i would love to see a more interaction of mc and ancient one. I would also like to see there friendship grow,rather than one die.
Slow development story. I like how the MC is not overpowered and it's werid. It's totally different take on Harry Potter
what happened, why suddenly stopped.
please continue this unlike the previous one don't stop it. The character and slow paced story is good.
Can we get an update on the chapters. It's real good
Mc is super rich but the drawback is that character depends much on the system rather than his own comprehension. Other than that there story for other characters also. Other than that pretty good start for a face slapping story.
Well, keep the chapters coming. it's good.
Average power level not the overpowered mc character. Good character definition and slow processing story. Mc know some part of the story but not full future. I hope the character development for side character also and not full of young master face slapping stories.
Story great from the start gives minimum background of the world and the character get a great character development as the story progresses. Only draw back is that after some 300 chapters you can't read the novel as it's full of grammatical error as it useless as we can't get the content of the story from that. Other than that it's a good story.
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original Dragon Ball - Asahi Life
This Novel is FanFiction of the Dragon Ball Universe. See how MC Asahi lives a Peaceful life in the chaotic Dragon ball universe1 Chs 2 Koleksi
Continue the good work. The author could go into details of various interactions and background of it
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