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Tulis ulasanoye viejo, tengo dos soluciones para que el prota se vuelva fisicamente digno de un prota generico 1: la fruta del diablo Sube Sube no Mi, fruta que convirtio a Alvida de one piece en una de las waifus mas hermosas del anime 2: Jugo Turbulento, sale en Rick y Morty, cable interdimencional
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour Β½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs Β½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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Hello. I must say that your fic really surprises me. I was looking for something like this and was surprised to find a good story. I hope you upload more chapters good job 10/10
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This story is depressing, the MC is dumb, indecisive, has strong indications of multiple personality, none of them decent, intelligent or charismatic, has nothing that brings the slightest support or emotional connection with this MC, you just follow the story as a single, waiting for the MC to improve or start making smart decisions, but he just follows the less logical and more difficult choices just to not take 1 step forward soon because "they'll notice" or "I regret doing things that it wasn't me who did it and I don't have any memories".
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Saw comedy tag and I had to read this... But I had to give up... way too much angst and drama for my taste. 2.0 Stars from me.
Hello Author-kun I only red it until chapter 13 right now, but my first impression is that it is a really awesome novel. It is also nice to see how the Mc wants to be good person. I would like to know in which chapter Kaguya and Ai Hayasaka are going to appear.
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The story isn't bad, it just the MC that too hateful for me. actually i want to give 1 stars because of mc character. I know that I'm only read this ff until 11 chapter, but there's no growth but down grade in mc chara. Too much dramas, inner conflict, emotional and anger disorder, maybe coward and stupid and many more negative characteristics. There's "COMEDY" TAG, but in 11 chapter there's no comedy but full of drama. Maybe Author thinks that MC need solid and cruel background, but keeping add dramas one after another and add mental breakdown isn't my favorite. So instead comedy, add "DRAMA" in your tag.
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Love the characters. I've been wanting to read novels with H characters from different sources treated right since they've been through so much. The only really good one I've read so far. Keep it up!
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Things drag on sooo much. The protagonist keeps having the same monologues every chapter. The idea is not bad, the execution is choppy though. The protagonist has no agency, and basically acts as the plot demands, or gets dragged by it.
Man, your story is really good...I know there will be a lot of people who will criticize your story because of the way the MC behaves. But she's cohesive hands as she should... and also doesn't fall for the cold, calculating MC's clichΓ© that they look like robot hands than humans. Good luck and get on with his job. ππππ
oye viejo, tengo dos soluciones para que el prota se vuelva fisicamente digno de un prota generico 1: la fruta del diablo Sube Sube no Mi, fruta que convirtio a Alvida de one piece en una de las waifus mas hermosas del anime 2: Jugo Turbulento, sale en Rick y Morty, cable interdimencional
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour Β½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs Β½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
You're a cool guy, at first you said it would just be to test your lemons and you managed to make a constant and fun work, along with the protagonist's evolution trying to adapt to this
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Hello. I must say that your fic really surprises me. I was looking for something like this and was surprised to find a good story. I hope you upload more chapters good job 10/10
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This story is depressing, the MC is dumb, indecisive, has strong indications of multiple personality, none of them decent, intelligent or charismatic, has nothing that brings the slightest support or emotional connection with this MC, you just follow the story as a single, waiting for the MC to improve or start making smart decisions, but he just follows the less logical and more difficult choices just to not take 1 step forward soon because "they'll notice" or "I regret doing things that it wasn't me who did it and I don't have any memories".
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Saw comedy tag and I had to read this... But I had to give up... way too much angst and drama for my taste. 2.0 Stars from me.
Hello Author-kun I only red it until chapter 13 right now, but my first impression is that it is a really awesome novel. It is also nice to see how the Mc wants to be good person. I would like to know in which chapter Kaguya and Ai Hayasaka are going to appear.
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The story isn't bad, it just the MC that too hateful for me. actually i want to give 1 stars because of mc character. I know that I'm only read this ff until 11 chapter, but there's no growth but down grade in mc chara. Too much dramas, inner conflict, emotional and anger disorder, maybe coward and stupid and many more negative characteristics. There's "COMEDY" TAG, but in 11 chapter there's no comedy but full of drama. Maybe Author thinks that MC need solid and cruel background, but keeping add dramas one after another and add mental breakdown isn't my favorite. So instead comedy, add "DRAMA" in your tag.
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good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
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Love the characters. I've been wanting to read novels with H characters from different sources treated right since they've been through so much. The only really good one I've read so far. Keep it up!
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Things drag on sooo much. The protagonist keeps having the same monologues every chapter. The idea is not bad, the execution is choppy though. The protagonist has no agency, and basically acts as the plot demands, or gets dragged by it.
Man, your story is really good...I know there will be a lot of people who will criticize your story because of the way the MC behaves. But she's cohesive hands as she should... and also doesn't fall for the cold, calculating MC's clichΓ© that they look like robot hands than humans. Good luck and get on with his job. ππππ
did the author drop this? i was enjoying the novel, please continue it, it's a good novel