Well, the author and the character's desire should of course be different from each other. The essential factor is for the narrative to push towards that genuine side.
So yeah, for Adam…. The only choices he would accept were having a harem, or not having a romantic partner at all
Anime & Comics · AdamFlores
I mean, it's already OOC when you decided to write Rimuru to originally be female. Because of this, there is very little to derive from Base Rimuru's personality. I’ve seen many fics that make minimal changes to naturally genderbent characters, which ruins the excitement, so it’s better to just go along with your current formula for this Rimuru. However, it would be nice if you could present something beyond the typical otaku shy girl archetype in the future for her, author-san.
If the slime's way of acting is too OOC... Then point it out, and suggest how I should write her differently
Anime & Comics · AdamFlores
Kazuma's face would physically twist in itself if he ever got a whiff of this.
"That is exactly right, my dear Rimuru!" His grin came back full force on his face as he spread his arms "I am sacrificing my body, my dignity, and my purity so hundreds of thousands of people would survive the catastrophe that is called a Honkai Eruption!"
Anime & Comics · AdamFlores
Oh, that might be an interesting detail to keep in mind when Adam is back in Honkai, author-san. After all, I do love some drama to spice things up in the least expected moments, and with Mei's instability, it would be like a volcano waiting to erupt.
"Well…" He spoke up after all these thoughts flashed in his mind for in the split of a second "She is a girl that will destroy a city…. So I am just using love to calm her down"
Anime & Comics · AdamFlores
Alas, there still needs to be something genuine among them, or it will just turn into another pokemon-catching harem story like many fics out there.
So yeah, for Adam…. The only choices he would accept were having a harem, or not having a romantic partner at all
Anime & Comics · AdamFlores
No! Don't remind of those horrible Wuxias where the MC just left his lovers back in the lower worlds after he ascended for like thousands of chapters.
Not only that… But in that case, that one romantic partner would eventually just be extra baggage. Adam would eventually surpass her- if he already hadn't
Anime & Comics · AdamFlores
It's called simple observation.
What nonsense is this romantic(not) slime talking about?
Anime & Comics · AdamFlores
I'm quite sure this girl read Twilight or something similar to it in her previous life.
"Just imagine it:" She looked at him with eyes glowing "It's night, the moon is shining on the horizon. And upon a giant dragon, we are flying under the stars, the world beneath us... it sounds so dreamy!"
Anime & Comics · AdamFlores
Who could know what thoughts lay behind that head of his?
Shiraori is a spider, so what bad thoughts could Adam have towards her?
Anime & Comics · AdamFlores
I couldn’t really answer those two former questions of yours, author-san. Isekai characters are just too similar to me in general, especially when they are part of the “overpowered” or “destined to be overpowered” variant. Would you consider that to be the far side of bias? Likely, yes. Regardless, for the third question, I’d say you did quite a good job with Rimuru’s current character. Although it might be suitable to add more feminine aspects to her as time goes on or during this date between her and Adam if you’re planning on extending it to the next chapter. After all, there is still a distinctive gap between the thought processes of a female and a male, no matter how much their interests align. Ultimately, there is no point in being canon-compliant when it comes to the characteristics of Rimuru for this story, in my opinion. It’s far better to be dynamic.
If the slime's way of acting is too OOC... Then point it out, and suggest how I should write her differently
Honkai impact: Dimensional Herrscher
Anime & Comics · AdamFlores