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I have read 30+ chapter and i must say that its a good novel , the mc is dark but still care for people , the only bad thing is that we dont really know anything about the mc . I recommend this novel .😁
Best read ever came through Hope it continues to grow into glory Keep the chapters coming [img=recommend] Ooh please try to bring in his family its been awhile since I saw them Don't forget his cultivation its bad to see the Mc get mopped the floor with in cultivation Thanks for novel all in all its great
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Only thing I hate is that I the user is exclaiming the other out , instead of ! Which makes no sense whatsoever. Also whenever the person asks a question, the author puts , instead of ? Which is not how you use a comma in speech whatsoever. Other than that, amazing book.
If you don't have a good level of english then pass on this novel. Plenty of the words used are wrongly writen, especially the use of were - where - we're or your - you're - yours, etc. The use of ',' is also trashy. Writing quality is deplorable. That aside, characters dont really mean much emotionally. You see them, they die. Thoigh I have never read a novel with a main character like this so it's kinda nice. Cultivation is a mess but I dont really care personally. Never really paid attention to it. To me this novel is just to kill time and read without pondering too deeply while at the same time training your english to find spelling mistakes. cheers
I love the title of this novel monarch of the darkness Arsene just like the jokers persona Arsene good luck author I'm loving your novel Lord_Damocles
It is quite good but man change the description. It put me off immediately. If your trying to go make it seem weird in the beginning then sure.
Like majority of novels on this site, it starts out well only to become unbearable, cringy and embarrassing to read. Decent quality of writing, with little errors but poor sentence structure... 3 stars Updates are reliable... 3 stars Story development involves almost every single character trying to kill mc with no reason and mc fighting them in retaliation... so plot is nonexistent and in its place is the typical angst and drama associated with silly revenge novels... 1 star because I can't give zero Character design amounts to mc, fmc and everyone else... all characters beside mc and fmc have changes in behavior for plot convenience (eg: his parents who are rebellious turn meek and cowardly so that mc's enemies can attack him, all so that mc can have his edgy revenge arcs... yes they are only revenge arcs so far)... I give this 1 star otherwise i would give it zero Worldbuilding involves mentioning of location names... no place is described hence impossible to imagine... 2 stars
I really like the MC attitude but the pace of the story is too rushed, it dosen't give a break, all time high. Sometimes this is good but the high tension all time is tiresome.
I deleted my previous review because the author fixed the issues I talked about. I don't feel like writing a whole lot but overall it is good, and the best part is that the author takes criticism seriously. Ultimately it lead to see good character development and if you're anything like me characters come first as imo without a good cast of characters who the story revolves around even with the best fictional world written it will still fall short. Personally I've seen quite a few authors who tend to stay stubborn and believe they couldn't possibly have made any mistake so when I see one that can take the praises along with the criticism I am happy.
The writing quality of this novel is pretty good there are few times I’ve had to reread to understand something. The story makes sense but sometimes jumps around and does not give a lot of background to certian things. Most of the time it doesnt matter much however it would be nice to know for example the kingdom layout and surrounding territores explainations would be nice to know but not enTirely needed. Thats all I think could improve however I have never wroTe a novel so don’t take what I said to seriously.
you had me at the synopsis. wasn't sure how good it was going to be truly but it's actually one of the best stories I've read on here so far. can't wait for more
One of the best books i read on webnovel. MC has all the characteristics i like. Mostly MC that are described as evil are not evil but in this book i can say hes rly evil xD
making sure the author doesn't drop it before he reaches 200+ chapters atleast. once he does I will begin to read. see you in a couple months fellow readers.
The synopsis is just a masterpiece in itself i am looking forward to the content itself hahahaha but i expect it be deserving of my 5 stars
so far this book is very dark and.... unique in a horrifying way. which isn't a bad thing at all it is definitely a more unique and adventurous book that not any over story i have read had inclined.
