Traveling Through the Multiverse as a Chimera Ant

LV 4

amaturewriter

Whilst the writing is good and legible, the character interactions are all forced as fk. Within less than hrs of meeting the characters act as though they knew each other for yrs and are too trusting. I mean even in the OG they took time, and every main cadt went through their own arc/mini arc to form a basic bond. None of that is here and its all rushed

LV 4

MassDestruction

Another wasted potential. Liked the begining, but after MC starts meeting humans it gets cringe. After MC meets Nami be goes from Yeager to Babysitter. Then the harem ruins the story completely. Harems are fine if they are done right. But rushed and pointless harems like this...🙅‍♂️🤦‍♂️. Don't waste your time, read something better.

LV 11

Allhavens

The story started awesome. Until he takes a system and became a slave of it. As if that weren't enough, he now has to stay with nami's slut, just give her some coins and **** her ass. Don't be a beta male. She already showed her naked body for some money as in the case of Alabasta and i doubt she get the money too. If you're going to **** her, just pay her a little more, you don't have to act like Sanji. There is no need to be your hunting dog. I hate these MCs who think with the dick!!! "Don't worry, beauty, I'll kill him for you! You can't get on the ship, get on me first, I'm your eternal slave, beauty." Characters like sanji are disgusting to see. Where was the proud kimera ant? Like an animal, meeting females would be just to breed, not to be a fucking beta man. How disappointing

LV 14

Jasonenrick

Well......5-Stars, huh.....I like the Pic, makes me remember " God of Slaugther" and I loved the Novel!

LV 4

DearCompanion

the intercour** part is skipped. guess he's just doing it with another b**ch. good luck with that but i don't want to waste my time reading just another stupid mc

LV 3

Overwrit

The story at first looked pretty good, but it was just an illusion. The truth is that the whole plot of the story is incredibly forced and superficial, like a generic fanfic or anime that they take at random, all that "love" that happens is quite garbage and forced, you can't really feel anything for the characters because they are like empty shells, if it weren't an OP fanfic for almost all of them they would have almost no personality. Now we have that weird change in the stats that I have no idea if they made it weaker or still the same, but it was pretty confusing, and it didn't make much sense. In general the only good thing about this is the grammar and updates.

LV 6

FAP_Master_

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LV 5

Just_ForFun

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LV 12

Silver_Epsilon

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LV 6

Kurumi21

Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

LV 4

madman1010

has good grammer he is strong alpha dominant which is great no beta male good plot and good story progression 👌👍

LV 4

Hardkel

very good novel at least for now . . .

LV 4

ravhage

nice....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 13

Min_May_Loe

This is really good. A new idea and writing quality is very much appealing. I believe, the idea has come from Chrystalis. Read it. I believe you will enjoy it.

LV 14

Guest999

Thats pretty good....... .......................... ... . . .. ...........................................................................

LV 2

Sesshomaru_

The story is not that bad people complaining about a "beta" seems to be mad at the fact that he doesn't rape people. The interactions could've been done better but otherwise it was a decent read

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

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Master_0ogway

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