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I'd like how you utilize your words to express explosive thoughts. Good job! Also, it's well written not too fast and not too slow. Keep up the good work! Your book is a masterpiece!
I've already added it to my list after reading the first three chapters. I like the way you twisted the tropes. The writing style is smooth and easy on the eye, nothing wrong with other than few punctuations mistakes that I noticed. The descriptions were vivid and easy to understand bringing the colour to the writing. My only advise is that- dark humour is quite hard to write, if you wrote something wrong it might hurt someone's feelings so be keep that in mind. Overall it's a goodread, I was reminded of konosuba reading it.
Loving this story so far. This work is proof that strong characters make stories worth reading. The protagonist is a fantastic character and is a blast to follow. The humor from his twisted world views and personality make each chapter such an entertaining read. Loved how he talked back to the demon after his death. I also never thought I could find so much amusement in reading a chapter about a baby in his mother's womb, but here you have it. As for the story itself, it is certainly a unique one and I look forward to seeing where it goes in future installments. The author seems to have a clear idea of where he is taking it. From a technical standpoint, this is a well-written work with little to no errors I could notice and the prose flows nicely, making for easy reading. Great original story that is well worth checking out.
Here are my thoughts! Firstly, the style of writing the author has is really pleasant to read! It flows nicely, and has just the right amount of description that doesn't bog you down with too many details. The main character is an absolute gem: they are witty, dark, humerous and it was really enjoyable following their blazon antics. I think the plot ia also great, and the world building behind it is well thought out. I was really impressed with how fleshed out this story was when I read it. My only critique is a few gramatical errors, but other than that, great work!
Loving it so far, the main character is hilariously dark. Not a lot of world building in the firat two chapters, but what is there is structurally sounds and pulls the story along. There are some grammar/writing errors. It’s not enough to distract from the story and is easily fixed with a quick edit later. I’m waiting for him to pick back up his canabalistic ways.
Great pacing! Great storytelling. I am truly enjoying reading this novel. It's one hell of a journey. Characters are relatable, especially the MC Arsene. Emoions are there too. I would want to follow him and his journey along. There are a bit of typos here and there but it does not affect the readability that much. Some passages have a poetic tone to it, which i believe, added flavor to the novel. I don't usually read ML-leading novels or cultivation novel but this one has captured my attention. I will surely read on. Its quite fascinating. 🤗
I'd like how you utilize your words to express explosive thoughts. Good job! Also, it's well written not too fast and not too slow. Keep up the good work! Your book is a masterpiece!
I've already added it to my list after reading the first three chapters. I like the way you twisted the tropes. The writing style is smooth and easy on the eye, nothing wrong with other than few punctuations mistakes that I noticed. The descriptions were vivid and easy to understand bringing the colour to the writing. My only advise is that- dark humour is quite hard to write, if you wrote something wrong it might hurt someone's feelings so be keep that in mind. Overall it's a goodread, I was reminded of konosuba reading it.
Loving this story so far. This work is proof that strong characters make stories worth reading. The protagonist is a fantastic character and is a blast to follow. The humor from his twisted world views and personality make each chapter such an entertaining read. Loved how he talked back to the demon after his death. I also never thought I could find so much amusement in reading a chapter about a baby in his mother's womb, but here you have it. As for the story itself, it is certainly a unique one and I look forward to seeing where it goes in future installments. The author seems to have a clear idea of where he is taking it. From a technical standpoint, this is a well-written work with little to no errors I could notice and the prose flows nicely, making for easy reading. Great original story that is well worth checking out.
Here are my thoughts! Firstly, the style of writing the author has is really pleasant to read! It flows nicely, and has just the right amount of description that doesn't bog you down with too many details. The main character is an absolute gem: they are witty, dark, humerous and it was really enjoyable following their blazon antics. I think the plot ia also great, and the world building behind it is well thought out. I was really impressed with how fleshed out this story was when I read it. My only critique is a few gramatical errors, but other than that, great work!
Loving it so far, the main character is hilariously dark. Not a lot of world building in the firat two chapters, but what is there is structurally sounds and pulls the story along. There are some grammar/writing errors. It’s not enough to distract from the story and is easily fixed with a quick edit later. I’m waiting for him to pick back up his canabalistic ways.
Great pacing! Great storytelling. I am truly enjoying reading this novel. It's one hell of a journey. Characters are relatable, especially the MC Arsene. Emoions are there too. I would want to follow him and his journey along. There are a bit of typos here and there but it does not affect the readability that much. Some passages have a poetic tone to it, which i believe, added flavor to the novel. I don't usually read ML-leading novels or cultivation novel but this one has captured my attention. I will surely read on. Its quite fascinating. 🤗