun" when the MC was forging a sword and another time a spear.
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de verdad piensas que la gente va a pagar por leer 140 capitulos que persona tan optimista eres autor cuando se puede ir a otra pagina web a verla que no eres un autor famoso
Membuka SPOILER I would give less stars if I could, stupid system stupid MC stupid concept all around just a waste of time on everyone’ part... ….
Note to author: I haven't read this yet but there are a ton of negative reviews. Aye bro. Don't give up writing. It's like when we were little and used to try to tell grown ups our stories and things. At first we couldn't convey our messages clearly because we were too young. With more time and experience we learned how to express ourselves better. But even when we got a little older and learned how to say things more coherently our stories sometimes turned out to not be as grand as we thought them to be. Maybe this is like that. Don't give up.
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Estuvo muy bien hasta pasado el capítulo 300. Me centro más en la historia que en la gramática, pero llega un punto en que uno no entiende nada. La idea es muy buena y me habría gustado terminar de leer como avanza hasta lo más alto, pero no hay manera de seguir