Good, but some place and name are mistranslate. Littleroot is a town in Hoenn region, Mc live in Paldea, so maybe Mesagoza. The fish that mc sell are normal fish, so their name couldn't be a feebas, whiscash and fineon. Maybe you can name the fish with other random fish name
Even after all of that round, Tony still stupid and arrogant. I know that he's arrogant, but he always learns from his mistake. he makes a lot of mistakes in the quiz, but he never learns anything until now
Kinda disappointed, all of MC and aika doing are just replacing Tatsuya and Miyuki, stole all the highlights from anime. It's still Ok if something different happens or the dialog kinda different, but all the dialog and the event are the same as Canon. Even Mari accidents still happen and she still got some injuries that makes her couldn't perform in the mirage bat. Mc says that the competition is an important event for Tatsuya growth, but if he replacing all of his role, how can Tatsuya have some development just like in the canon? Really Disappointed
How about Alolan Ninetail and Gardevoir
Average, kinda boring in the naruto mission arc, then dropped because mc character I read this ff twice, then dropped this ff twice. The thing is mc character just unreasonable. In the start he is nobody that fail in his life, then he becomes arrogant and lunatics freak after he gets madara template. It's pretty easy for mc to feel offended, he will taunt and feel angry if other do something that different from what he want. The other minus point for me is almost nothing changes. Tony, Natasha ,Thor or other Avenger, all of them just the same as their movie, no power up or anything. Maybe the plots are slightly different but the rest is same. He became Tony friend but almost never help Tony to grow, just giving him some potion, that's all. I think that at least he can give some advice or other things so other chara can grow in power or character. Then his position in the plot just ridiculous, in some chapter he's in his school doing nothing, but suddenly he help Tony in Afgan, in some chapter he doing experiments in his lab, then suddenly he appeared in front of Daredevil and help him. The story kinda inconsistent, jump from one plot to another without any bridge. The plot of each movie just appeared one after another, but there's no bridge or premise, so the plot aren't connected in the story, just a single plot that force to fuses in the ff.
Pretty good, but the system is really horrible. The system is the minus point of this Ff, complicated, pricey and terrible. His only way to recharge his VIP is gathering energy from "Artifacts",like dragonbones etc. His daily login only provides mc with basic item and some currency, including summon scroll and ninjutsu scroll that really rare (1 or 2 per month). And that scroll only gives mc some fragments of chara or ninjutsu, isn't a complete chara. Even the 10 consecutive draw only provides Mc some A tier fragment not a full Chara. MC need a slots to summon his chara that used system gold currency to open it. His system really just a bottomless pit garbage gacha game. IMO, the ninja chara a bit to powerful, maybe because they fight against normal person. If MC is luckier with his system, or the system become more generous and not to complicated, maybe this ff will be better
Mc is dumb, always waiting for the enemy to attack before he beat them. Iruka is another useless person, able to detect SHIELD sniper from far away but got tricked in his own building
IMO, everything is good until Abomination battle, he used a weaker form but everything is under control and no nerf for other heroes. But after that is meh. He is OP, have a lot of OP supporters, so his drawback with Lizard and Hydra is unreasonable. The current plot is acceptable as long as Mc didn't act like a dumb person, but in this ch he's pathetic. He can't think of any reason and run around like a criminal. He literally have Ark, Zea and Azu, he have his own video to prove his innocent. He know X men, Avenger and Nick fury, all of them are important characters that have a lot of influence in society. Having Ark is more than enough to manipulate his information. So the drawback is unreasonable and a lot of people can't accept that.
Well, in faloo they only have 74ch, the last update is 11 March
Thanks for the mass chapters. 👍👍
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