This novel is one of the best On site hands down so many Writers fail to establish a romance that doesn’t make the Mc a simp or alows a side character to outshine the Mc, while at the same time The side characters have their own destiny and are not riding the coat tail of the Mc to gain power ups, his Potential girlfriend does not use him like in many stories on this site 😤🤷🏾♂️ she has her own goals and is just a ruthless as the Mc without out shining the Mc or slowing the the pace of the story down, you writers out there that Lie about ruthless Mcs in your description eat your hearts out 🖕🏾and leaRn something from this master writer 😁 world building need some work but other than that Great work 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
Hmm, an interesting story with an interesting MC and who seems like the FL is also intriguing though weird af, alas the story isn't advanced enough to know more yet. I will say though that there are some grammatical errors that are quite a pain sometimes, though not something that detracts from the story. I've no problem with the update stability, but the pacing seems off, like sometimes it's very fast other times it's excruciatingly slow. Also, fair warning for new readers, I believe that the author doesn't explain much of the world, background and other details that may seem important, it is frustrating af, but he seems to go by the "Give small snippets of information in time" approach, rather than explaining things sooner. As I said this is frustrating though bearable, for me at least, idk about others. Anyway, this is a story with great potential which honestly deserves a chance, though it seems to be obscured by others, I found it by accident myself.
great novel over all and a very interesting concept the grammer is not bad only few mistakes are made but the only problem that I face that sometimes I find my self lost a new charchter is introduced and I am supposed to know him ? and the time skips aren't that clear but every thing else is ok
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I'll give you a 4/5* right now because I haven't read yet, but ATM of the comment I'll be reading. can't wait because your summary got me interested and hooked
I like Dark novels with evil mC in them Plus the Canabalism Gives it an advantage oVer other novels if you keep him evil and not turn him into a bero and a good Mc it will beone of the bests. (You know Mc can eat his lovers literaly )
10 over 10. Reading this boon I got chills. the start is very intruiging and the plot progresses so nicely. [img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend] Update stability is my envy. Your dedication is absolutely amazing
Synopsis hooked me😂😂😂 So I thought why not. A great read. I hope ppl will give this one a chance and they should! A fantastic book actually All the best 🧡🧡🧡 Keep it up💓💓
I just wanna say the book is my personal favorite and I think the author has done a great job on writing this book. The book is perfect in my opinion.
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I have read 30+ chapter and i must say that its a good novel , the mc is dark but still care for people , the only bad thing is that we dont really know anything about the mc . I recommend this novel .😁
Best read ever came through Hope it continues to grow into glory Keep the chapters coming [img=recommend] Ooh please try to bring in his family its been awhile since I saw them Don't forget his cultivation its bad to see the Mc get mopped the floor with in cultivation Thanks for novel all in all its great
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Only thing I hate is that I the user is exclaiming the other out , instead of ! Which makes no sense whatsoever. Also whenever the person asks a question, the author puts , instead of ? Which is not how you use a comma in speech whatsoever. Other than that, amazing book.
If you don't have a good level of english then pass on this novel. Plenty of the words used are wrongly writen, especially the use of were - where - we're or your - you're - yours, etc. The use of ',' is also trashy. Writing quality is deplorable. That aside, characters dont really mean much emotionally. You see them, they die. Thoigh I have never read a novel with a main character like this so it's kinda nice. Cultivation is a mess but I dont really care personally. Never really paid attention to it. To me this novel is just to kill time and read without pondering too deeply while at the same time training your english to find spelling mistakes. cheers
I love the title of this novel monarch of the darkness Arsene just like the jokers persona Arsene good luck author I'm loving your novel Lord_Damocles
It is quite good but man change the description. It put me off immediately. If your trying to go make it seem weird in the beginning then sure.
Like majority of novels on this site, it starts out well only to become unbearable, cringy and embarrassing to read. Decent quality of writing, with little errors but poor sentence structure... 3 stars Updates are reliable... 3 stars Story development involves almost every single character trying to kill mc with no reason and mc fighting them in retaliation... so plot is nonexistent and in its place is the typical angst and drama associated with silly revenge novels... 1 star because I can't give zero Character design amounts to mc, fmc and everyone else... all characters beside mc and fmc have changes in behavior for plot convenience (eg: his parents who are rebellious turn meek and cowardly so that mc's enemies can attack him, all so that mc can have his edgy revenge arcs... yes they are only revenge arcs so far)... I give this 1 star otherwise i would give it zero Worldbuilding involves mentioning of location names... no place is described hence impossible to imagine... 2 stars
I really like the MC attitude but the pace of the story is too rushed, it dosen't give a break, all time high. Sometimes this is good but the high tension all time is tiresome.
