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become I dont like the ending of a certain manga, I made this fun-fic and i want to re-write what happens.
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what will happen if you transmigration to another world where all kinds of anime character are in same world.
Sister is Mikan Yūki from To-Love-Ru
Mother is Yasuko Takasu from Toradora
Childhood friend is Rikka Takanashi from Chuunibyou demo Koi ga Shitai!
The teacher is Gozaburo Seto from My bride is a mermaid
While he has a bunch of finance that his grandfather decides for him.
The world is full of aliens, demons, angels and another extraordinary being that normal in this world.
Where people have the ability treats as a genius while normal people become cannon fodder.
How can he survive the world if he only has System Summon that is i responsible?
Mc: System, why my summon, is only a Lolli vampire? wheres the sexy oneesan?
System: You just need to help the Lolli vampier to grow and transformed her into a sexy oneesan.
Mc: System why every time i summon my minions I always get a mini version of them?
System: What do you mean host?
Mc angry shout: Lolli Vampier, Lilli Mermaid, Lolli Dragon you even summon a tuns-tuns Lolli Princess! are you going to make me a father of all of this kids!
System: Host please help hem grow adn evolve to god-like being!
Mc smash the table and angry shout," Godly being!! after that happen I'm already dead!!
System warning! The host need to help them to grow strong if not the system will reduce the size of host bird!
Mc: !@#@$@#$%
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Note: The cover is not mine, i only copy it in google.
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Tulis ulasanI want to like this story but I can't, it was good until that Nobuna girl appear, acting unreasonable despite being the school principle, calling the MC trash and try to kill him cus she doesn't like that they're engage, for fck's sake, it wasn't him that decide it, and worst of all, MC tolerate it, I'm done.
Membuka SPOILERDon't read this if you don't llikeannoying,useless system and a sissy weak mc that only knows how to get saved by woman everytime. The mc is like issei in highschool dxd but the mc is more sissy . And author likes making mc suffer from girls everytime so don't waste your time on this. You will just get mad
i like the story but MC is a pussy. the MC is coward. .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
At first I thought 'Ok lets read something new' then I found this novel. I thought that 'The rating is good.....views are good and the summary is also intreasting'. Then I read the first chapter which was not so bad then second....Ok lets see.....then third....later chapters maybe good.....then for about 50 chapter and came to a realisation that this novel is ****. THE END
MC weak AF .................................................................... .....................................................................
I think if you like weak-willed and stupid MC then this is milking you. There is no real plot here, various anime universes are mixed here without a normal level of power. There are several grammatical mistakes. That's all. I was able to read about 20+ chapters, then there is not enough patience. Thank you for attention!
MC is a pu*sy.. If you want to see this MC getting beaten by heroines then read... * Author has serious Machoist tendency... Worst Harem novel ever..
I'm sorry for giving this rate but I really can't take it anymore. First of all writing quality, I'm dying because the author can't differentiate between his/her. You should try editing your story before continuing, it's killing me. I already saw some comments that want to correct you but you never edited them for your future readers which is a bad move for me. There are a lot of people who are not good at English grammar but please know basic grammar things. Next is the story development, the story development is good at first but I got bored when I reach the 300+ chapter. The MC hmm, I don't like him. It looks like he's always playful which is what I don't like. Updating Stability, I once read it before but I also stopped but I think it's slow. World Background, everything was good but you can't simply just mixed it. Too much Anime World in one place. I can't remember who's who.
