Breaking Limits: A DBZ Fan-fic

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Commonnerfer

If this is like anything to be a hero, then I know I will love it. So just waiting to the chapter count gets higher so I can binge it. I have to do that a lot because the amount of times i end up rereading entire stories because I forgot characters and the plot. Especially if it’s like 1 time a week upload. Can’t wait to read it though.

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S1m0nW1rt3

This is a very goooooooooooood fanfiction!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue writing !!!!!!!!!!!!! I LIKE THE OC BECAUSE ITS A NEW TYPE OF FANFICTION I HAVENT SEEN BEFORE!

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Otakubro

Aahhh why cant there be like 1000 chapters if there was ide binge till i drop lol........................................................................................................................................

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GhastlyWolf

If I wrote something like this... It would run parallel with the anime. Where Goku would meet his long lost older sister "Kumiko" after the defeat of Frieza. I have no intention of making cross-overs, kinda defeats the purpose of the lore of the anime/manga. But I do find inspiration from other writer's works.

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Henrion

This isn't bad, but it's not good either. The writing quality is great, and it's updated frequently. There are a couple of things that drag the story down though. Firstly, the protagonist's progression. The protagonist is growing strong very fast, but that's not the main issue. She's quickly befriending characters, and getting things from them. Other that that, they have no effect on the plot. It makes them feel two dimensional, like their only purpose in the story is to make the protagonist stronger. Secondly, the romance feels rushed. There's very little chemistry between the protagonist and the main love interest. It became more common shortly before they started behaving intimately. I can see there was an attempt at making it gradual, but the change still felt sudden, and broke my immersion. This is a good way to pass the time, if you haven't got anything better to read. I'll continue reading it, since it's got potential. I hope it improves in the future.

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DaoMaster1091

Just really boring.......i have read many dragon ball fanfictions but i am seeing a trend that they are all so boring. They find themselves in DBZ world, train to up their power level, eat, fight bad guys, train to up their power level, etcetera.

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Adalwulf

I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! I love the plot and constant interesting events. I am also happy that there is one more great lesbian romance online as well. It's a combination of most of my favorite genres! Sure, it could be better, but I love it so far and I'm really looking forward to further updates.

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Farah_ageeli

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homeofthelostqueen

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homeofthelostqueen

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PUJIT_FADTE_9415

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meldor1991

I love this novel, I mean it’s a female saiyan for change and above all the romance is pretty believable. Somehow I think that the power progression isn’t as fast paced as in other novel of it’s kind, but is still taking advantage of the future knowledge.

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SioMino

Ah, I must say that I really enjoy this novel the most out of your other novels (doesn’t stop me from reading them though they are still good). Anyways, just something about this novel makes me kind of wish it was complete so I can binge read it a few times. However, just waiting for each chapter to come out each time is also good since I keep on refreshing Webnovel hoping that another chapter would be out so I can read it immediately. The romance is picking up in the latest chapter which was something I was looking for. Also, on Bulma and Sarada character design is going to flow throughout the story. Anyways, keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming!

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FairyDragoon

I Love this great book. An Interesting OC Main Character. Unique Storyline ///////////////////////////////////////////// ………………………………………./ ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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Peter_Corney

when are you going to update your stories

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Rehman_Muneeb

good novel but please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 don't drop it 🥺

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Chelsea2valve

really want some more of this but amazing overall

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EmeraldMage

Archer, are you alright? I'm pretty worried you haven't been seen in years.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Zubzas

It is a great fanfic but the mc is like broli but not even close to how powerful he is even though she trains so much and has so many talents oof