I deleted my previous review because the author fixed the issues I talked about. I don't feel like writing a whole lot but overall it is good, and the best part is that the author takes criticism seriously. Ultimately it lead to see good character development and if you're anything like me characters come first as imo without a good cast of characters who the story revolves around even with the best fictional world written it will still fall short. Personally I've seen quite a few authors who tend to stay stubborn and believe they couldn't possibly have made any mistake so when I see one that can take the praises along with the criticism I am happy.
The writing quality of this novel is pretty good there are few times I’ve had to reread to understand something. The story makes sense but sometimes jumps around and does not give a lot of background to certian things. Most of the time it doesnt matter much however it would be nice to know for example the kingdom layout and surrounding territores explainations would be nice to know but not enTirely needed. Thats all I think could improve however I have never wroTe a novel so don’t take what I said to seriously.
you had me at the synopsis. wasn't sure how good it was going to be truly but it's actually one of the best stories I've read on here so far. can't wait for more
One of the best books i read on webnovel. MC has all the characteristics i like. Mostly MC that are described as evil are not evil but in this book i can say hes rly evil xD
making sure the author doesn't drop it before he reaches 200+ chapters atleast. once he does I will begin to read. see you in a couple months fellow readers.
The synopsis is just a masterpiece in itself i am looking forward to the content itself hahahaha but i expect it be deserving of my 5 stars
so far this book is very dark and.... unique in a horrifying way. which isn't a bad thing at all it is definitely a more unique and adventurous book that not any over story i have read had inclined.
This novel is one of the best On site hands down so many Writers fail to establish a romance that doesn’t make the Mc a simp or alows a side character to outshine the Mc, while at the same time The side characters have their own destiny and are not riding the coat tail of the Mc to gain power ups, his Potential girlfriend does not use him like in many stories on this site 😤🤷🏾♂️ she has her own goals and is just a ruthless as the Mc without out shining the Mc or slowing the the pace of the story down, you writers out there that Lie about ruthless Mcs in your description eat your hearts out 🖕🏾and leaRn something from this master writer 😁 world building need some work but other than that Great work 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
Hmm, an interesting story with an interesting MC and who seems like the FL is also intriguing though weird af, alas the story isn't advanced enough to know more yet. I will say though that there are some grammatical errors that are quite a pain sometimes, though not something that detracts from the story. I've no problem with the update stability, but the pacing seems off, like sometimes it's very fast other times it's excruciatingly slow. Also, fair warning for new readers, I believe that the author doesn't explain much of the world, background and other details that may seem important, it is frustrating af, but he seems to go by the "Give small snippets of information in time" approach, rather than explaining things sooner. As I said this is frustrating though bearable, for me at least, idk about others. Anyway, this is a story with great potential which honestly deserves a chance, though it seems to be obscured by others, I found it by accident myself.
great novel over all and a very interesting concept the grammer is not bad only few mistakes are made but the only problem that I face that sometimes I find my self lost a new charchter is introduced and I am supposed to know him ? and the time skips aren't that clear but every thing else is ok
I love this novel ❣💞 ..... ..................................... ......... ................................. .............................................................................................................................
I'll give you a 4/5* right now because I haven't read yet, but ATM of the comment I'll be reading. can't wait because your summary got me interested and hooked
I like Dark novels with evil mC in them Plus the Canabalism Gives it an advantage oVer other novels if you keep him evil and not turn him into a bero and a good Mc it will beone of the bests. (You know Mc can eat his lovers literaly )
10 over 10. Reading this boon I got chills. the start is very intruiging and the plot progresses so nicely. [img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend] Update stability is my envy. Your dedication is absolutely amazing
Synopsis hooked me😂😂😂 So I thought why not. A great read. I hope ppl will give this one a chance and they should! A fantastic book actually All the best 🧡🧡🧡 Keep it up💓💓
I just wanna say the book is my personal favorite and I think the author has done a great job on writing this book. The book is perfect in my opinion.