I think this story is interesting but like most normal people I absolutely positively 100% loathe the most disgusting character of this novel Nobub*tch you can try writing some backstory or try to make her human but everyone who's normal will never see her as anything but the trash character she is
In general, everything is fine, but there is a huge minus in this fafic and it’s Nobun’s whole fafic that ruined his relationship with her, I don’t even know what to say, I suggested that this could happen, but it was disgusting to read, you’re not a grateful person . Onadera and Haruna loved him longer they were in the ranks longer they supported him when he was garbage when everyone except his mother turned his back on him (Mikan also wrote in one of the chapters something like that gg is weak and garbage, but he woke up), which he did his family when he suffered? nothing that his bride did? just watched and angry at him for being weak, what did his bride do when they met? she almost killed him, she humiliated him and when everything became good when he woke up when he became stronger, she suddenly decides to help him by sending a tutor, and even worse, she tells him that he got a mistress ??? wtf what kind of crap is she her lover, and besides she must accept them that they could officially be together? I'm sorry, what? What the hell shouldn't Onader and Harun have to take her? And now the author decides to do so what the ****? (p.s all that I wrote was purely my personal opinion)
Consider these characters from these worlds: - "·strike the blood·" = (https://strike-the-blood.fandom.com/wiki/La_Folia_Rihavein). - ·Shinmai Maō no Keiyakusha· = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse). - fairi tail = (https://fairytail.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich),(https://fairytail.fandom.com/wiki/Irene_Belserion). - naruto = kushina uzumaki and mikoto uchiha ,(https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Konan). - bleach = (https://bleach.fandom.com/wiki/Rukia_Kuchiki). - shakugan no shana = (https://shakugan.fandom.com/wiki/Shana). - one piece = (https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Boa_Hancock). - fate stay nigh = (https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/stay_night)). - Rosario + Vampire = (https://rosariovampire.fandom.com/wiki/Moka_Akashiya). - soul eater = (https://souleater.fandom.com/wiki/Maka_Albarn). - nanatsu no Tazai = 'gelda' , (https://nanatsu-no-taizai.fandom.com/wiki/Merlin). - hischold of the dead = shisuka , saya ,(https://hotd.fandom.com/wiki/Saeko_Busujima) - damanchi = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/wiki/Ais_Wallenstein). - shingeki no kyojin = (https://shingeki-no-kyojin.fandom.com/wiki/Mikasa_Ackerman). - "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei"= (https://mahouka-koukou-no-rettousei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Shiba_Miyuki). - "·TO LOVE RU·" = (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lala_Satalin_Deviluke) , (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Momo_Belia_Deviluke). -"·Date a live·" = (https://date-a-live.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters). -·Trinity Seven· = (https://trinity-seven.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lilith_Asami). -·Infinite Stratos·= (https://infinitestratos.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Infinite_Stratos). -·Sword Art Online·= (https://swordartonline.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Sword_Art_Online). -·Campione!·= (https://thecampione.fandom.com/wiki/Campione!_Wiki). -·Dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru ni Darou ka· = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/es/wiki/DanMachi_Wiki). -"·Sekirey·"= (https://sekirei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Sekirei). -·Seirei tsukai no blade dance· = (https://seirei-tsukai-no-blade-dance.fandom.com/es/wiki/Restia_Ashdoll). -(https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/). etc
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Well I thought that I found an interesting story but it's just so frustrating that I was going to throw away my phone. The mc is an idiot and a lolicon and beta (this is the first time I ever used the word and that is saying something.) And than the system, its just plain annoying/hateable.
Writing quality is meh. It's got some confusing wording rarely and there are some grammar mistakes. There isn't really much of a story. The author tries to take the comedic route while writing but tends to over-exagerate on most parts. For example the MC is basically a slave to his system since the punishments are usually things the MC doesn't want to happen to him(eg. humiliation, physical adjustment of the top of my head), it's basically the driving force of the story with the body's past affecting what the MC does(social circle). It tends to get annoying if you are looking for a proper story or if you don't like anime comedy (tsunderes, comedic girl hitting guy, etc.). And the system does basically anything it can to make the MC miserable(eg. new soul likes grown up girls so system tends to give the MC summons with lolis, extreme punishments). The characters go with over-exagerated personalities(violent tsundere, over-exagerating MC; the type to yell 'he likes bishoujo and not loli) and the MC is influenced with the past memories of the body he inhabits, so he likes lolis but hates lolis. Other characters don't feel that real except for that one character trait you remember them by, so like tsundere, trusting, honest, overly-perverted, etc. The world could be developed a lot more, it's basically a mashup of a lot of anime with some things being the core. Overall I do think it can be great but with how it is I honestly just get annoyed reading it, some might like it, but I don't.
It's really frustrating to see how the MC doesn't have a character development and when he has a point of reflection nothing ever happens, it's very annoying to read this without being angry with the MC.
I tried to read it, I realy did, but the grammar just makes it unreadable and it does not improve. Therefore acting according to the age old tradition on webnovel (it's a 5 or a 1)I give it a 1.
Despite that the quality of the writing is only about 2 stars, its not to the extent that readers cannot read. The story is very funny and uses lots of differents animes in unexpected ways... its really funny and entertaining. So i just had to read all current chapters at once.... if only it could get an editor or if the author uses grammatically or similar it qould drastically improve the readers experience
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