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Quand le système dit qu'il peut invoquer n'importe quoi je m'attendais à ça qu'il soit aléatoire ça aurait été plus fun. Mais bon c'est dommage
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I don't quite like the system and the personality of the main character is unbearable sometimes he looks a lot like the typical main character you complain about anyway you did a great job building the world and the personalities
I honestly want to like this work. I am into multi anime mash ups and the likes. But just a few chapter down it is getting unbearable. Unreasonable punishment system that does not particularly helps mc. Now speaking of the MC, also a few chapters and it shows right away that this have beta MC. Now I have a lot more to say but those are I supposed what I call my own preferences, so for other people just read it and give your own review. For author...you did a great job with the story flow. I just really dont appreciate Beta MC and Unreasonable Punishment in Systems
hi really wait for your story to have a few More chapters to return to read It and since i started It love It i wanted yo know if you would give permission yo translate It into spanish on Wattpad by the way i love the harem you created
novel ini sangat bangus samlai saya tidak bisa mengungkapkan dengan kata kata lanjutkan thor .
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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Author I have a offer. How about you hire me as your editor for free of course and I can fix all the grammar mistakes. This novel can become better, so please reply.
I have been reading this fic for sometime now, I can say that if you don't have high expectations (honestly just go with the flow) then this one is truly enjoyable with waifus and everything in between. Further more there are lolis and all type of waifus from different anime in this, even the ones I never thought would one day appear in fanfics so props to you author-san for giving birth to such a fic and I hope to see it being continue for a long time.
Well I thought that I found an interesting story but it's just so frustrating that I was going to throw away my phone. The mc is an idiot and a lolicon and beta (this is the first time I ever used the word and that is saying something.) And than the system, its just plain annoying/hateable.
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the writer who doesn't want his MC to be an op, in chapter 446 he weakens the MC with a very silly reason. basically the author doesn't want the MC to be the OP
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It's really frustrating to see how the MC doesn't have a character development and when he has a point of reflection nothing ever happens, it's very annoying to read this without being angry with the MC.
This novels needs some serious rewriting , it has lots of grammatical mistakes and it has many words mistakes ,ex - i already die , while author or translator could have written I have already died ,depends on the situation which you're describing as.
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This ff has issues with basic grammar and spelling. It feels like it went through auto correct system. On the other hand, it has huge world.I'm amazed by how many world combinec in this. It even mention a bit from game genre such starcraft and warcraft. I can't imagine how the heck it will use isekai genre in the same world. This is my most favourite aspect of this ff. I'm waiting eagerly how author will mixed it up in logical way. As can be seen, this is a harem and its ever growing harem will make it difficult to keep track who is who. I discouraged those who are not fond of harem. The MC is not someone who treats them badly or as spare or as accessories but instead he will be ordered around by his harem occasionally. Another minus point for others who dislike harem. It's selling point for the comedy is how the system treat MC as butt of joke. System often mess with MC especially in regards to loli and yandere. Yup, it's loli and yandere!!!
I tried to read it, I realy did, but the grammar just makes it unreadable and it does not improve. Therefore acting according to the age old tradition on webnovel (it's a 5 or a 1)I give it a 1.
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At first it was an entertaining read, but then everything became monotonous, the MC was looking for new girls when he was already 10 waiting for him, and new girls would arrive and enter a relationship before the old ones, the MC was just a boxer jacket for everyone and there was no character development, and I read over 300 chapters so I know what I'm talking about...
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Quand le système dit qu'il peut invoquer n'importe quoi je m'attendais à ça qu'il soit aléatoire ça aurait été plus fun. Mais bon c'est dommage
Semangat....................................................................................................................................
I don't quite like the system and the personality of the main character is unbearable sometimes he looks a lot like the typical main character you complain about anyway you did a great job building the world and the personalities
I honestly want to like this work. I am into multi anime mash ups and the likes. But just a few chapter down it is getting unbearable. Unreasonable punishment system that does not particularly helps mc. Now speaking of the MC, also a few chapters and it shows right away that this have beta MC. Now I have a lot more to say but those are I supposed what I call my own preferences, so for other people just read it and give your own review. For author...you did a great job with the story flow. I just really dont appreciate Beta MC and Unreasonable Punishment in Systems
hi really wait for your story to have a few More chapters to return to read It and since i started It love It i wanted yo know if you would give permission yo translate It into spanish on Wattpad by the way i love the harem you created
novel ini sangat bangus samlai saya tidak bisa mengungkapkan dengan kata kata lanjutkan thor .
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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Author I have a offer. How about you hire me as your editor for free of course and I can fix all the grammar mistakes. This novel can become better, so please reply.
I have been reading this fic for sometime now, I can say that if you don't have high expectations (honestly just go with the flow) then this one is truly enjoyable with waifus and everything in between. Further more there are lolis and all type of waifus from different anime in this, even the ones I never thought would one day appear in fanfics so props to you author-san for giving birth to such a fic and I hope to see it being continue for a long time.
Well I thought that I found an interesting story but it's just so frustrating that I was going to throw away my phone. The mc is an idiot and a lolicon and beta (this is the first time I ever used the word and that is saying something.) And than the system, its just plain annoying/hateable.
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Membuka SPOILER the writer who doesn't want his MC to be an op, in chapter 446 he weakens the MC with a very silly reason. basically the author doesn't want the MC to be the OP
Honestly this is better than Ur other story I love it. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's really frustrating to see how the MC doesn't have a character development and when he has a point of reflection nothing ever happens, it's very annoying to read this without being angry with the MC.
This novels needs some serious rewriting , it has lots of grammatical mistakes and it has many words mistakes ,ex - i already die , while author or translator could have written I have already died ,depends on the situation which you're describing as.
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This ff has issues with basic grammar and spelling. It feels like it went through auto correct system. On the other hand, it has huge world.I'm amazed by how many world combinec in this. It even mention a bit from game genre such starcraft and warcraft. I can't imagine how the heck it will use isekai genre in the same world. This is my most favourite aspect of this ff. I'm waiting eagerly how author will mixed it up in logical way. As can be seen, this is a harem and its ever growing harem will make it difficult to keep track who is who. I discouraged those who are not fond of harem. The MC is not someone who treats them badly or as spare or as accessories but instead he will be ordered around by his harem occasionally. Another minus point for others who dislike harem. It's selling point for the comedy is how the system treat MC as butt of joke. System often mess with MC especially in regards to loli and yandere. Yup, it's loli and yandere!!!
I tried to read it, I realy did, but the grammar just makes it unreadable and it does not improve. Therefore acting according to the age old tradition on webnovel (it's a 5 or a 1)I give it a 1.
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At first it was an entertaining read, but then everything became monotonous, the MC was looking for new girls when he was already 10 waiting for him, and new girls would arrive and enter a relationship before the old ones, the MC was just a boxer jacket for everyone and there was no character development, and I read over 300 chapters so I know what I'm talking about...